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    havent sketched in a little while. looking for a new name.... crits

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    Gwiu?
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    Gwiz

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    I've seen you do better rewz, no offense though.

    Something new but nothing much different

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    Also posting this for gatsoi
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    4Eyes - I dig it, couple small crits tho, it gets kinda fat in the middle of the E's and throws off the flow a bit (IMO), and the bottom of the S could be curved a bit more to match the bottoms of the E's, good shit tho
    Werm - I like the E and the W is kinda working, the middle is a bit boxy though, your R looks like an S with a weird extension at the top, lastly, your M is too big and kinda seems structurally off(maybe thats just me tho idk) keep at it tho i dig where your style is going
    Sick - that S is dope, i like the colors too, the N kinda looks like a W tho, careful with that, i like it, keep it up
    got high and freestyled a piece, i wish i had left out the E completely though and im not too crazy about the H
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    and for the SNATCH battle
    i hate the H and the C is too covered
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    crits?
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    goph that GO is killer! maybe leave some empty space in the p to match the empty space in the g and o and yea like you said the h is kinda strugglin. work off that GO. you've been improving a lot lately keep it up bro nameth

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    Goph, loving that G and yeah the E looks like what happens when you run out of room and have to squeeze something in.


    the M doesn't look right and i hate the P
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    Lookin' good Sick and Gopher.
    Gopher: That G and P are dope dude.
    Sick: I'm down for an exchage. Jesr.

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    I am diggin' that a lot dude. I'd like to see it with the G closer in perspective and the S further away (slightly) Sloping from the G down to the S.... 2 point perspective.

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    Only thing i'm not liking is the extra bend in the middle piece of the w... And the bit on the back of the e, feel like it should be part of the w.

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    bottom page bump for crits n shit
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    werm- not sure why you'e made the M so big, but i dig the style, the R is odd though,
    gophe - the second one is ill, but the snatch is sloppy, the 2nd loop of the S is far too thick, that n is bad and the two bars on your H are totally different thicknesses,
    G!

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    agred with gpers krepers the snatch looks relly sloppy

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    Ill clean this up, fix the bottom of the E and ink it when I get home, thought id post something for today though


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    make your E's left most bar and bottom bar completely different. You've been trying to make the E a mirror of the A for way to long, and that whole time its looked awful. I suggest trying using something more like the curve of the C, except with a little less drastic of an angle, so open the angle up a tad and see how that looks
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    Cade make your letters taller. They looked squished as fuck. and try coloring some peices or not starting with pencil its always nice to switch it up every now and then
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