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    These are a bit older and the "3d" is fucked in some places.I started doing graff a while ago but only for about 1-2 years then i didnt write anything for a few years.Now i started it again and want to improve

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    the third one looks like it`s furry cuz i changed the contrast.

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    im new here(: can i get some feed?

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    Kroe, i get what you're saying
    Old one

    New one


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    just some pen shit...whatever :/
    feel free to tell me im using too many extensions, my bars are inconsistent, my letters are off, i need to go simpler, all that
    this is just shit i did at work bored so im not taking it too seriously
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    the RAWR finished n shit
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    Last edited by KroeGHK; 07-03-2012 at 04:00 PM.
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    letters like that aint gonna get her wet bro.
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    yo mainkampf those r sick, i dont really like the top one though but the 2nd and last one are sick, keep it up dude

    The BombGirl, it aint terrible but its not good either, go more simple. lose the extensions and the random bends and what not, start out more simple and you'll get it

    Kroe those r funky as fuk, i dig the style of ur top pic and it looks even better when its colored...fuking sick for a pen freestyle

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    kroe: why are you still in the toy sec??

    kaze: ik. i just took a look again and i saw its ugly af... i drew a new one with diff letters.


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    @notmike: looked up jeremy fisher, i can kind of see what you're saying. these sketches were from years ago too... the rabbit on that sticker in my picture kind of used to be my bread and butter. i painted him alot, and i made a lot of stickers with it... actually, i still use a similar rabbit in some of my stuff now... he just kind of grew out of letter style...

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    more old toy shit from my first blackbook:
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    Quote Originally Posted by 6i9o View Post
    Kroe, i get what you're saying
    Old one

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    Bump for crits. Tear me up mannn

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    Bipo, Get some letter structure before you start entwining your letters. And keep your letters consistent. Look at how narrow your N is compared to your S. And burn through an old phone book with a sharpie to get a decent handstyle down.

    Kroe, I like a lot of the sketches you drop on here including that newest post. Just keep developing those letters. Try to keep your style consistent to maximize flow. In that CAMERON one, the R disrupts the flow due to its high center of gravity and resulting negative space in its lower half. The E is also a little high. Overall it's pretty solid though. In the Rawr one, you have several small bars in the A and the W, whereas the two R's are much thicker. This seems to screw with the overall look of the piece. It would be dope if you thickened up the AW and gave the piece some power. Fucking RAWR. But yeah, keep messing with your bar sizes and widths and you'll continue to develop that style. You have loads of potential man - probably the most in this thread right now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KroeGHK View Post
    just some pen shit...whatever :/
    feel free to tell me im using too many extensions, my bars are inconsistent, my letters are off, i need to go simpler, all that
    this is just shit i did at work bored so im not taking it too seriously
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    "CAMERON"
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    the RAWR finished n shit
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    keep working with shit like that. im diggin it. just make the structure of the letters a bit stronger, and more legible, and you'll be set./
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    Main Kampf - second piece is dope, dont really like the curly Y tho.
    Kroe - Mate you have progressed so well makes me pissed off that I dont have enough time to work on my shit and i seem to be progressing so slowly compared to others.
    Bonbgirl - Its pretty good go a little simpler but its not too bad.
    Arose - Those characters are sick.
    Serena - Forget all the connections and overlapping for now, just make keyboard letters and make them equally spaced and the same size and same bar widths. You aint bad at simple letters but trying to make it all funky when your not ready for that makes it look way more toy than it really is. Keep it up though.

    My Es too big and I fucked the D a bit, can I get crits? Thanks


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    Appreciate the crits guys
    @Willis, what krumpet said. Maybe the bottom leg of the E too

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    I did this a few months ago and is the most recent thing i have done...i didnt post any new work yet(i`m very lazy)!The quality of the picture isnt that great...the scanner eats the colors but i tried to change the contrast a bit.I used watercolors,crayons and pen.Any crits will be appreciated.

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    dat ass >.>
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    ok so basically after PARA i ran out of room... so yeh. Let me know if this isn't simple enough .__.
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    Quote Originally Posted by 6i9o View Post
    dat ass >.>
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    ok so basically after PARA i ran out of room... so yeh. Let me know if this isn't simple enough .__.
    You must have one funky keyboard.

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    ^ha

    @kroe - true say what man said, couple tweaks and a few more sketches in that style will look dope mate, dig that charo too
    Last edited by GpersKreepers; 07-04-2012 at 10:51 AM.
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    and Kroe and Gpers, i dunno if you saw this already
    http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...5&d=1340901218
    but yeh, i'll go back to that shit as i'm way off track i guess
    Ok here's your keyboard letters with bars and what not
    Last edited by 6i9o; 07-04-2012 at 02:40 PM.

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