no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well
it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.
no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r
also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now
Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.
both pretty sloppy, plenty of mistakes. seconds a work in progress.
i like the set of E's in the first one
A little thing i made up for a friend how is it?
Last edited by getpaiddaily; 05-01-2012 at 10:38 PM.
Nice shopping cart neer
that first one isnt even bad yo
But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking
I hate iPhones. Autocorrect I grammar-retarded.
thanks no sleep.
Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.
Last edited by BigFaggot; 05-01-2012 at 10:58 PM.
Mild, you never said you WON'T take the bet, so therefore you owe me 5 dollaz.