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    well good, i almost left that out cuz i thought it looked stupid.

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Size:  195.8 KB sorry it is big cant resize it on my phone.... Auste batlle pic didnt send right i guess... crits are welcome. I like the T
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    mtk - its obvious you can draw, but some of those bars are off, like the bottom of the U, the hidden S is massive compared, and the two main down bars of your A aint parallel, think you need to take that style back a few steps personally,

    Mildstyles - only thing i might say about that is maybe the K looks a little squashed compared to the N and the D, no? just me then...

    writing this made me realize i dont know how to spell parallel, i had to google it, ha

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    rask neer kopr n dank doin it right lol everything else is gonna make me cry

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    i make you cry :'(
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mildstyles View Post
    i make you cry :'(
    Yeah but they are tears of joy.

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    the k to o is wack maybe a lil too much bending and tweaking... thoughts crits please

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    Ok I didn't know how to express it so I drew it for ya, hell yeah! Try to make the things I circled thinner.

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    Also, try something different in the holes of the P and the R.
    Besides that, pretty nice, I like the bending, and that K is neat.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DRIG View Post
    the R is kinda off, and i'm not so sure about cutting in on the p just before it comes out, and i would blow the eye up a bit, add some veins to it possibly.

    the handy is nice though.
    thanks, yeah the R came out wierd, ill work on it
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    another throwie done for a battle, crits?
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    Yeah don't shape your letters like rocks^^^
    Do a smooth line instead of a jaggedy outline
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    @kopr, pover beat me too it haha, definitely thin those up, also, Space the k and O out a lil more. and the top of the K needs some attention, make it two seprate bars, with the horizontal bar moved out to the left farther, hard to explain.
    @gotta paint daily, please look up how to 3d online or something, every single one of those 3d lines should all be in the same direction. also the outside of the 3d should be paralell to the letters, you must be able to find a quick art lesson on google or some shit.
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    Thanks for the crits guys and yeah I understand what you mean neer.
    sense- looks good man idk about that add on at the bottom of the n but maybe that is just an opinion rather than crit
    naps- shit looks wicked I dont think I know enough to break that down to crits...do a throw ill give u crits all day lol
    naked -nice slippy slap
    gottapaint- not sure if you even understand the difference between a throw and simp from what you call that pic(no diss) I would start doing some research on pieces and throws learn the difference first then try again.
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    something new, still much to learn
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    new name, bars are off but it was a sloppy one, the u is a pain in the ass for me
    I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.

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    Dank - Like the Auste piece best
    Zeam - Use bars
    iPwnF00lz - Like the S but dont know much about throws so cant give any decent crits

    I drew this on Friday and have had writers block since, can I pls get crits. thanks


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