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    feel ya but man see trying to get these letters to work for me is not the same thing every time duko if u check em I do try new lil things here n' there. i dont expect to improve at your desired rate either cause I goin at my pace. post some more pics tho.

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    It takes a long time to develop letters man; I wouldn't expect anyone to develop a style over night. I've just noticed that you keep making the left leg of your M the same, and keep using that bar at the bottom of your P, which doesn't really help the letter out too much. I feel that repeating letters can slow progression... then again I'm guilty of the same thing.

    I'll try to post something new later on tonight.

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    tempo your E looks better but dip the little thing on the bottom
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    ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

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    @Dempo just keep workin' with them and you'll get it.
    @Gpers digging all of them man. Good shit.

    Got surgery so couldn't draw for awhile.
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    cred... diggin those colours, outline looks abit messy tho and idk about the left bar of the R goin under the C

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    quickie i did.. crits, dont mind the shit at the topName:  IMG00169-20120528-2037.jpg
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    I think Temp has got some improvement. Just keep sketching.

    Cred you're getting a bit weird with your letters.

    Watch your bar widths no-sleep

    Been working on this for a minute, my color skills for Doc Doom are sub par at the most, but I still like the piece. Went with the pyramid-lookin fill to match the mask. Looking for some crits


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    Tempo- work on the o, rest of its ok
    cred- the R is fucked. Try some different styles too, couldnt hurt
    jern- middle bar of the E is at a weird angle, bottom of the j gets too fat. decent hands
    MN- I like that color scheme a lot, especially in the 3d. The Y is weak, make the horizontal bar in the middle match the angle of the 4 maybe.

    I need to stop fucking around all the time and do some simps...

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    i like your bevel type effect. i remember way back when i had this drawing book and it had that in there, was fun..
    you hid the bottom of the S again. might as well just have it start with the line like / so it doesn't look weird. so like watch what parts of your letters you cover and how much, i tend to try not to cover more than half a bar. at most
    that character looks like an evil indian eskimo dr doom lady

    goj thats dope, got barrssssss
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    Quote Originally Posted by Biggseko View Post
    You are a toy
    this is the TOY blackbook thread. wat do you expect ?

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    jern looks dope but like norfsuthr said that middle bar of the E is at a weird angle and the N seems kinda big but other then that it looks good

    4eyes thats sick dude, that mask thing reminds me of the mf doom mask kind of lol

    norfsuthr that looks dope, only thing i would say is maybe have an opening on the right bar of ur W where it meets the middle bar

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaze View Post
    jern looks dope but like norfsuthr said that middle bar of the E is at a weird angle and the N seems kinda big but other then that it looks good

    4eyes thats sick dude, that mask thing reminds me of the mf doom mask kind of lol

    norfsuthr that looks dope, only thing i would say is maybe have an opening on the right bar of ur W where it meets the middle bar
    Lol MF got it from the Fantastic Four/Spiderman villain Doctor Doom. Good looks though.

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    oh shit i never new that haha, the mask suited mf doom well lol...learn something new everyday

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    Here is my exchange for MildStyles and one of the drawings for danks...i got 2 more and the throwie coming tomorrow
    I made the D on naked too small and sorry for both of the handstyles looking shitty...should have practiced them more first
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    didnt get many crits on this before so bumpin for crits
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    kaze - both look good but the 3d looks kinda weird in some parts. like in the D's and under the K
    crits please
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pitlord View Post
    I did this for a contest. I says Molotow. Full color sketch, A4

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    Here is the video of how I made it. Hope you like it.

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    pitlord looks cool but its not all the most legible
    What does that mean? Im not a native :P

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    Edit: Pitlord, nice video man. That canvas came out super clean.
    Thanks. It's A4-Paper. Not even on canvas :P



    Any other crits?

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    thanks for the crits, yeh i dont know what to do with 3d in the D and maybe with the bottom of the K i should have had it start skinny and go fatter to the end of the bar...i just gotta get better at 3d

    i like yours its clean and simple with style. i like that E you did, maybe with your A you should have had it abit higher and have the legs abit longer..but i dono it looks good the way it is right now too i think. top left part of your V the 3d looks kinda off

    ^ haaha i meen some parts of it are not so easy to read
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    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    I think Temp has got some improvement. Just keep sketching.

    Cred you're getting a bit weird with your letters.

    Watch your bar widths no-sleep

    Been working on this for a minute, my color skills for Doc Doom are sub par at the most, but I still like the piece. Went with the pyramid-lookin fill to match the mask. Looking for some crits

    Bump for more crits.

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    I like the beveled look to those letters. That's something you don't see too much. I don't like the 3d and how the vanishing point is in the center.

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    4eyes that dude is killer with his green hoodie, yo the letters fill is missing something maybe a blending color to add so its not such a sharp contrast from light to dark

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    just messin around, gunna try to paint something like this soon.
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    Quote Originally Posted by dmgraff View Post
    ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt


 

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