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    *sighs* i shuldnt but.....
    says mebzter right? i like the M. the flare on the rite leg adds pop to it. i like the sketchy fill too. mayb cuz it reminds me of spray paint? i dont kno. just looks good. after the m the letters loose their insane steez. it doent mean they're bad. they're better developed than mine by a long shot. its just that your m is far more advanced than the rest of the peice.
    ok, things to fix: the slime on the right of your m and your t. from the top bit to the flared leg. just take it out. with the bottom e and r the circular top is hella different from the other letters. its just a diff style and it looks strange. i like the first e except for the sticky out bit at the end. mite look good in a more advanced peice as a prelude to a larger extension.
    other than that its pretty sweet. reminds me of Eack. again, i really like the ballpoint fill. and i would tell you to get rid of the drips coming of your letters, but i think someone else will.

    EDIT:forgot to say, i also like the solid white outline, works well with the smoggy cloud shit as a contrasting element.
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    Tempest you can't afford to be cocky yet..

    Quote Originally Posted by Devils_Advocate View Post
    i outline my bombs in chalk first so that when i go over the outline with paint it looks like i have more skill than i do

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    word^^^

    jupsick, you should do a peice goin left to right. all your stuff i see is up and down, you got decent letters though, keep it up for sure

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    geez dude thats the biggest crit i ever got here XD
    anyways
    hmm
    the m most developed? dont think so...but all the other letters lame true XD
    hmm well tnx yea and the drips uhg i dont know how to do drips ts like 2nd time tryin so ummm ok
    well tnx for the crit mate

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    Quote Originally Posted by MsKo View Post
    @wings

    Hmm U got nice letters and a good style but I think U should use some colors man and it will be heeeeeelll yes


    @RasaR

    I Think it's a lil tooo simple for me don't like the style and work on the outline...

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    that song is fucking creepy
    like in a good way, but shit
    neways
    hands are pretty bad, the last d on died looks like a backwards r with a broken leg

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    Crits before I color it?
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    I'm getting rid of the quotes.

    Jupsick- It's pretty nice for a freestyle.
    Dank- Change the N and K. They still need work.
    Queezy- I'm not really feeling it.
    MareImbrium- SAVE THAT IN YOUR RECORDS and when you get really good letter structure look back to it and use the style (not completely).
    Last edited by ESKiMO2; 11-17-2008 at 02:05 PM.

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    yoo the style is dope, its coming along nicely, you lost it on the u and s
    maybe collab sometime?

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    dank- personally i think you should thinkin about switching up your style completely, seems like your stuck on these letters that look exactly the same, maybe you should experiment with different styles and techniques until you develope one of your own

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Wings- View Post
    Dsub exchange.
    Bump !

    SEYOR1


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    crits

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    That flows real well but the a kind of interrupts the flow. Try to make the A out of 3 bars instead of 2 with one bent.

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    i just havent figured out what to do with the bottom of the legs on the a

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    Dewster- You should try making the left leg go into the N.

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    you shoulda fixed the u and s =[

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    dewster im the only kansr around here....


    anddddddddddd....

    dank . stfu. and get straight bar letters. >

    eskimo. your a looks like a h.

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    Yeah, I thought about connecting those bars. Seems like a good idea :/

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    Quote Originally Posted by ESKiMO2 View Post
    Yeah, I thought about connecting those bars.
    WELL THINK AGAIN. hahah. jk man

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    Eskimo: Looks pretty good overall, but as already said, connect that left portion of the A so that it isn't mistaken as an H, and make your U and S a bit bigger to match proportions.

    Dewster: Make your C's look more identical and something about that R doesn't look right to me... can't put my finger on it...

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    exchange with smooth


    dewster - your letters look so fresh, keep it up, the only thing i would change is maybe tilting the right bar on your n more to the right so its not connected to the rest of your n (if you know what im saying)

    eskimo - that looks sick except im not really feeling the long ass bar on your B

    wings - thats probably one of your best pieces ive seen, cant say im feeling the attachment on your d though

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    eskimo... nice simple. i like it. keep it up. B and N needs some work though.
    klic... almost on the right track try changing your bars up and bending more.
    saje... same thing
    Dewster.. im feeling some of your letters. but that A E R and W need a buuunch more work.. try to keep them in the same family and not look so foreign to the rest.... pluss work on your spacing.. and add 3D that Kills looks sick except the K and the S is kind of out in space..

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