you tried to mix to much style/things together in the same sketch.. you go from bubbles to red bars, rock hand with halo,stars even concrete cracks lol.... ill suggest to go with one style.
i am a toy .... my 2 cents.
you tried to mix to much style/things together in the same sketch.. you go from bubbles to red bars, rock hand with halo,stars even concrete cracks lol.... ill suggest to go with one style.
i am a toy .... my 2 cents.
#1 I'll give you that.... but beyond that halo shut the fuck up. Phat's got far more game than you.Originally Posted by Halo161
Now for my crits... The P isn't bad, but should be taller. The H do a full character here or not at all IMO. The A as it is should be scrapped all together. I try to keep my T's balanced but then again my T is in the center of my name. I just feel the right side is a bit too heavy and the horizontal bar is too thin. The 2 seems completely out of place here. I think Hobel has a point about style here. Just kinda looks like a series of bad bites. I know you're better than this. (almost feel like it's someone else)
as I look at it... if the P was taller and more balanced you could balance out the 2 with it. just thin out the top.
hahah who is this halo kid
phat i like that look but could use a bit more structure. i like that 2
sum shit
wanted to try it
the rest is shit so i cut it off
Last edited by KroeGHK; 08-01-2012 at 05:36 PM.
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I am not a graffiti artist, I do not condone or participate in illegal graffiti, I simply collect, document, and display the work of anonymous artists, I am not accountable for any vandalism under the names represented in any of my posts, it was not me.
i like these two, put them together and you will have a sexy G
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
Nice Kroe, want me to hit you with something and make it an exchange?
yeah dude gophorit......haha...........
-GNASOE-GHK-BH-
I am not a graffiti artist, I do not condone or participate in illegal graffiti, I simply collect, document, and display the work of anonymous artists, I am not accountable for any vandalism under the names represented in any of my posts, it was not me.
some new shit, old shit, shit to work with and shit to forget... just to show i don't just do exchanges.
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
Haha whatever Peter, apparently i misunderstood the skill level of the reciever of my crits, i retract my comment @TBS dope sketches bro, i really like the second , third , and sixth ones, and those Gopher letters are dope too
Flick for chat
Last edited by Halo161; 08-01-2012 at 11:53 PM.
Swine One N.S.E
"Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard "
4eyes - Nice, I dont think the bar on Y should extend up so much tht its covering top of Y
Swine - Dont make the bars extend way out like that, and work on the N, make it a little simper, the N looks like an X with a bar missing.
TBS - Nice sketches keep it up, i like the top one and the Naked/Broke is nice too
Fucked up my E again, I think im gonna write CADS instead of CADE for a while and see how it works.
just a quick freestyle
That N needs some tlc and i woulda made the middle of that A thicker. Not a bad freebee though.
Cade, either bring the back of that C in a bit or make the D a lil longer. That E would be ok but try and square it out a bit. Think of it as an upside down a.
Last edited by TBS; 08-02-2012 at 06:57 AM.
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
just a lil something for my homie regal
That regal is dope toops.
Nice post tbs. I agree about the g's.
Gophe... That 4eyes throw is sexy.
shitty flicks of shitty sketches
crits?
-GNASOE-GHK-BH-
I am not a graffiti artist, I do not condone or participate in illegal graffiti, I simply collect, document, and display the work of anonymous artists, I am not accountable for any vandalism under the names represented in any of my posts, it was not me.
Goph, make that G a little wider, make the bottom of it spring out more and change that extension bit at the top. Other than that just tweak a couple of your lines and get that inked and filled in! The N in that monker is pretty shitty but other than that it looks alright. That throw is pretty sexy
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
Here you go Gophe.
I'm currently reading books on calligraphy. They helped me to develop that style in the first place, thanks for the advice though, more writers should definitely study their letters.
Also I don't know what Kushbombing was talking to in regards to a Take biting, but I'm fairly confident that I could out-perform anybody else with that name.
Last edited by Take-One; 08-03-2012 at 02:20 AM.
MN Nice - The gophe is ok, dont really like the overlapping bar on the G and think the H would be better if middle bar was a little higher
Toopski - The Regl is nice but I think it would be better if bars on G were a little narrower, looks wider than the rest.
sketch i did for shooms wns melbourne
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