lol i dont normally write like that i promise
lol i dont normally write like that i promise
Local Hip hop crew has asked me to get writing again. Have not touched pen to paper or can to finger for at least 9 - 10 years, any thoughts?
I really don't like the green shadows on the O etc. too much. And pretty poorly filled I think.
Crits? Besides my poor color choice.
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Originally Posted by PETER
can I get some crits on my P
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@mildstyles your N kinda looks like an IU or 7U and careful with that e its almost turning into a P
@dempo dont bend that P so much if at all or if you must, try bending it the other way ever so slightly, that E is still a bit off (the middle part is cut off or short)
@Tempo Nice job on keepin it clean man i'm really digging that. the bend in the P looks funky and the left bar of it gets too far at the top. and you drew a 3d line in black on the p but no where else (but i'm sure you are aware of that one haha) good shit man. keep it up.
Haven't been able to sketch much due to travels and shit. Sketched this up earlier.
I liked the poor color choice, and the "Need more arrowz!!11!one!!Crits? Besides my poor color choice.
bitches love it when you write out their names....some wicked old shit from past books
kroe- really diggn the jamie piece shit is nice man
tempo- Idk bout the bend on that p man
naked- moar arrowz bro
cred - nice man
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
thanks for the advice, il take out those lines from now on
Tempo- looks clean, just make the bottom bar of the P straight any maybe make the O more round at the bottom
Cred- the D comes up a little to high but it all looks really good, i like that R
kroe- those all look dope, the alexa one is my favorite but the X doesn't really match i dont think
hipe- that looks clean, i think if the middle part of the O was alittle bit more rounded it would look better but that could just be me, other then that one thing it looks good, the 3d is dope too
KroeGHK like your style mate, great form and flow. would like to see more black and white fill. think it would suit, but thats just personal tastes.
that was intentional lol i hate X's with a passion, glad you like the rest though
and @wolvf i hate doing fills, for various reasons, i'm not really good with them, im lazy as shit, sharpies are spontaneous and unreliable at times, and people often use fills as a crutch to distract from letter forms which i try to focus more on developing, maybe someday when i grow up ill start doing more elaborate fills lol
^yeh X's seem like a pain in the ass to draw.
wolvf- that looks sick, i think it looks better without the coloring though but the black background thing is dope
need crits on my p's
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So much better ^ do a regular O though
kopr n tempo gettin simples down nicely keep it movin
old pages
Thanks Kaze, Im with you on the coloring though. funny story, sat with that black and white, did the outline and then though, damn, dont want to ruin it with colour. lol
Kwu all of that is awesome
doin pieces at 2am...
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
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the M is lookin a little bit too thick imo, and i think itd look better if the E overlapped the M, just my 2 cents
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