crit pls
Lowercase A is the best IMOOriginally Posted by Willis1989
I havent had much time this week to draw, but ive got these three shitters for crits if anyone has any
6i90 - Bipo - Bipolar
Sketch battle entry. I don't have any markers at the moment, so I had to pencil the shades, which the scanner hardly picked up.
You really gotta stop covering your letters so much.
i gotta agree with 4eyes here.
-Omiz-
obvious mental insanity zone
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You're right, although I usually don't do it as much as I did here. I started out too big and didn't want to go to a second paper. But point taken.
Kidd, i like the simplicity of that piece, maybe take the extension on the top of the K in a bit. looks a bit too big imo.
Swank, as said, space your letters out a bit more. also there's quite a few unnecessary extensions there. maybe cut back a bit.
couple exchanges and some script. crits would be nice.
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Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
daaaaaaayyuummm
it looks like it says G-Wiz lol
I was thinking that too, lol looks nice besides that though for sure.
Bottom Page Bump!
Kidd, i like the simplicity of that piece, maybe take the extension on the top of the K in a bit. looks a bit too big imo.
Swank, as said, space your letters out a bit more. also there's quite a few unnecessary extensions there. maybe cut back a bit.
couple exchanges and some script. crits would be nice.
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6i9o - much better thats the way to go, just keep doing bars like that and youll progress.
Wiz - Like the deadmau5 kinda character on first piece, not huge fan of the letters but not bad, the second piece is better imo
those are turning out nicely.
keep at it.
-Omiz-
obvious mental insanity zone
one must insure zen
that CSD is hot. Simple but good
6i90 - Bipo - Bipolar
dude... why do you never listen to crits? you've gone back to stage one yo.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
The NOIA was in the right direction, but got carried away.
PASE BT X NOVER GWB colloabo -pase with the letters and theme, me with the inking and colors
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Nover...get the fuck outta this thread haha. That's dope as fuck! I'm real down with the colors.
Some whack shit I've been doing
Last edited by Shit Outta Luck; 07-18-2012 at 05:44 PM.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
Apart from making me look like an idiot tilting my head.
First one: A hides too much of the L
Middle: E looks like an F
Bottom: Really diggin this one. I don't know if the bottom bar of the G should bend that much.
More bars and stuff
I messed up the DEW part so I blurred it out...
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