k dope thanks for the advice, il just fix the errors rather then erasing it all...gonna draw some simpler letters and practice the 3d with a ruler after. so once i get the 3d looking decent i should go and outline the hole thing with a sharpie or somthing to hide the little angle problems and stuff?
I need to work with some colors. It's supposed to be "Sunny" it was an old tag, I'm workin on something new now.
Doodle
I tried somethin new here and I know the sizes are all off but I think it has potential
I'm open to advice and criticism, so have at it if ya like.
^ go much simpler, practice drawing out keyboard letters
exchange for MNnice, kinda fuked up on the tags srry.
any crits please ?
been practsing<cant spell that :S<on characters and letters crits please
@curry you shud practice on the 3rd more buddy
@Kaze im feeling it man
@crok you i,n need some work but nice thought the first one is good but the 3d is kinda messed up
flash sux on this cam, crits on letters pls
bump! cus i got no crits hahaOriginally Posted by Wizard
daaaaaaayyuummm
@ cro2k both are pretty good i like the ears the best though just keep working with your bars man
@ mcnuggets try going more simple man
@ willis keep it up man just keep working on your bar widths
@ wiz keep working on your bars man, i would leave the drips and stuff alone for now
I havent really posted anything in a while, I'm just working on my bars and structure before i starts with fills and 3d crits are welcome.
P.S. i know my marker skills are lacking lolz
Lol take your own advice homie work on em barrs.
And I'd just throw on some drop shadow.
What makes you a real writer?
Never doin' the same style twice.
@Willis, watch your bar widths man... and don't extend the horizontal bar of the A so far into the two vertical bars.
@Mcnuggets, go way simpler. You have almost zero letter structure in there. Also learn how to spell practicing.
@Cro2k, I definitely see potential in your work. Keep putting in time. Your 3D is a little off in a few places though.
@Kaze, your 3D is fucked on that one man... at the very bottom of the letters it goes almost horizontally out to the left, but in some spots, like the far right part of the S, it goes almost vertically upwards. The 3D should come off at the same angle everywhere, and should also be the same width, which it isn't in your piece.
@BigAfrica, you also gotta keep your bars the same width man.
Last edited by Rasm; 06-15-2012 at 09:41 PM.
Yo Kaze good shit with the fill and shadow still could use some work but nice.
And that Ears is lookin pretty dope too, thicken up that E though. Keep progressin'
Last edited by HeyThere(O.o); 06-15-2012 at 10:44 AM.
What makes you a real writer?
Never doin' the same style twice.
^ thanks man, yeh it came out better then i thought it was gonna but still could be alot better
not my favorite
crits please
Last edited by BigFaggot; 06-15-2012 at 04:00 PM.
Got damn you've been going hard on those pieces. Good shit, mad improvement.
under construction :P
and something new
I second that
daaaaaaayyuummm
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Please, shut the fuck up
Shut up, dude, shut up
BigFag & Jiska. you cats should move up to the intermediate thread.
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