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    thanks man..its not that good is it?? and apparently my word is shit so i gotta change it but thanks for the crits

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    no man i mean it
    i got an idea lets battle
    lets write pain oke?

    laterking

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    I like it ^ Last letter is kind of messed up but I like what you did with it.

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    Sweet colorsceme sanc!


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    pak een andere naam man

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    Waarom?

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    gast je naam is poep dat is gewoon niet cool

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    man your name means shit thats not cool

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    That's just a matter of opinion....don't take things to serious!
    Since when is there a no cursing rule?
    Your comming from a country with writers like nger and anus for example....and you have a chick poaring milk over her very good looking body in your signature! I'm pritty shure there are people who will find that disgusting, it's just a matter of opinion.

    now what about some advice on my sketch?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sanc_one View Post
    haha digggingg itt. As well as the Immortal Technique quote.

    Poep/Poeg?: Don't invert the last letter, unless it's supposed to be a G. The letters are pretty solid, but the fangs thing is kinda lame.
    No More Weekly Toy Battles.

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    Thanx for the critz I guess spore kind off got to me with the spiky stuff!

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    i def need work on this, crits
    fuck for some reason imageshack doesnt resize when i tell it too..o well

    sanc one- i like
    poep-like someone said u shouldnt invert the last letter, but it looks good overall
    Last edited by KJay; 05-31-2009 at 11:35 AM.
    uhh

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    Kjay - I don't like the bottom of the Z and the I bar doesn't match up with the rest of the bar sizes.
    Sanc - Not digging the eyes, but I hella like the pink.
    Poeg - Not exactly liking the spikes, but it looks good overall

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    Quote Originally Posted by true Zen View Post
    Sanc-don't like the fill. I takes away from the letter structure.
    Stussy- I like it, but whats up with the random bar on the A?
    408- I don't like the tails

    Simp I did, I want to color it....


    Close up on cowboy:
    bububump?

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    I think it looks pretty good. Is the character supposed to be like a cowboy smoking? I cant really tell. The top bar on the A looks a little thick but other than that I think it looks good.

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    true zen- its a pretty legit simple, but u should also try thinning out ur bars a little bit, and see how those look. work on ur handstyle, itll come with time. as for the character the proportions of the chest and leg look out of whack, so if u relle wanna do a cowboy character u should fix that

    now crit mine fools
    Last edited by KJay; 05-31-2009 at 12:46 PM.
    uhh

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    been bitin alot of shit just tryin to get the idea of how to put shit together i try and throw in a bit of my own ideas into it too do these look alright?? the only thing i noticed with these is there is like no light source but does it look weird the way they are??? also the only one with letters is the colored on its CJM dont know why the bars just kinda went and the C was real easy

    and i know my shading is horrible and my lines are super shakey but i have been tryin to work on that lately

    zen- i like the simple but dont really like the character
    kjay- watch proportions
    Last edited by KnoxIn; 05-31-2009 at 01:48 PM.
    if rugby were easy it would be called soccer


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    Thanks all of you guys for comments. Here is new sketch. Oh and that what is writen in cloud means: " Delicious as fuck" .... Cuz JABKA in my language means Apple ..
    Last edited by Sanc_one; 05-31-2009 at 04:33 PM.

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    Knax - Looks sick but I cant really read it.

    Sanc one - Looks awesome, colors go well and I like the way you did the outline
    Last edited by NIC; 05-31-2009 at 07:07 PM.

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    ^ don't listen to this NIC guy. You have talent man.
    That looks so mad nice.


 

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