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    thanks Bas, appreciate the advice. i have to work on 3d and drop shadows alot

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    You're welcome. 3D and shadow are actually rather simple as long as you work accurately.

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    Taro - i'd loose the 'stems' on the purple sketch, thicken those other thin bars and it would be a nice style,
    Emune - like the name, the N is your strongest letter, the second straight bar on the M goes from a little too small to too big, same as the E's, and make thee U curve it would look sweet,
    Dviser - not sure why you made the VI so small, an id make the ER over lap a little, like the SE,
    kitten - write kitten instead of neks, its less played out, good your keeping simple, try and get your bars the same width, the S is far too skinny,
    BIG F and DANK BIZZLE lovin it, really like the first hipe

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    Critique please

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    At least you recognized this yourself, but Kaze, you screwed up the drop shadow on almost all of your letters. It shouldn't be on both the top and bottom sides of the letter; pick one way to go with it and stay consistent!

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    Thanks Gpers and Kaze. Ill work on it, and post more.

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    @ kaze thanks man, looks a lot better than your other stuff, but connect all your bars and let letters over lap each other instead of those dotted lines, the S and E look pretty nice. D needs work and like mentioned, vi is too small.
    @ taro, i actually like the one on the right, the left one needs work, keep doin yo thang. nice style.
    @ neks. go a little simpler and keep all your bars the same width, the s is super skinny.
    thanks Gpers haha
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    Thoughts on name/graff?

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    Thanks for the crits with my previous post, I went a bit simpler. I actually liked where this was going until it lost flow after the U. Should I keep progressing with this style?
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    That's much better dude, keep at it.

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    lol. burn
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    thanks bass, yeh i have to just be patient and keep working with it, for the last couple days i havnt had the patience to sit down and try to draw something out

    Kitten-Keyboard Letters, use em for now

    thanks Gpers i appreciate the feedback. yeh haha i dont know why i made the V and I so small, alright il push that R in abit and il prob just take out the attachment things on the top

    thanks rasm for the feedback, appreciate it. yeh i really fuked up on the drop shadow, when i was doing it, it didnt look right but just kept going lol, just happy i got a picture before i added it

    dope thanks big faggot, appreciate the advice. alright il just make then overlap and take out those extra lines, by connect all bars do you meen the top of the D and R were it just sits on an angle? or is there something else that i dont see? I was trying to do something more of like what Kroe said but i cant really pull it off lol. i appreciate the tips thanks man

    pover it looks like u need to make ur bars more even and stuff, the idea you draw out looks cool, but just kind of sloppy :/ maybe go more simple man and just keep at it, it looks like once u get the bar structure shit down u will progress fast cuz u already know what to draw after.

    BURN-use Keyboard letters for now

    emune i like it better then the other one, maybe fatten up the bars abit and try getting it all more clean and even, just keep at it. lose the extension on ur M and maybe the ones at the top of your E and work on the bottom ones of the E

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    Thanks Kaze! Didn't see the comment, from now I'll be stuck on simple letters

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    np kitten, and that already looks better then the other one u posted, but still just stick with keyboard letters for a little bit, we all gotta start with it.

    tempo that looks good man, that O may be a little to big at the bottom but barley, it looks good. the right leg of your M seems to be a little fat compared to the left side...maybe take out the kick on the bottom right of the M

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    you got deals?

    hey EMUNE, UKNOIGETUP, STOP BEING A FUCKING POON AND PULL THROUGH ON THE BATTLE!
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    tempo looks good, the E needs a little work, maybe try a regular upper case E with a little flava. E's are a little more difficult to bar out the way your doin it.
    kitten, make all your bars the same witdth!! like above^^
    Kaze yea i do mean like on your D haha
    and emune, you gotta fix that negative space, your piece should be a solid mass so to speak, all that space on your M and U needs to dissapear, you could do that by bending in the legs of the M or adding some 3D that drops down, but that wouldnt fix the U, maybe bend the U inward? i dont know get funky wit it, much better though
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    @Faggot Thanks mayne, sorry didn't see your post until just now. Next sketch I will work on getting rid of the negative space.
    @Dank I shall actually work on it tonight after I finish writing this girl's name.
    @Tempo with your flow, drips coming out at a right angle would look better than straight down in my opinion.
    @Kaze and Pover thanks for the compliments/critz
    @Burn do what kaze said, decent spray paint can though.
    Just finished this one up, critz? My 3d is admittedly off in a lot of places.
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    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
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