Blackbooks

**MUSASHI** · 02-07-2006 07:31 PM

the "E"'s and the "R" need some serious rethink on the "E" make the middle nub more pronounced lose the slash in the top arm.... on the "R" do you think it resembles an "R" ? just tryin to help ya out a bit cuz to me the word looks like "COCKCC" dig?

**Puffer** · 02-07-2006 07:33 PM

Originally posted by alive@Feb 7 2006, 08:02 PM
a bomb and tag under my new name
COERCE
i did it fast, thats why the choppiness on the shadow so plz excuse that
unless ppl tell me its terrible and im just oblivious to it im gonna paint it 2mrw and get pics

please give me all of your thoughts, good and bad, as long as they r helpful

thanks so much

yeah fix the r a bit, and on the e's and c's have it so that thing doesnt go soo far up just bring it down a bit, and have the ! a bit fatter and closer to te last letter, and just the handstyle , work on that, thats it, not too much to improve

**alive** · 02-07-2006 07:39 PM

aiight well thanks 4 ur help,
on the e i was trying to go for a lowercase e,
a slight cope 2 bite im ashamed to admit
and yes, i did think it resembled an r
lol
but ill work on it, any suggestions for that?

btw, is it good enough to paint?

thanks again so much,
coerce

**Sluts_r_us** · 02-07-2006 07:41 PM

i wouldnt suggest painting it...

**alive** · 02-07-2006 07:50 PM

ouch

any suggestions then?
u cant just say that and leave me hanging

pleeeeeeeeeease?

**AMAZ tbscrew** · 02-07-2006 08:13 PM

yes....make ur sig smaller and dont paint it...

no just change ur e's i guess..i mean they dont even look like a bite.

**AMAZ tbscrew** · 02-07-2006 08:13 PM

double post...ummm uhhh.... soo uh ill bump suttin i guess

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/eve.../Picture020.jpg

**seno2** · 02-07-2006 08:38 PM

Originally posted by alive@Feb 7 2006, 07:22 PM
seno r u in nyc?

nah man. midweeest

**AoAssis** · 02-07-2006 08:52 PM

Originally posted by ylive4death2come+Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ylive4death2come @ Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.

unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it. [/b][/quote]
help? you don't need help, you need to quit, and dont tell me that bullshit about "shut up, dont say any thing unless your gana help me" i am helping you, telling you to quiting would help you out

**faint rem one** · 02-07-2006 08:56 PM

Originally posted by ylive4death2come+Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ylive4death2come @ Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.

unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it. [/b][/quote]
tbh. you suck fucking balls. but start simple, get influences, and post your shit here for crits, and if you cant take crits then you need to start because when you post shit like that your gunna get some shitty feedback. and i said that as a joke to make you mad. obviously it worked

**acek** · 02-07-2006 08:59 PM

new name and new sketch im workin on

i will put colour later..and post the final sketch

crits and comments on the letters plz

**cess!** · 02-07-2006 09:05 PM

yo yoyo hope i get some good words for this..i would blurt out the handstyles at the top cus i was just dickin around so dont pay any attention to em

good night

**xAWOKE.925** · 02-07-2006 09:30 PM

Uuh...i can't even really tell at all what it is. It's like a crazy shaped piece. The fill is kinda cool but the letters are mad wack.

**Nyc Sno** · 02-07-2006 09:36 PM

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Feb 6 2006, 06:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Feb 6 2006, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Nyc Sno@Feb 6 2006, 06:28 PM
just working on some throwies tell me what u think
which one is better

bump [/b][/quote]
sorry to bump again

**acek** · 02-07-2006 09:46 PM

new name and new sketch im workin on

i will put colour later..and post the final sketch

crits and comments on the letters plz

bump

**AMAZ tbscrew** · 02-07-2006 09:59 PM

^^3d will make it look better..i think

and mace keep workin on it..i like #1 better

**ylive4death2come** · 02-08-2006 02:17 AM

Originally posted by faint rem one+Feb 7 2006, 09:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (faint rem one @ Feb 7 2006, 09:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>

Originally posted by ylive4death2come@Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one

@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.

unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it.

tbh. you suck fucking balls. but start simple, get influences, and post your shit here for crits, and if you cant take crits then you need to start because when you post shit like that your gunna get some shitty feedback. and i said that as a joke to make you mad. obviously it worked

[/b][/quote]
i know thats wat made me angry. i come to more experienced people for help and immature people like you just waste your time to do this.

**ylive4death2come** · 02-08-2006 02:24 AM

Originally posted by AoAssis+Feb 7 2006, 09:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Feb 7 2006, 09:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>

Originally posted by ylive4death2come@Feb 7 2006, 07:24 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one

@Feb 7 2006, 02:35 AM
your beyond help.

unless your going to help shut up i said that before. so stop trying to joke and help me out. thanx. and stop saying go simple because the only new one is the one tht looks asian i drew the other a while ago but couldnt find it.

help? you don't need help, you need to quit, and dont tell me that bullshit about "shut up, dont say any thing unless your gana help me" i am helping you, telling you to quiting would help you out [/b][/quote]
look. just shut up. im not even replying to anymore shit from now on immature bitches can say what they want instead of posting their work or doing something constructive.