lol. burnOriginally Posted by burn222
lol. burn
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
thanks bass, yeh i have to just be patient and keep working with it, for the last couple days i havnt had the patience to sit down and try to draw something out
Kitten-Keyboard Letters, use em for now
thanks Gpers i appreciate the feedback. yeh haha i dont know why i made the V and I so small, alright il push that R in abit and il prob just take out the attachment things on the top
thanks rasm for the feedback, appreciate it. yeh i really fuked up on the drop shadow, when i was doing it, it didnt look right but just kept going lol, just happy i got a picture before i added it
dope thanks big faggot, appreciate the advice. alright il just make then overlap and take out those extra lines, by connect all bars do you meen the top of the D and R were it just sits on an angle? or is there something else that i dont see? I was trying to do something more of like what Kroe said but i cant really pull it off lol. i appreciate the tips thanks man
pover it looks like u need to make ur bars more even and stuff, the idea you draw out looks cool, but just kind of sloppy :/ maybe go more simple man and just keep at it, it looks like once u get the bar structure shit down u will progress fast cuz u already know what to draw after.
BURN-use Keyboard letters for now
emune i like it better then the other one, maybe fatten up the bars abit and try getting it all more clean and even, just keep at it. lose the extension on ur M and maybe the ones at the top of your E and work on the bottom ones of the E
Thanks Kaze! Didn't see the comment, from now I'll be stuck on simple letters
*SAVE 5 POINTZ*
F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
np kitten, and that already looks better then the other one u posted, but still just stick with keyboard letters for a little bit, we all gotta start with it.
tempo that looks good man, that O may be a little to big at the bottom but barley, it looks good. the right leg of your M seems to be a little fat compared to the left side...maybe take out the kick on the bottom right of the M
you got deals?
hey EMUNE, UKNOIGETUP, STOP BEING A FUCKING POON AND PULL THROUGH ON THE BATTLE!
tempo looks good, the E needs a little work, maybe try a regular upper case E with a little flava. E's are a little more difficult to bar out the way your doin it.
kitten, make all your bars the same witdth!! like above^^
Kaze yea i do mean like on your D haha
and emune, you gotta fix that negative space, your piece should be a solid mass so to speak, all that space on your M and U needs to dissapear, you could do that by bending in the legs of the M or adding some 3D that drops down, but that wouldnt fix the U, maybe bend the U inward? i dont know get funky wit it, much better though
Last edited by BigFaggot; 05-17-2012 at 08:13 PM.
@Faggot Thanks mayne, sorry didn't see your post until just now. Next sketch I will work on getting rid of the negative space.
@Dank I shall actually work on it tonight after I finish writing this girl's name.
@Tempo with your flow, drips coming out at a right angle would look better than straight down in my opinion.
@Kaze and Pover thanks for the compliments/critz
@Burn do what kaze said, decent spray paint can though.
Just finished this one up, critz? My 3d is admittedly off in a lot of places.
Last edited by uknowigetup; 05-17-2012 at 09:02 PM.
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
See I have this thing called a penis... don't worry, I wouldn't expect you to know what that's like though.
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
^
u stupid or somethin?
Hahaha
then draw her a picture of your penis, rather than some shitty graffiti. granted, i doubt they make paper that small
(see, i can make lame degrading insults too)
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Dank I'm definitely digging the upper sketch a lot more than the lower one. I'm not quite feeling the awkward kinks you have in your letters, like in the vertical bars of the D and the L, and the bar of the E that goes from the middle to the bottom left corner. Tempo's got the same thing going on in his M. I think it would look fresh if you tried curving it more.
@tasty yours was at least witty
thanks for the criticism that was the first time iv ever tried drawing graffiti
* If you're posting in the picture threads (Toy Black Books, Toy Tags, Toy Bombs etc) make sure it's either criticism and/or pictures.
* If you're going to post something make it constructive - it's no help at all saying 'that sucks', also if you feel like giving props to someones work try and throw in a little constructive criticism as well.
Everyone shut the fuck up. God damn. I'm fully aware that my graff is shitty, that's why I'm asking for CRITICISM. You know constructive kind which involves not acting like greasy fuck faces that have nothing better to do except spam threads with useless garbage.
No problem, check out the new to graff thread, read that ish up, it's actually useful.
vv
Hold off that creativity until you can properly work it into your letters. Step back and start drawing up straight letters that are all uniform and the same size.
Last edited by uknowigetup; 05-17-2012 at 09:27 PM.
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
spam spam spam spam spam DOuchebayg^ spam spam spam spam spam
Wtf is this supposed to be?
yes i am using a paint brush obviously
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