Mild, you never said you WON'T take the bet, so therefore you owe me 5 dollaz.
sear, both are fresh as hell, seconds my favorite.
no matta who ya familys are everybody needs familys yall.
sear, those balls had better be gobstopers a somethin close 2 a jawbreaker
*SAVE 5 POINTZ*
F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
diggin that 1 tempo looks nice and clean keep it up man
crits please changed the o up like suggested and I know its a little sloppy
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Gettin there hype. id say drop the 3d for a drop shadow or just a bold outline, and id take those little cuts out of the inside of your letters where the top bar of the k conects and the bottom of the o and the p and r. and i don know how i feel bout the o looking fat like that. try a more old school looking o, kinda like a flat topped tear drop shape if that makes any sense.
word Ill try that out man ... as long as I am progressing atleast somewhat it helps. thanks for the crits man
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before u guys start telling me about structure u should know that this was just for fun
and yes, i know the letters r all wack,
hipe- i like your P and R but not really feeling the K. try to make the dip thing on top of your p more suttle like it is on the R. the 3d looks off at the bottum of your P and the bottum left leg of your R but it looks good elsewhere. you know with ur P and R how at the top it has the dips, maybe in the centre part of the 2 letters the 3d should have the dip too if you get what im saying, may look better but i donno, could fuck it up too but maybe try it out.
EWL- i think that looks dope haha its a cool idea for sure.
I'm not digging some of my follow through lines on my bars. It looked a lot better with pencil shading but fuck it. Drips are ugly too, can I get some critz on my letters?
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
@Emune ^ He has a point. Also for your letters the bend in the bottom bar of the E looks wack. Those extra lines aren't playing into your flow at all, try to position them so they look more natural if ya get what i mean.
@Dank So clean, damn good work.
Freestyle messing around with some new colored pens.
Last edited by cred1384; 05-02-2012 at 12:32 AM.
@ sear - reminds me A LOT of Rime, still looks sick though
@ Hipe - not really feeling the lines that cut in, otherwise looks solid, on the right track
@ ewal - cool concept, looks like it was fun
@ dank - i feel like you've got your simples down pretty well, why not try mixing shit up?
@ emune - get rid of those lines cutting through
@ cred - looks great for a freestyle, do you even need to be posting in the toy thread anymore?
gotta start somewhere right? i get that this doesn't look great, but i do like the P tilted up and the E tilted down, crits appreciated
mike- ya don't simply move from simps to a wild.
n pay attention to spacing, and work on that S, watch which way your letters lean, keep up all straight tup, or all leaning one way. watch that E its fat, try a upper case, it'll look a lot better with your letters
cred- work on the top of your E, noticed its pretty off in every piece, not really feel in that R too, but it looks good for a freestyle
@sear, both are dope as fuck, props on all them faces in the 1st one and the hand in the corner, shits sick. The S in the second one is dope too
Damn dude lose the arrows and extensions. focus on simplicity. some really dope pieces are just plain letters with a little flair. work on doing the letters in bars first and then cut back with your eraser and finish it off. check 2 pages back for my first post. i've been drawing and painting for almost 6 months and my letters and style aren't crazy. is that piece supposed to say Ghost?