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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well

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    it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
    before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.

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    ight ill take what you said into consideration, when i have some more time ill upload afew more pictures

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    also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now

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    Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DaFugg View Post
    Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.
    shit ****** you just went full on retard. never go full on retard.

    and no-sleep, atta be.
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    both pretty sloppy, plenty of mistakes. seconds a work in progress. Name:  Photo0056.jpg
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    i like the set of E's in the first one

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    A little thing i made up for a friend how is it?
    Last edited by getpaiddaily; 05-01-2012 at 09:38 PM.

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    Nice shopping cart neer
    that first one isnt even bad yo
    But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking
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    Kill your self isn't a crit
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    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie
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    trust me. It makes you look stuepid.

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    I hate iPhones. Autocorrect I grammar-retarded.

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    FULL grammar retard.

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    thanks no sleep.
    Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mildstyles View Post
    Nice shopping cart neer
    that first one isnt even bad yo
    But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking
    Its a dog kennel. I'll put $5 on it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Its a dog kennel. I'll put $5 on it.
    hahahaha, you guessed it meng.

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    Awwww yeeeee.

    Mild, you never said you WON'T take the bet, so therefore you owe me 5 dollaz.

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    sear, both are fresh as hell, seconds my favorite.

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    no matta who ya familys are everybody needs familys yall.
    sear, those balls had better be gobstopers a somethin close 2 a jawbreaker

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    diggin that 1 tempo looks nice and clean keep it up man
    crits please changed the o up like suggested and I know its a little sloppy

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    Gettin there hype. id say drop the 3d for a drop shadow or just a bold outline, and id take those little cuts out of the inside of your letters where the top bar of the k conects and the bottom of the o and the p and r. and i don know how i feel bout the o looking fat like that. try a more old school looking o, kinda like a flat topped tear drop shape if that makes any sense.
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    word Ill try that out man ... as long as I am progressing atleast somewhat it helps. thanks for the crits man
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