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    Quote Originally Posted by FrizzleFry View Post
    new

    i dont really like the extension on the m but felt unbalanced without it
    bottom bump

    crits ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by NIC View Post
    Ya only reason I post up stuff is to get crits... Ill take the advice, work on letter structure, etc.. No need to rage at my shit Vandal
    hahah so good. +1 nic

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    feedback?

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    harm id take out the extensions on the h and m and add 3d, pick some colors and paint it

    i like it sadistic, just remember not to turn into some blackbook bomber who cant paint what he draws ya dig?

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    Quote Originally Posted by FrizzleFry View Post
    bottom bump

    crits ?
    mayb its just me but i think it would look a lot better if you just got rid of the hooks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ..LAZRS... View Post
    BEST ADVICE YOULL EVER GET:

    fuck those douchebags like the guy above me, write whatever the fuck you like. if you like what ur doin jape, paint it. your style is your style, dont let some fucking internet douchebag whos too afraid to paint tell u what to do
    lol coming from someone who ive never seen their work nd prolly some wack ass toy who jus started taggin because its "the cool thing" to do nowa days
    get off my dick n blow me faggot

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    Quote Originally Posted by ..LAZRS... View Post
    BEST ADVICE YOULL EVER GET:

    fuck those douchebags like the guy above me, write whatever the fuck you like. if you like what ur doin jape, paint it. your style is your style, dont let some fucking internet douchebag whos too afraid to paint tell u what to do
    Fuck off. He doesn't paint yet. Just accept the fact that you're a dick-sucking ass cowboy who will is the reason so many toys won't listen to any shit anyone better than them will ever say.

    You probably suck even worse, or just as bad. Or it's yours, and you have another account

    That is not raging, nor is it flaming you. He was giving you criticism. That's what people need to get better.
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    ^^^^New Sketch I did in school

    But its weak as fuck I have no Flow wit this sketch at all. Let alone any of my sketches so Im workin on that. Other than that workin on my new R. and Probobly going to change up the O and change the way the bars good for better flow.....


    ^^^^^The R as a Single Letter

    UMMMM as far as crits go.

    Sadistic- Loose you arrow and add ons they are badly placed and you letters are a little weak as far as consitincy gose work on that.
    Frizzle- Loose the thing that the H and M have the lil long bar, and try str8er lettesr
    Cyto- Do Cleaner sketches. And you M's consistency is a lil off. Look at the bars.
    Last edited by (SoS)Viruz; 06-01-2009 at 06:57 PM.
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    That r reminds me of pies steez but thicker lettering
    nd the o has to go lol

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    She's trying to look tough in this picture haha
    (btw- i'm not in this pic. the other kid is my friend)



    Anyway, I had a great afternoon


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    Quote Originally Posted by VaNdAL xBA!x View Post
    That r reminds me of pies steez but thicker lettering
    nd the o has to go lol
    I know right....Lol O's are Bitches tho.
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    true i have this picture in my binder that says stoner n that is the only straight o ive ever drawn i fuckin hate em

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    I got 99 problems and they all bitches,
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    yo cyto u've progressed so much shit looks hot, i'd say your only trouble letter is N with some of em it doesnt quite fit with the flow of the other letters but shits good keep it comin



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    Wow didnt mean to cause so much trouble over 1 post.
    Thanks for all the advice.

    Not trying to look cocky or anything.. LAZER isnt me by the way.. lol? Sorry Im a piece of trash Toy, your guys' cocks are all at least 3 and 1/2 times bigger than mine and you are far superior. Grats.

    Ill post more up later.. see if I can get letter structure down.

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    Crits....

    JustChillin..I guess if that's the style simps you like, go for it, but I personally think that your bars are way too thick. 3D on the M looks way deeper than everything else too.
    Izoe..Looks good, O looks a bit like a D, but I have the same problem..
    Eskimo/Calor, I like it...not your cleanest, but I know its hard on skin. What markers did you use?
    Viruz, I like the first one, except the bottom extension on the G. I've never seen a finished sketch from you...but I usually like your outlines
    Cyto--I'm not really feeling the colors, but otherwise looks good.
    Sadistic--I think you could lose a few of the extension, but I like the over all look.
    Harm..You look like your understanding bars, but should go a bit simpler..


    Couple sketches...I know the first fill is kinda fucked, realized after coloring it in that the fill and black/green 3D looked just like a VIRUS sketch BSpolice posted...not an intentional bite...my bad:


    and a two-pager I'm working on:


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    Boredom ensues.
    The Most Sadistic-You're trying too hard.
    Eskimo-The O is kinda weak, but the rest is on point.
    Izoe or Izdo? Clear that O or D up.
    Mania-That's a start, now make the letters less font-ish.
    Kaizer-It looks good, but it's not. Take a few steps back.
    Fuck You

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    im liking the green and red one dude. lookin good. nice unique style
    just work on the other two.
    Last edited by ReallyTrustFullStrangers; 06-01-2009 at 08:13 PM.

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    izoe looking good bro.


 

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