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    snew- looks clean




    Last edited by Croat; 06-13-2009 at 06:18 AM.

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    Croat- love it !


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    the e sux i know

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    Rewz, spell "Fuck" right. It makes you look dumb otherwise. and the fade and outline is nice, but the rest sucks. The old man doesn't look very good.Trying way too hard with his face.
    Dunsy, that's a sweet weed monster, but remember, your graffiti is lacking. And your tag sucks.
    Croat, those characters are sick as fuck. Your coloring is clean, too. However, your lettering isn't very good, at least not for such a short name as SE. Your tag is ugly. If you want to progress, the ONE in the first one and the character with his tongue out, or that last one is a step in another direction as well.
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    croat-the ray man,daredevil,and iron man characters are sick

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    Quote Originally Posted by milk boxx View Post
    hoer that meko is dope
    rayz that mouth in the A is a+.
    cyto move that m closer to the etek let it overlap a bit


    crits on this? just trying a different style
    bump

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    Quote Originally Posted by DUNSY View Post
    Croat- love it !

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    +new one


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    diggin the weed one, not really the 2nd


    the E is huge i know, but yea, crits?

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    dunsy- your simples look good stick to those your trying to hard with your second one dont do extensions and watch your proportions
    dirty- i really dont like that at all... do straighter bars with good proportions and dont cover your letters so much
    if rugby were easy it would be called soccer


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    ya i dnt like it either aha

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    It seems like people say it alot, but goddamn this thread really is full of horrible shit. Especially lately.



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    Quote Originally Posted by salty302 View Post





    any suggestions/crits
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    Quote Originally Posted by KJay View Post
    comeon dude, my shit aint thaaat bad
    Your's aint, but goddamn everyone elses on this page.
    Last edited by Lunchbox; 06-14-2009 at 02:51 PM.



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    More simples


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    dunsy, your characs are hot, but your connections are a horrible lol. one thing ive noticed about connections is zig-zag shapes almost NEVER work. just a heads up.
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    dunsy- letter structure is still lackin, you need to start workin with bars to get shit right. bars dont have to be straight, make sure they all stay the same width at this point in time though
    spa- same crits as above, and you dont need to bump somethin like that over and over.
    dirty- even with bombs you gots to start simple
    milk- lose the addons on the e and f, and keep it up
    izoe- im not really feelin the last two styles, but thats just me. they aint bad just need work, the top is a nice simp though
    rewz- i like the j and s, form the e and a similar to them
    croat- your letters aint terrible, but def need work. dont worry about extensions, just get them letters down
    snew- im feelin the "thick strokes, good folks" piece, keep playin with that styles

    negros need to give real crits in this thread. its about progress.
    toybb used to be bangin, lets get all the toys started right...

    give crits to get crits in the toy forum.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lunchbox View Post
    Your's aint, but goddamn everyone elses.
    what the fuck are you talking about? Are me and Snew included in this whole generalization of yours? want to battle?

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    i think everyone in this thread could use one piece of advice, and be done with it....

    stop posting everything you do. instead of saying 'i dont like my E' or 'i didnt spend a lot of time on it' then make it so you DO like your E, or you do spend some time on it.... why would you post something that you know you can do better? just fix it, and keep fixing it, then once you like it and theres nothing you can see wrong with it.... THEN you can ask for crits

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    Quote Originally Posted by acereborn View Post
    i think everyone in this thread could use one piece of advice, and be done with it....

    stop posting everything you do. instead of saying 'i dont like my E' or 'i didnt spend a lot of time on it' then make it so you DO like your E, or you do spend some time on it.... why would you post something that you know you can do better? just fix it, and keep fixing it, then once you like it and theres nothing you can see wrong with it.... THEN you can ask for crits

    Nodding head in agreement.

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