@Kaze & Dank thanks guys, i know the attempts at pieces arent up to par i wasnt sober doin em lol but ill step my game up, also that seldom & street cred ish is fire man, props on those
@Kaze & Dank thanks guys, i know the attempts at pieces arent up to par i wasnt sober doin em lol but ill step my game up, also that seldom & street cred ish is fire man, props on those
-GNASOE-GHK-BH-Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE
I am not a graffiti artist, I do not condone or participate in illegal graffiti, I simply collect, document, and display the work of anonymous artists, I am not accountable for any vandalism under the names represented in any of my posts, it was not me.
quick exchange, K and R are top heavy, but i kinda dig the J. critss.
yeeaa
Haven't posted in a while, been way too busy. Thought I'd throw up an old sketch, critz?
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
or maybe not be a bitch and pull through on the fucking battle, pussy!
big faggot that jerk looks sick! R could be a bit better, maybe a bit bigger or have the E a abit smaller.
Dank that looks solid, that bottom E is dope, looks clean
Taro those are interesting but im not really digging them, one on the right is kind of cool. maybe try more simpler stuff
Emune to be honest i dont really like it, try drawing even bars more and make ur letters out of that.
I really fuked up on the drop shadow but oh well, need some crits plz
Kaze, regarding 3D and shadows there are two basically things you can do:
- Make all the lines go in the same direction (works for both 3D and shadows)
- Work with a vanishing point (which is more a 3D than a shadow effect)
It's easiest to use a ruler for both. In the first case, you just have to make sure you keep your ruler straight.
I want crits
thanks Bas, appreciate the advice. i have to work on 3d and drop shadows alot
You're welcome. 3D and shadow are actually rather simple as long as you work accurately.
Taro - i'd loose the 'stems' on the purple sketch, thicken those other thin bars and it would be a nice style,
Emune - like the name, the N is your strongest letter, the second straight bar on the M goes from a little too small to too big, same as the E's, and make thee U curve it would look sweet,
Dviser - not sure why you made the VI so small, an id make the ER over lap a little, like the SE,
kitten - write kitten instead of neks, its less played out, good your keeping simple, try and get your bars the same width, the S is far too skinny,
BIG F and DANK BIZZLE lovin it, really like the first hipe
Critique please
At least you recognized this yourself, but Kaze, you screwed up the drop shadow on almost all of your letters. It shouldn't be on both the top and bottom sides of the letter; pick one way to go with it and stay consistent!
Thanks Gpers and Kaze. Ill work on it, and post more.
@ kaze thanks man, looks a lot better than your other stuff, but connect all your bars and let letters over lap each other instead of those dotted lines, the S and E look pretty nice. D needs work and like mentioned, vi is too small.
@ taro, i actually like the one on the right, the left one needs work, keep doin yo thang. nice style.
@ neks. go a little simpler and keep all your bars the same width, the s is super skinny.
thanks Gpers haha
Thoughts on name/graff?
Thanks for the crits with my previous post, I went a bit simpler. I actually liked where this was going until it lost flow after the U. Should I keep progressing with this style?
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
That's much better dude, keep at it.
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