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    Crits before I color it?
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    I'm getting rid of the quotes.

    Jupsick- It's pretty nice for a freestyle.
    Dank- Change the N and K. They still need work.
    Queezy- I'm not really feeling it.
    MareImbrium- SAVE THAT IN YOUR RECORDS and when you get really good letter structure look back to it and use the style (not completely).
    Last edited by ESKiMO2; 11-17-2008 at 02:05 PM.

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    yoo the style is dope, its coming along nicely, you lost it on the u and s
    maybe collab sometime?

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    dank- personally i think you should thinkin about switching up your style completely, seems like your stuck on these letters that look exactly the same, maybe you should experiment with different styles and techniques until you develope one of your own

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Wings- View Post
    Dsub exchange.
    Bump !

    SEYOR1


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    crits

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    That flows real well but the a kind of interrupts the flow. Try to make the A out of 3 bars instead of 2 with one bent.

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    i just havent figured out what to do with the bottom of the legs on the a

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    Dewster- You should try making the left leg go into the N.

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    you shoulda fixed the u and s =[

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    dewster im the only kansr around here....


    anddddddddddd....

    dank . stfu. and get straight bar letters. >

    eskimo. your a looks like a h.

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    Yeah, I thought about connecting those bars. Seems like a good idea :/

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    Quote Originally Posted by ESKiMO2 View Post
    Yeah, I thought about connecting those bars.
    WELL THINK AGAIN. hahah. jk man

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    Eskimo: Looks pretty good overall, but as already said, connect that left portion of the A so that it isn't mistaken as an H, and make your U and S a bit bigger to match proportions.

    Dewster: Make your C's look more identical and something about that R doesn't look right to me... can't put my finger on it...

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    exchange with smooth


    dewster - your letters look so fresh, keep it up, the only thing i would change is maybe tilting the right bar on your n more to the right so its not connected to the rest of your n (if you know what im saying)

    eskimo - that looks sick except im not really feeling the long ass bar on your B

    wings - thats probably one of your best pieces ive seen, cant say im feeling the attachment on your d though

    crits?

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    eskimo... nice simple. i like it. keep it up. B and N needs some work though.
    klic... almost on the right track try changing your bars up and bending more.
    saje... same thing
    Dewster.. im feeling some of your letters. but that A E R and W need a buuunch more work.. try to keep them in the same family and not look so foreign to the rest.... pluss work on your spacing.. and add 3D that Kills looks sick except the K and the S is kind of out in space..

    bored at work.
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    and 2 SANEK simples.
    more junk up tonight.
    maybe a rough sketch of a Christmas piece ill hopefully paint.
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    sanek, hard to tell from the photo.
    klic, good simples, but your letters never really seem to flow. work on that i guess.
    saje, nice simple.
    dewster, looks good, maybe work on the r as stated earlier.
    eskimo, i like that one. the color are understated but look nice.

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    eskimo - not feelin the top of the b either
    sanek- those look dope
    klic- make the a in DOAP straight and lose the bump on the e in DOPE

    ok heres my garbo


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    welp....
    better pictures.
    crits welcomed and appreciated.

    SK throwies




    Christmas ROUGH sketch..
    needs a bit of work.
    should i make the tips of the main bar on my E round so it naturally looks more like a candy cane?



    what the N should have came out like.

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    Tempest- thanks for the crit but in regards to handstyle mine is pretty fucked only thing i really noticed that worked was when i held my wrist angled like i broke it haha which kinda let all letters flow and made it a little less controlled so i could explore how to write . that probably doesnt make any sense but to eacch his own just keep writing is my main advice.
    Saje- i liked the first piece you did alot more not quite sure why the only thing i can point out is the overhang of the s on the A makes it seem a littlle to squished compared to the other overhangs.

    just messing bout as usual.

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    dewster- that slow definenlty outshines the cancer in my opinion. looks good though

    saje - nice simples but work on proportions

    halcyon - there's somethin about your layering of the M, E, and S that just look too squished to me, spread em out a bit or something.

    sanek - i dig that throw up man, and your christmas peice, i think the E and K look a bit small and the N looks like its a bit far away from the A. there's just a little too much space there i think. Also the second N is def. better.

    mare - i'm down with those faces. i'd like to see them with a piece instead of a hanstyle next to them please


    my newest, will update you with colour as soon as possible....
    crits?
    Last edited by <J-one>; 11-18-2008 at 04:20 PM.
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