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    I did this for a contest. I says Molotow. Full color sketch, A4

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    Here is the video of how I made it. Hope you like it.


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    thanks gpers i appreciate your feedback dude yeh that face in the O is kinda wak, i wana get better at that shit. i think all those drawings u did look fuking sick but that 3rd bottom one is my fav i think

    eruk go more simple and just keep practicing...use bars and shit

    6i9o- too be honest im not really diggin it, try more plain letters like i am and work with that

    pitlord looks cool but its not all the most legible
    Last edited by Kaze; 05-28-2012 at 07:21 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GpersKreepers View Post
    tempo - i tink your E is your weakest, the join of the two loops looks odd,
    BIG f - love your stuff, i think its an issue with spacing on the page but the ER overlap is a bit too,
    humor - sick,
    kaze - keep it up bruv, not liking the face in the O mind, but good looks

    same old same old from me





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    the first and third are fresh,your style is dope as always, you wanna do another exchange man?
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    lil freestyle 2day but I dont like the O very much

    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
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    Gpers, I'd love to see that shit running on a train man. Simple yet effective.

    Tempo, all your posts look the same and I haven't seen all that much improvement. You say you don't like the O, yet it's one you use a lot. Mix it up a little.

    Edit: Pitlord, nice video man. That canvas came out super clean.
    Last edited by Rasm; 05-28-2012 at 06:01 PM.

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    feel ya but man see trying to get these letters to work for me is not the same thing every time duko if u check em I do try new lil things here n' there. i dont expect to improve at your desired rate either cause I goin at my pace. post some more pics tho.

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    It takes a long time to develop letters man; I wouldn't expect anyone to develop a style over night. I've just noticed that you keep making the left leg of your M the same, and keep using that bar at the bottom of your P, which doesn't really help the letter out too much. I feel that repeating letters can slow progression... then again I'm guilty of the same thing.

    I'll try to post something new later on tonight.

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    tempo your E looks better but dip the little thing on the bottom
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    @Dempo just keep workin' with them and you'll get it.
    @Gpers digging all of them man. Good shit.

    Got surgery so couldn't draw for awhile.
    The latest.
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    cred... diggin those colours, outline looks abit messy tho and idk about the left bar of the R goin under the C

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    quickie i did.. crits, dont mind the shit at the topName:  IMG00169-20120528-2037.jpg
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    I think Temp has got some improvement. Just keep sketching.

    Cred you're getting a bit weird with your letters.

    Watch your bar widths no-sleep

    Been working on this for a minute, my color skills for Doc Doom are sub par at the most, but I still like the piece. Went with the pyramid-lookin fill to match the mask. Looking for some crits


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    Tempo- work on the o, rest of its ok
    cred- the R is fucked. Try some different styles too, couldnt hurt
    jern- middle bar of the E is at a weird angle, bottom of the j gets too fat. decent hands
    MN- I like that color scheme a lot, especially in the 3d. The Y is weak, make the horizontal bar in the middle match the angle of the 4 maybe.

    I need to stop fucking around all the time and do some simps...

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    i like your bevel type effect. i remember way back when i had this drawing book and it had that in there, was fun..
    you hid the bottom of the S again. might as well just have it start with the line like / so it doesn't look weird. so like watch what parts of your letters you cover and how much, i tend to try not to cover more than half a bar. at most
    that character looks like an evil indian eskimo dr doom lady

    goj thats dope, got barrssssss
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    Quote Originally Posted by Biggseko View Post
    You are a toy
    this is the TOY blackbook thread. wat do you expect ?

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    jern looks dope but like norfsuthr said that middle bar of the E is at a weird angle and the N seems kinda big but other then that it looks good

    4eyes thats sick dude, that mask thing reminds me of the mf doom mask kind of lol

    norfsuthr that looks dope, only thing i would say is maybe have an opening on the right bar of ur W where it meets the middle bar

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaze View Post
    jern looks dope but like norfsuthr said that middle bar of the E is at a weird angle and the N seems kinda big but other then that it looks good

    4eyes thats sick dude, that mask thing reminds me of the mf doom mask kind of lol

    norfsuthr that looks dope, only thing i would say is maybe have an opening on the right bar of ur W where it meets the middle bar
    Lol MF got it from the Fantastic Four/Spiderman villain Doctor Doom. Good looks though.

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    oh shit i never new that haha, the mask suited mf doom well lol...learn something new everyday

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    Here is my exchange for MildStyles and one of the drawings for danks...i got 2 more and the throwie coming tomorrow
    I made the D on naked too small and sorry for both of the handstyles looking shitty...should have practiced them more first
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    didnt get many crits on this before so bumpin for crits
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    kaze - both look good but the 3d looks kinda weird in some parts. like in the D's and under the K
    crits please
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