hmm, i thought this might happen. any advice about letters/fill though? I'll work on some different things to write.
hmm, i thought this might happen. any advice about letters/fill though? I'll work on some different things to write.
Gasr is dope that Nok def aint tho props GASR, good structure keep it up keep fiddlin at those letters
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That looks good portman, only thing i dont like is the style piece because of the e and s.
Bumping my two pics i didnt get any/much crits on
^^the s' in the bottom pic on the left peice of paper is dope^ and theat char. is dope too nice man other letters idk so much just kinda boring thats all
@TSK the stem part on the k' at the bottom is fucked and how the other part of the k' comes to a point is pretty wierd also the s' is very shaky looking but nice idea on the fill just dont look so good thats all keep practicing and choose a different crew name that might be cool
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TSK - Top bar of T needs fixing, use bars
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Meas - your styles nice but as I said I think youd benefit from doing more simps for a while
all of these are kinda fucked, can I get crits anyway? Thanks
thats dope natalie portman...dig it
Meas i agree with what willis said about ur stuff..its cool but maybe spend a day or 2 just doing some basic simps
willis ur lower case E's r looking good just maybe make then a ttaaddd bit smaller. work on those upper case E's though, i think the uppercase E in the second last picture is the best one..try to do more like that without the little bump thing at the bottom. just keep practicing dude, work on making ur bars more smooth and what not, keep at it man
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Originally Posted by Mildstyles
try to do a sharp point on the C so that it matches the rest of the letters, like for instance a rounded top and then a sharp cut to the right for the bottom. You've already got enough compliments about how clean your work is so I won't even bother.
I went a little weird with the second one, don't take it too serious, just having fun with connections and isht. And yeah I used that background from Gasr. Fucking sue me.
MEAS has some nice casual stuff bro
i cant keep a blackbook, all my skteches n shit are errywhere
i'll be faymos one day;
Why do people say "grow some balls"? Balls are weak and sensitive. If you wanna be tough, grow a vagina. Those things can take a pounding.”
Dank, i agree with MN about the C in the first flik but either way both of those r dope as usual. super solid
MN the second one is trippy, cool experimentation. the combination of solid tops andround tops in the first picture is dope, dig that 4. bottom left bar of ur S seems abit skinny though
just felt like drawing these 2 names, kinda fuked up on the koper one and my coloring is pretty scratchy lol. light reflection makes the outline of the koper one lighter then it should be in areas. crits appreciated
Last edited by Kaze; 06-27-2012 at 08:48 PM.
Bumptry to do a sharp point on the C so that it matches the rest of the letters, like for instance a rounded top and then a sharp cut to the right for the bottom. You've already got enough compliments about how clean your work is so I won't even bother.
I went a little weird with the second one, don't take it too serious, just having fun with connections and isht. And yeah I used that background from Gasr. Fucking sue me.
top one, do one with those bottom E's without the connections. saw that painted thing ya posted, was looking nice
@MN Nice
I really like the bottom picture and the colors that you used with it, they way that you made the letters flow together,
I like the look
Kaze is everything you do in colored pencil?
no man, i used these skinny fealt things...fine liner type things for that one and like 90percent of the opther shit iv uploaded, why? i kknow hte coloring is pretty bad lol...its all scratchy and shit i gotta practice coloring/filling
Yeeee I'll hit you back with one when I get a moment. What you want, a Devise?
that would be dope man thanks, yeh devise, dvise, dviser which ever u like best
Kaze I really like your work !
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colored it. Wish i had a scanner
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