bumpsOriginally Posted by BIGdreamSCHEME
new style I've been messing around with, just looking for whether or not you guys think it's worth pursuing or not
some crits
tearz, the throw is wack, the simple is on point
panik, wack, use bars homie
knar, pretty dope
dunsy, looks like a dsub bite like ^ said
reny you're doing noone good.
go practice for a year or something and stop trying to crit everyone when your style is still up and coming.
hey hearr,, i like the part that says jackson.. king of pop part is too little kid looking...
thicker bars, and less wiggles please.
"Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)
SKIZM..
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that's horrible
go to the new to graff thread and do bars all day for a year
Shit looks dope i wanna see that all city go out right now an fuck shit up
Some of this stuff I don't really like but I'll post 'em anyway.
Buggered up a little bit on the a, playing with a potential new name
I think I might have killed this one with the cloud, it used to look pretty good
Edit: pic butchered the colour
Sprout- new to graff thread, bars, simples.
Lusid- simple it down
jerc/knar- I was going to say something about your first stuff and then I saw your newer stuff, nice.
Last edited by letsgobombin; 07-01-2009 at 05:05 PM.
The best thing anyone can do style-wise on here is to leave.
caey; work on three d and making your letters more clean
critics????
Micheal Jackson's killer, get the hell out of here.
You do not belong in a toy section.
Don't fight against the simps!
intermidiate??
ageed michael jackson u dont not belong in the thread. haha.
I got 99 problems and they all bitches,
wish i was Jigga man,
care free livin,
I would start in the regular BB thread.
If you get kicked out, then go to intermediate.
Holy shit DYSE, that stuff is so fresh, dont ever stop
micheal jackson-your characters are sick...the deadpool one is the best
cyto-i like your style but i want to see different letter from you
cyto - the second E seems kind of hidden...and work on your 3d
just chillen - more simps
Mj's killer - im with big blue see what they say in the lookie lookie black bookie thread unless advised to post elsewhere
sprout - that looks like a mess. may be its just me you need to work with more bars
letsgobombing- keep up the simps get some flow to your letters
"Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)
thanks i just started though so im still pretty toy
you serious? youre coloring skills are off the charts if you work on your letters you have a lot of potential
"Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)
WTF Are you doing in here man!!!??? Go to the exprienced thread or at least the intermeidate. You got dope coloring and letters.
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