that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking
tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.
no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too
Last edited by Kaze; 05-01-2012 at 07:40 PM.
no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well
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it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.
Sep 2010
April 2012
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no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r
also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now
Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.
both pretty sloppy, plenty of mistakes. seconds a work in progress.![]()
i like the set of E's in the first one
A little thing i made up for a friend how is it?
Last edited by getpaiddaily; 05-01-2012 at 09:38 PM.
Nice shopping cart neer
that first one isnt even bad yo
But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking
I hate iPhones. Autocorrect I grammar-retarded.
FULL grammar retard.
thanks no sleep.
Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.
Last edited by BigFaggot; 05-01-2012 at 09:58 PM.
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