harm id take out the extensions on the h and m and add 3d, pick some colors and paint it
i like it sadistic, just remember not to turn into some blackbook bomber who cant paint what he draws ya dig?
You probably suck even worse, or just as bad. Or it's yours, and you have another account
That is not raging, nor is it flaming you. He was giving you criticism. That's what people need to get better.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
^^^^New Sketch I did in school
But its weak as fuck I have no Flow wit this sketch at all. Let alone any of my sketches so Im workin on that. Other than that workin on my new R. and Probobly going to change up the O and change the way the bars good for better flow.....
^^^^^The R as a Single Letter
UMMMM as far as crits go.
Sadistic- Loose you arrow and add ons they are badly placed and you letters are a little weak as far as consitincy gose work on that.
Frizzle- Loose the thing that the H and M have the lil long bar, and try str8er lettesr
Cyto- Do Cleaner sketches. And you M's consistency is a lil off. Look at the bars.
Last edited by (SoS)Viruz; 06-01-2009 at 06:57 PM.
That r reminds me of pies steez but thicker lettering
nd the o has to go lol
She's trying to look tough in this picture haha
(btw- i'm not in this pic. the other kid is my friend)
Anyway, I had a great afternoon
true i have this picture in my binder that says stoner n that is the only straight o ive ever drawn i fuckin hate em
I got 99 problems and they all bitches,
wish i was Jigga man,
care free livin,
Wow didnt mean to cause so much trouble over 1 post.
Thanks for all the advice.
Not trying to look cocky or anything.. LAZER isnt me by the way.. lol? Sorry Im a piece of trash Toy, your guys' cocks are all at least 3 and 1/2 times bigger than mine and you are far superior. Grats.
Ill post more up later.. see if I can get letter structure down.
JustChillin..I guess if that's the style simps you like, go for it, but I personally think that your bars are way too thick. 3D on the M looks way deeper than everything else too.
Izoe..Looks good, O looks a bit like a D, but I have the same problem..
Eskimo/Calor, I like it...not your cleanest, but I know its hard on skin. What markers did you use?
Viruz, I like the first one, except the bottom extension on the G. I've never seen a finished sketch from you...but I usually like your outlines
Cyto--I'm not really feeling the colors, but otherwise looks good.
Sadistic--I think you could lose a few of the extension, but I like the over all look.
Harm..You look like your understanding bars, but should go a bit simpler..
Couple sketches...I know the first fill is kinda fucked, realized after coloring it in that the fill and black/green 3D looked just like a VIRUS sketch BSpolice posted...not an intentional bite...my bad:
and a two-pager I'm working on:
The Most Sadistic-You're trying too hard.
Eskimo-The O is kinda weak, but the rest is on point.
Izoe or Izdo? Clear that O or D up.
Mania-That's a start, now make the letters less font-ish.
Kaizer-It looks good, but it's not. Take a few steps back.
im liking the green and red one dude. lookin good. nice unique style
just work on the other two.
Last edited by ReallyTrustFullStrangers; 06-01-2009 at 08:13 PM.