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    the one with yellow around it? if so, work on that neg space like i said, and try some 3d, make sure you rule it out and shit. n is the strongest. dip the thing on the bottom of the E's.
    no problem wizard.
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    keeping it simple
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    photo-1
    CRITS PLZ
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    wizard that character is cool, start simple like bigfaggit and u will progress in the right way, keep it up

    big faggit that looks dope, maybe on your R the leg that comes out under the loop part should come out on a little bit or a raised angle, just a suggestion though. the way it is looks dope. you should add some 3d on that

    comrader make all your bars even, and your letters in a proportioned order. i like the A in the bottom one but the M is way to big and the Z is too small but the Z looks good other then being too small. keep working at it

    norfsuthr that looks dope, maybe have the G bigger and the top of it more of an angle when it bends around and down like the O.
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    Zeam^
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    You see how I barred that A out in paint, that's what you need to focus on. Try to get all your bars the same size, for instance the back of the E is a lot fatter than the legs of the E, that M is way too big, and the bottom left of the Z is cut in an awkward place, if anything that's the corner you need to keep. Keep at it but go a little bit more basic. (obviously in my drawing the vertical legs would be longer in an actual sketch.)
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    post up, you've had a month. I'm getting bored
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    Quote Originally Posted by uknowigetup View Post
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    You see how I barred that A out in paint, that's what you need to focus on. Try to get all your bars the same size, for instance the back of the E is a lot fatter than the legs of the E, that M is way too big, and the bottom left of the Z is cut in an awkward place, if anything that's the corner you need to keep. Keep at it but go a little bit more basic. (obviously in my drawing the vertical legs would be longer in an actual sketch.)
    you guys mean something like this?
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    Drunk as fuck, 2 minute sketch.
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    wayyyyyyyyyy old haha just found this going through shit
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    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
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    Thats sick man, i really like the letters

    ...not to good at fills so ive just been tryin some things

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    MY HOBBY'S WHAT YOUR PASSION IS

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    @Someone those 2 are FRESH

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    Originally I was just drawing Art but then I saw the R and T made an M :|
    Not too happy with how the O came out
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    ^and this was made Sept 9, 2011. I only like the "no". Everything else is craptastic
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    no one gave me feedback

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    I'm not sure about the bottom right leg of the R with it being zig-zag

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    Not all graffiti, but other than graff... I haven't had the inspiration to even doodle for more than a year until recently.
    Flicks for talk, crits on the SOAM please (The A sucks, what can I do to fix it?)... I need to practice my piecing a lot...
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    All the letters seem to flow from left to right except for the M. It seems to be slanted to the left more
    And the non-graff things are sick man

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    Soam, the a looks like its slouching where the s and o look solid. The m gets a little wild. And if I may advise, that tail bit on the s hurts the piece, I'd do away with it. So in short, check your a and m bars, clean it up and keep going
    Rush, you need work all around, can't really tell what I'm trying to ell with though, a throw or a solid piece. The s ends bad at the bottom either way. The back leg of the r is too small, I kinda like what you did with the u but the first h looks like a n and the second looks like another r
    self Crits, bottom L bar is fat, p is a bit wild compared to the rest, if I missed anything let me know!
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    I write rasn lol

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    Your n looks like an r then ha

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    yeh it looks more like Rush than Rasn. The A looks a lot like a U

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