I am diggin' that a lot dude. I'd like to see it with the G closer in perspective and the S further away (slightly) Sloping from the G down to the S.... 2 point perspective.
I am diggin' that a lot dude. I'd like to see it with the G closer in perspective and the S further away (slightly) Sloping from the G down to the S.... 2 point perspective.
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Only thing i'm not liking is the extra bend in the middle piece of the w... And the bit on the back of the e, feel like it should be part of the w.
bottom page bump for crits n shit
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werm- not sure why you'e made the M so big, but i dig the style, the R is odd though,
gophe - the second one is ill, but the snatch is sloppy, the 2nd loop of the S is far too thick, that n is bad and the two bars on your H are totally different thicknesses,
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agred with gpers krepers the snatch looks relly sloppy
Ill clean this up, fix the bottom of the E and ink it when I get home, thought id post something for today though
make your E's left most bar and bottom bar completely different. You've been trying to make the E a mirror of the A for way to long, and that whole time its looked awful. I suggest trying using something more like the curve of the C, except with a little less drastic of an angle, so open the angle up a tad and see how that looks
Cade make your letters taller. They looked squished as fuck. and try coloring some peices or not starting with pencil its always nice to switch it up every now and then
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i know you guys think my stuff is bad when i go complicated but before i go back to simps can you tell me exactly where im going wrong?
little different to the normal, it says DVH
sem, the S kinda got fucked up in this one
Last edited by Semper; 08-10-2012 at 07:15 AM.
the first one the only letter that looks like a letter is the D. The H is completely lost and the V looks like an N. The bottom one the only recognizable letter is the M. Most of your extentions and what not don't work very well. Get your letter forms more on point and work on where extentions should be. Your style will work really well once your letter forms are stronger. Flow is lacking a little bit as well. Your extentions will work better when your letters flow together first.
Ok so pretty much work on the basic shape of the letters and make sure I don't get carried away and lose them.
i shouldve made the "w" all loopy like the "n but whatever
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No you shouldn't have
yes. the style has potential. Get your letters to flow first then play with extentions and such. If the letters flow your extentions will naturally flow with the piece.
really? Your force?i shouldve made the "w" all loopy like the "n but whatever
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