*sighs* i shuldnt but.....
says mebzter right? i like the M. the flare on the rite leg adds pop to it. i like the sketchy fill too. mayb cuz it reminds me of spray paint? i dont kno. just looks good. after the m the letters loose their insane steez. it doent mean they're bad. they're better developed than mine by a long shot. its just that your m is far more advanced than the rest of the peice.
ok, things to fix: the slime on the right of your m and your t. from the top bit to the flared leg. just take it out. with the bottom e and r the circular top is hella different from the other letters. its just a diff style and it looks strange. i like the first e except for the sticky out bit at the end. mite look good in a more advanced peice as a prelude to a larger extension.
other than that its pretty sweet. reminds me of Eack. again, i really like the ballpoint fill. and i would tell you to get rid of the drips coming of your letters, but i think someone else will.
EDIT:forgot to say, i also like the solid white outline, works well with the smoggy cloud shit as a contrasting element.