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    ^those 2 top drawings r dope,i like the bottom graff pic the most, maybe try to go more simple and shit for a bit

    akaskizz, what you said would hold more weight if you showed that you yourself are actualy good....and even if you were it would just make u an arrogant asshole.

    mildstyles and Tasty i dig those both alot, real sick

    Axil, the D and B dont match

    kitten keep doing them simples and keep working on ur letter sizing..i gotta do that too alot

    osaPonder...holy shit those r terrible, do keyboard letters dude

    kopr looking good, nice consistency, 3D is nice too except just in the middle of the O, the coloring u did inside makes it looks like a yellow brick wall design, even thouse the lines r more circular then square lol

    this is for the exchange with MnNice, wanted to get some advice on any ways to fix it up before i go any further
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    the top loop on the y looks off but your learning and developing well might even have passed me piece wise ..... suprise suprise the hopeless piecer I am lol im just too impatient. If I start something I have to finish it and piecing takes more time than I like spending on 1 thing.... maybe ill cop some adderol and zone out for a few months and get decent.
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    What's up gents
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    ive been doing simps for like 4 years and 3 diff names i think its time to try harder stuff for me lmao
    but yeah
    yeyes its wayyy to simp bars are way too fat makes them look like bombs not peices if that what your going for then ok keep them fat as bars but play around with them try making dudads here and there

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    @hipe. thanks for the crits man, do you think i should make it less circular and have the vertical bar line up better or? i know what u meen with pieces man there a fukin pain in the ass...im trying to gain more patients too, sometimes i have more then other times but usualy taking a chop or if not smoking a j or somshit helps out. and nah man fuck no ur not hopeless with piecing, just gotta be persistent with that shit...your really strong with doing throwies and u can do handstyles so y not burners? i feel envy towards pple that r just naturaly good at it and who can learn so fast, that shit makes me want to just give up with this shit but we all develop differently

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    Kinda fucking with something for the first time since I started writing... been mostly focused on handstyles and throws... I'll post when I'm finished.

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    lol my bad dudes.. i really didnt mean to be mean.. and @mildstyles i didnt mean yours (again i apologize i didnt specify lol) yours is pretty dope tho up at the top. and same for tasty mcnasty... those ones under them were really the ones i was talkin about and they got me mad because they are pretty bad (here i am actually being mean) but for real im liking what im seeing now. thanks peoples

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    Work in progress.
    Not sure what the fuck to do with the H, first attempt at piece style.
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    Piece I did tonight.
    Got a little crazy. Lol.
    Crits welcome as always.

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    Stalin that looks like more of a throwie then a piece, it looks interesting though i like the monkeyhead ontop of ur I lol. go on the internet and get some ideas and just keep practicing

    Buck the bottom extension on ur B looks kinda off. i like the buck on the bottom alot

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    I dunno Buck. Why don't you focus a bit more on letter structures before throwing in that much colour? You obviously know how to do that, but the letters aren't working. Furthermore, don't just throw in a million of the same additions, like cracks, glares, bubbles, and - especially - drips. It's just overkill (and none of them are done right, so that they distract from the rest of the sketch, which is of higher quality).

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    Thanks.
    I dont know why I go so crazy.
    I just go and don't stop until I'm happy or it looks too busy. Lol

    Obviously way to busy with this one.
    I just figure the more I practice (good or shitty) the better I will get.
    It's not so much that I don't work on structure. I just get something I kinda like and run with it.


    My biggest problem is not being able to give all the letters the same style I guess... If that makes sense?
    It will come with time and practice.


    Thank you again for the positive crits fellas.
    I'm trying to do one decent piece a day in hope I will get better. Lmao.

    That's bottom extension on the b looks off because it's not flat like the rest. Its at an angle. I noticed it when I uploaded the pic. S.O.B. oh well. Lol
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    Having fun doing is of course the most important part. And practicing every day is obviously a good strategy. Good luck!

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    Any crits?
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    Hipe - Looks ok, I dont think the H is too bad I quite like it. Use bars and straight letters and it will help u get better.
    Buck - I like it but too busy as has been said. If you want to get better at letters then just forget colours n shit for now, in the time it probably took to colour and add effects to that one piece you could draw 4 or 5 black and white pieces and your letters will develop way quicker.
    Wiz - Looking better keep using them bars.


















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    Any crits? :P
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    Better, I would make the bars coming of top and bottom of Z a little shorter, and make sure bar widths are the same, keep at it.

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    looking good willis, i like thatbottom acid one, maybe the I should have had a similar bend as the A though or just been striaght, looking good though man


    WIZ, like willis said dont have that Z like that, both shorten the vertical top and bottom bars, on ur top picture the 3d looks kinda off 2, just keep practicing simples

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    nice nice nice seld is dopish
    fix that D tho
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