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    thanks everybody apreciate it and crits
    dope shit neer

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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Think I should use it as a Y and then work with a 4 thats connected at the top?
    I think you should work with it a little bit first before you just call it a Y, but I was thinking along the same lines about a 4 that's connected at the top, such as the one I just typed.

    And for talking, here's something that's nowhere near finished. Trying something different with this one.
    I actually just copied it onto another sheet of paper so I can fuck around with all the letters. I'm not satisfied with any of them.


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    thanks hipe, i appreciate the feedback man. i gotta work on the D alot.

    MN- a closed top 4 would be cool or maybe just play around with the angles, maybe have the first bar of the 4 and Y reverse of eachother or having one more slanted or somshit, if not a closed top 4 would be cool

    Rasm- i like the E, P and L but really dont like the N, the first part of it seems goodbut that bottom thing is weird i find. the style of ur drawing overal is cool though i think.

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    Basek - I really dig your style for real its dope, one thing i'd suggest trying would be to extend your bars a bit so the letters look a bit less beefy, not a necessity, just curious as to how that'd look, keep up the dope work though
    Neer - It looks dope, id say maybe take those extra connections er holes or whatever and make them different angles and sizes cos the way it is the N looks kinda like an AI and the R looks like it could almost be a funky B, just a suggestion, props though the letters do look nice
    4Eyes - I like it, try rounding off the top left bar of the Y some more though, make it stick out some more, might add some punch to it, like how you did in the green tag on the colored one(as i was typing this i read the crits on the 4/y and proceeded to facepalm....awkward....but yeah second opinions never hurt i guess..)
    Kaze - I second Kopr's statement on yours(yeah i was halfway through typing out the same thing he said when i realized thats just stupid and i need to start reading all the crits given before i add mine in...)
    Rasm - I like what youre doing, that I is wicked fresh (not to say the others arent, that one just stood out to me for some reason, id say just play with thickening some of your bars like in the L and the N, its coming along dope so far though
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    thanks kroe appreciate the feedback, like kopr said i gotta fill up the empty space in between the letters and shit...that drawing u did is fucking sick... Your R is my favorite letter in it, the extension coming off the bottom of ur first letter is sick too...i dont even know what to say to crit that besides i dig it...just keep practicing i guess lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by KroeGHK View Post
    4Eyes - I like it, try rounding off the top left bar of the Y some more though, make it stick out some more, might add some punch to it, like how you did in the green tag on the colored one(as i was typing this i read the crits on the 4/y and proceeded to facepalm....awkward....but yeah second opinions never hurt i guess..)
    Rasm - I like what youre doing, that I is wicked fresh (not to say the others arent, that one just stood out to me for some reason, id say just play with thickening some of your bars like in the L and the N, its coming along dope so far though
    That's basically what I meant in regards to 4eyes. If his Y had a sharper bend kind of like the top left bar of his 4 does, I think it would look better and more defined. Also, thanks man. Your piece is pretty damn fresh too.

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    Rasm- i like the E, P and L but really dont like the N, the first part of it seems goodbut that bottom thing is weird i find. the style of ur drawing overal is cool though i think.
    Haha I didn't really like the E and plan to rebuild it. As far as the N goes, I was fucking around with taking a star shaped cut out of a letter. I think it could work better if it wasn't on the bottom corner of the piece. As for your Dviser sketches up there, I'm liking the D, E, and R in the second sketch the best and the I and S from the first. The third sketch is probably the weakest, especially with the S looking like a 5.

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    thanks rasm i appreciate the crits, i gotta get more flouent and smoother with my letters and shit. i kinda liked the 5 looking S but i should make it look less like a 5, put more style and shit into it i guess and make sure the other letters match it. i like the idea of your E but it is a bit skinny but i like how your middle and top bar come from behind ur main bar. i didnt realize the star idea but now that u say it, it sounds like a good idea...just try and work it into the drawing smoothly somehow, woud look sick

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    appreciate it guys.

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    thanks for the props everyone,i definitely appreciate it
    i know this isnt a blackbook piece but i didnt know where else to post it haha
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    kinda looks like u gave her an std

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    well...i have heard people describe graff as a disease...

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    Some stuff for you to hate... JK. Or not.

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    Quit trying to add style and work on your structure. The best letter you got there is your J and its still lacking.

    Keep your bars even Pover

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    so its all a big ass waste of my time n' shit ohhhh ma bad

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    Dempo- Nothing's a waste of time... graffiti's one big learning experience. You have a lot of extensions on the bottom that don't really help the piece, and the one on the top right of the V is the same deal. Keep working on those letters to build structure, and then try adding extensions that compliment the style and flow of the piece.

    Pover- Keep your bar widths even, or at least fairly even. Although there are times and places where varying the bar width works, you're not quite there yet. Also, your 3D needs some serious help. What happened in the gap towards the bottom of the P? And at the top of the P you made a drop shadow instead... Check out the good threads on this site to get an idea of how 3D should work.

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    Thanks, learning a lot in here.

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    this 1 is prolly equally as bad right?

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    No, thats much better. Just drop some of the stupid stuff like the horizontal bar at the bottom of the V, and some of the cuts(or all).
    Its not that bad
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    lookin way better Dempo, although i would drop the horizontal bar on the v as mentioned but also on the 2nd A. i understand you probly put them there to look symmetrical which os good, cuz your paying attention to balance and shit, but they dont fit. and the first A looks funny, woulda made it same as the second. over all its jery clean and R has potential.


 

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