Blackbooks

**-=AgA=-TrAnCe** · 07-15-2005 12:09 PM

heres some more ive done

Say what you think metro, i wen t for a cleaner style on theses, see how it works.

lmao

Hope you like em.

What you think metro??

**crazyniggadrizzleisgelo** · 07-15-2005 12:47 PM

u need help bad kid start off wiht making r lines straight dont do all taht bull shit stuff ur colors are cool think of a diff name to y ur at it but keep ur stuff up kid

**metro 519** · 07-15-2005 01:15 PM

first one... not a bad throw up style but you might want to lose the yellow in the middle or fill it in entirly yellow or else it makes it look a little un organized.

the second one... the "R" looks really similar to the "A" but your 3d at the bottom is pretty good, you might want to lose the jagged edges on the out side and do 3d on the letters in stead... if you want to keep the jagged look try and pick a focal point in the middle and have the points move out from there.

the third one... maybe one to many bends in the "T" same thing with the jagged edges

just make sure to take your time with your drawings the last on looks really rushed

pm me if you have any questions about what ive said

**-=AgA=-TrAnCe** · 07-15-2005 02:49 PM

ye lol,

last one rushed because i did it in class in school (rebel lol)
nearly got caught so i had to rush it lol. I'll keep workin on them tho. Me and my mate (he just started graff) are makin an A3 large piece so ill pake a picccy of that and post it lter.

l8tr

p.s il pst more of my piccys later when ive done some.

edit**Im only 12 so i think im doin ok**

**flclnaruto1213** · 07-15-2005 03:34 PM

that last one that roller did was fucking awesome
one question, where the fuck did you start?
lol and i saw a m and a d..

**flclnaruto1213** · 07-15-2005 03:36 PM

oh and trance you remind me of me when i just started.

**-=AgA=-TrAnCe** · 07-15-2005 03:59 PM

/|\ lol

**metro 519** · 07-15-2005 04:00 PM

Originally posted by -=AgA=-TrAnCe@Jul 15 2005, 02:49 PM
ye lol,

last one rushed because i did it in class in school (rebel lol)
nearly got caught so i had to rush it lol. I'll keep workin on them tho. Me and my mate (he just started graff) are makin an A3 large piece so ill pake a picccy of that and post it lter.

l8tr

p.s il pst more of my piccys later when ive done some.

edit**Im only 12 so i think im doin ok**

lol oh my man for a twelve year old id say its pretty decent... man if you stick with it by the time your my age you'll be sick

**-=AgA=-TrAnCe** · 07-15-2005 04:07 PM

fnx metro, i was inspired by a recent trip to paris, france.
All bridges walls, covered with the most amazing art.
Im stickin with it. I hope to return to paris one day, leave my mark.

lol

**skech** · 07-15-2005 04:40 PM

Originally posted by metro 519@Jul 15 2005, 11:05 AM
well i think its not a bad attempt at some thing more complicated but it really brings down you piece cause your letters are all over the place, try and build extensions on your letters instead of making letters out of extensions...but at least you kept your lines parallel except for the tail on the "S" and thats a not too shabby arrow, nice shape

i asume ur talking to me .. so thanx man .. input is alwayse good ill work on those things ... i dont no anyone else who rites so its hard ta get advice on things

**phr3ak** · 07-15-2005 05:12 PM

something i came up with last night like 2:30 am fucking coffee.....not done, dont know how to color it yet

**metro 519** · 07-15-2005 06:14 PM

blown away as always phr3ak, that is tight

are you painting walls yet???

**phr3ak** · 07-15-2005 06:32 PM

heh nope....im practicing sometimes at my backyard. i dont have supplies yet hopefully b4 summer ends i would paint in our park

**Rollout714** · 07-15-2005 07:50 PM

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Jul 15 2005, 03:34 PM
that last one that roller did was fucking awesome
one question, where the fuck did you start?
lol and i saw a m and a d..

Thanks man, but yea I did it a while ago so I don't remember where I started it. Pretty sure it was somewhere in the middle an just worked my way out from there. Look at the letters the other way, its a P an a W, but if u look upside down I can see how it looks like a M and a lower d. Man that fuckin thing took a long time to finish by the time I did I was sick of workin on it. I got another one I'll try to post but its w/ straight lines w/ camouflaged words inside.