hahahahaha what the fuck
hahahahaha what the fuck
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Originally Posted by MN Nice
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
I like the overall flow of the letters, despite the common thought on exact bars, simplicity and uniformity being thrown out there at the moment. You obviously have skill, evident in the way your line work "tails off" the way it should ie - on the "o" , on the joiner and and at letter indents. I don't particularly like the line above the "o" but then I never have like that as form provider and considering the random elements that can end up in my pieces like arrows that look like.. "flaccid cocks" ( thanks McTasty ) I cant really be critical. I like the choice of colour for the fill, think it suits the piece. Overall I like the old skool appeal. Now I sure you don't give a shit about what I think given our first interaction a month ago when I joined this forum, I was in the wrong place though thanks for that, just didn't realise the forum layout. But there you have my 2bits take it or leave it.
take- your bars are inconsistent.
jaset- i like that sophia on the right. H I is a lil lacking but better then most stuff here.
s33one- if you reaaallly wanna battle. pm me.. while you are at it share them secret of making MAD bucks off a shitty ass childish drawing.
Crits?
WrittenAndSpokenWord
havent posted in awhile because over exams and shit anyway
take- Dank is right lose those extensions especially the one at the bottom of the T and same with the A...i like the tag its nice and simple and the E...
sketch i did with a bic pen...any crits would help...its not a great pic i might put up a better picture tomorrow
Last edited by Hick94; 06-03-2012 at 05:38 PM.
He already said his secret!
DUPE
did this for the tribal contest a while ago
crap^
more old stuff
Well you came to the right place
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
the bitch fits in this thread and all the other ones, is getting ridiculos. shut up and post flicks.
quickie collab simps.
dank burns you
/discussion
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
And so the summer begins and floods more ignant kids on here.
Colored freebie
Jaset - Some pieces are really nice some are kinda meh, i think theyd be nicer looking if more simple cuz all the extra shit and bars on some of em make them look toy.
4eyes - E looks strange but 4 and Y looking much better
BigFaggot - Dont have many crits apart form the bar on G should be shorter
I havent posted in a while, wrote Willis and Wils for first time in a while, can I pls get crits
god damn people be goin mad complicated in the toy forum lol
any crits on this simp
heres just a raw sketch... i dont like the R and the left fat leg of the A. critz please, i know you want to crit
1 love, its pretty bad, do simple straight letters with bars and yoll learn.
bork, structurally its not half bad, keep it up.
4 eyes, thats lokin good, but the bottom right of the y should come out farther
willis, when your bars overlap, the bar coming out shoul com from the corners of the first bar. on the l's and w, the bars over lap slightly at the bottoms.
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