arose those characters are awesome but that bunny reminds me of old jeremy fish stuff a lot.
bigfaggot, i dont like that little growth on the M
gpers and blackmath, keep it up
this isnt much of anything but i havent been sketching much at all
Damn, I hate when nobody comments my piece, please comment guys
Kitten - not bad, the top left of the T kinda disappears, not really feeling the top of the C and the bottom right of the A could use some work but IMO pretty fresh. You could maybe do with going a little simpler to help make your letters the same size etc.
These are a bit older and the "3d" is fucked in some places.I started doing graff a while ago but only for about 1-2 years then i didnt write anything for a few years.Now i started it again and want to improve
the third one looks like it`s furry cuz i changed the contrast.
im new here(: can i get some feed?
Kroe, i get what you're saying
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just some pen shit...whatever :/
feel free to tell me im using too many extensions, my bars are inconsistent, my letters are off, i need to go simpler, all that
this is just shit i did at work bored so im not taking it too seriously
the RAWR finished n shit
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yo mainkampf those r sick, i dont really like the top one though but the 2nd and last one are sick, keep it up dude
The BombGirl, it aint terrible but its not good either, go more simple. lose the extensions and the random bends and what not, start out more simple and you'll get it
Kroe those r funky as fuk, i dig the style of ur top pic and it looks even better when its colored...fuking sick for a pen freestyle
kroe: why are you still in the toy sec??
kaze: ik. i just took a look again and i saw its ugly af... i drew a new one with diff letters.
@notmike: looked up jeremy fisher, i can kind of see what you're saying. these sketches were from years ago too... the rabbit on that sticker in my picture kind of used to be my bread and butter. i painted him alot, and i made a lot of stickers with it... actually, i still use a similar rabbit in some of my stuff now... he just kind of grew out of letter style...
more old toy shit from my first blackbook:
Bipo, Get some letter structure before you start entwining your letters. And keep your letters consistent. Look at how narrow your N is compared to your S. And burn through an old phone book with a sharpie to get a decent handstyle down.
Kroe, I like a lot of the sketches you drop on here including that newest post. Just keep developing those letters. Try to keep your style consistent to maximize flow. In that CAMERON one, the R disrupts the flow due to its high center of gravity and resulting negative space in its lower half. The E is also a little high. Overall it's pretty solid though. In the Rawr one, you have several small bars in the A and the W, whereas the two R's are much thicker. This seems to screw with the overall look of the piece. It would be dope if you thickened up the AW and gave the piece some power. Fucking RAWR. But yeah, keep messing with your bar sizes and widths and you'll continue to develop that style. You have loads of potential man - probably the most in this thread right now.
Main Kampf - second piece is dope, dont really like the curly Y tho.
Kroe - Mate you have progressed so well makes me pissed off that I dont have enough time to work on my shit and i seem to be progressing so slowly compared to others.
Bonbgirl - Its pretty good go a little simpler but its not too bad.
Arose - Those characters are sick.
Serena - Forget all the connections and overlapping for now, just make keyboard letters and make them equally spaced and the same size and same bar widths. You aint bad at simple letters but trying to make it all funky when your not ready for that makes it look way more toy than it really is. Keep it up though.
My Es too big and I fucked the D a bit, can I get crits? Thanks
Appreciate the crits guys
@Willis, what krumpet said. Maybe the bottom leg of the E too
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