Blackbooks

[Kaze]

EWL, i dont think that E works but the A and L is good i think, i think the W would be better if the left bottom bar just met the left vertical bar directly at the bottom rather then abit above it, it looks good though dude

i agree with EWL bout halo's O and about nevada going simpler, halo take it back a step aswell, ur on track with bars but ur rushing it i think

[Kaze]

crits plz, i havnt gotten new coloring markers yet so its still the same shitty coloring

[Semper]

letter structure is fucked up and its in pen but i haven't posted in a while so here's a quick sketch.

[EWL24]

kaze - looks good but the S and E look kinda weird, the center of he S is a little to skinny so try making it fatter /or the same width as the rest and i think the top of the E would look better if it was an oval like the D rather then a circle.

semper - u have been trying all this wild style stuff for a while and it looks terrible, u really need to get some basic letter structure down before u can even attempt that.

[Kaze]

thanks EWL, i was trying to makethe round part of the E more like the round part of the D but if i came to low it would hit the bottom part of the E :/ any suggestions to get around that? and i think i see wat ur saying about the S.

and i agree with EWL about semprs

[Friidom]

just a little simp and a throwie. ran out of room for the p. ignore the fill

[EWL24]

didnt know what to do for a background, so this the best i could come up with hahaha
crits please

[QUEEZ]

seems like it could use something

[SicK-]

you should write queef

[Mildstyles]

Ewal that's a good simple you look like you got regular letters down, try bending bars and start playing with different ways to do letters
Devise that's good, I just can't wait until you get some new markers it'll make your pieces look much better haha just try making the holes in the e and d bigger so that bars don't look super fat.
Ignore the retarded fill I was just sick of doing one color fills so I ruined it with another.

Crits on it ?

[Shit Outta Luck]

The width is a little off in some places, and the A-E look like bitches, I wanna punch em. The A is like smiling at me -_-
AND I FUCKING HATE the top left of the S. It's retarded.

[Kaze]

thanks mild i appreciate it dude, this is prob a stupid question but is there any coloring markers u would suggest? should i just get some plane old crayola felts or somshit like that? and i see wat u meen bout making the holes bigger in the D and E. I thikn the fill u did looks dope, i dig the swearls and stuff in the letters, that N is dope, it looks like a hybrid lowercase/uppercase lol i think you could have made the E better but its better then wat i can do lol

Ewl i agree with mild, and that background is nice...looks good

friidom its good that ur going basic but maybe dont try to give the letters "style" right now, ur on the right track though keep it up dude

queez maybe try a uppercase Q and try to have all ur letters consistent and legit keyboard letters so it looks more proper, just keep practicing

sol i like how the S kinda has a face with in it..or i see one atleast, but i agree with u on the top left not looking so great :/ that L is pretty cool but kinda looks like an E, maybe dont have the middle part bend so much..its cool though..i suck at L's lol

can i get some crits on this before i fineline and add color to it, i was having trouble doing the drop shadow the way i usualy do it so i tryed reversing it like in sols, i gotta go back and fix some of the width of it i think but does it look alright other then that? should i close off the letters or leave it the way it is open flowing to the next letter?

[Shit Outta Luck]

yeah homie I needa work on my L's. And I just noticed the face lol, thanks.

[omiz]

made these two for
plif and myself. plif is my friend
crits?

[lostyoursense]

Untitled by senseless slaps(cosmo), on Flickr

[QUEEZ]

lmfao i have heard tht before but no i wont lol

[QUEEZ]

im not going to

[Kaze]

bump for crits

can i get some crits on this before i fineline and add color to it, i was having trouble doing the drop shadow the way i usualy do it so i tryed reversing it like in sols, i gotta go back and fix some of the width of it i think but does it look alright other then that? should i close off the letters or leave it the way it is open flowing to the next letter?

[Mildstyles]

I really like everything except the D, the ESR is tight. Idk whats bothering me, it might be the line going down the middle of the D makes the right part look too small and the left size look too big?

[Kaze]

thanks mild, do u think i should just take out that line or shorten it and maybe even make the left bar/side bit smaller?