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    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
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    np kitten, and that already looks better then the other one u posted, but still just stick with keyboard letters for a little bit, we all gotta start with it.

    tempo that looks good man, that O may be a little to big at the bottom but barley, it looks good. the right leg of your M seems to be a little fat compared to the left side...maybe take out the kick on the bottom right of the M

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    you got deals?

    hey EMUNE, UKNOIGETUP, STOP BEING A FUCKING POON AND PULL THROUGH ON THE BATTLE!
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    tempo looks good, the E needs a little work, maybe try a regular upper case E with a little flava. E's are a little more difficult to bar out the way your doin it.
    kitten, make all your bars the same witdth!! like above^^
    Kaze yea i do mean like on your D haha
    and emune, you gotta fix that negative space, your piece should be a solid mass so to speak, all that space on your M and U needs to dissapear, you could do that by bending in the legs of the M or adding some 3D that drops down, but that wouldnt fix the U, maybe bend the U inward? i dont know get funky wit it, much better though
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    @Faggot Thanks mayne, sorry didn't see your post until just now. Next sketch I will work on getting rid of the negative space.
    @Dank I shall actually work on it tonight after I finish writing this girl's name.
    @Tempo with your flow, drips coming out at a right angle would look better than straight down in my opinion.
    @Kaze and Pover thanks for the compliments/critz
    @Burn do what kaze said, decent spray paint can though.
    Just finished this one up, critz? My 3d is admittedly off in a lot of places.
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    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
    See I have this thing called a penis... don't worry, I wouldn't expect you to know what that's like though.
    "They say that most people can only dream in black and white
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    Quote Originally Posted by uknowigetup View Post
    I shall actually work on it tonight after I finish writing this girl's name.
    u stupid or somethin?
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    That's my sister faggot

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    Hahaha
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    Quote Originally Posted by uknowigetup View Post
    See I have this thing called a penis... don't worry, I wouldn't expect you to know what that's like though.
    then draw her a picture of your penis, rather than some shitty graffiti. granted, i doubt they make paper that small
    (see, i can make lame degrading insults too)
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    Dank I'm definitely digging the upper sketch a lot more than the lower one. I'm not quite feeling the awkward kinks you have in your letters, like in the vertical bars of the D and the L, and the bar of the E that goes from the middle to the bottom left corner. Tempo's got the same thing going on in his M. I think it would look fresh if you tried curving it more.

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    @tasty yours was at least witty
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    thanks for the criticism that was the first time iv ever tried drawing graffiti

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    * If you're posting in the picture threads (Toy Black Books, Toy Tags, Toy Bombs etc) make sure it's either criticism and/or pictures.

    * If you're going to post something make it constructive - it's no help at all saying 'that sucks', also if you feel like giving props to someones work try and throw in a little constructive criticism as well.

    Everyone shut the fuck up. God damn. I'm fully aware that my graff is shitty, that's why I'm asking for CRITICISM. You know constructive kind which involves not acting like greasy fuck faces that have nothing better to do except spam threads with useless garbage.

    Quote Originally Posted by burn222 View Post
    thanks for the criticism that was the first time iv ever tried drawing graffiti
    No problem, check out the new to graff thread, read that ish up, it's actually useful.
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    Hold off that creativity until you can properly work it into your letters. Step back and start drawing up straight letters that are all uniform and the same size.
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    Quote Originally Posted by burn222 View Post
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    Wtf is this supposed to be?
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    coleo it says burn
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    Quote Originally Posted by Coleo View Post
    Wtf is this supposed to be?
    It's obviously an introspective trip into the mind illustrated through abstract lettering in the form of the word "burn".


 

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