Hepos a lot I bit. Its what ever. I had a block the whole.....Summer so decided to try somethin new its whatever. Im toy I CAN BITE BITCHES
Viruz - first of all u changed the style towards the end, also d a are both widely open , sik do not open up that much, also in regard to the change of style sik have flat bottom , d a are kinda sharp. i kinda like ur s n d though. id loose extension of the a , even up the bottoms and throw away i k waay to big n well u know, u say itz unfinished so i believe ur aware of stylechange ,uve to pay attention to give em all same space and the flow.
Best Crit I got. Thanks Ill work on that
sprout- haha love it, im gettin ready to listen to that song btw
kringe- thats tight. sick colors
dreaken1993- the second is the shit yo
kcmo/jackson county writers pm me
just something super simple to paint maybe
dasik - that shits dope, your IK seems a little plain compared to the rest of it though
aenok - pretty cool, too many squiggly lines in your throw, and i dont like how you connected your A and E in the top one
^^ Ya Janek it would be a good one on a wall. Looks good though
I write "NEET"
Dont like my D's,
Janek- there's something about that K that I don't quite like, maybe angle the top bar more?
Aenok- on the top one, make the bars all the same size and keep the letters simple, and on the bottom one, the A and E are just bad, i'd say stay away from tryin that style for now
Dasik- Looks killer, the leg of the K looks a little off, but other that its sick
Lein- try to bring down your L so its on the same level as the rest of the letters
Here's a quick thing I done, really horrible
Last edited by crossfire101; 08-11-2009 at 07:52 AM.
lol everyone is just posting but not giving crits...
GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM
But as kind as i am, ill crit most of you
@nuce4 Good work, now colour it in
@crossfire straighten up your lines, cut some curves
@Save and kill, put letters more close to eachother
@janker-dope man put it on a wall
@sesh-it-up do it in one line and not so messy
@dreaken 1993, work on your 2nd throw, less is more.
@kringe, let the colours flow more
@skizm your S needs work
Last edited by massacreman; 08-11-2009 at 10:04 AM. Reason: grammar
DIRTIER THEN YOUR DAD'S BROWSING HISTORY
i don't like how the bottom bar of the K comes off of the top one. if you look at a K, both bars connect at the same spot. K's are one of the easiest letters to funk, because of the fact that they have so many bars going in all different directions. you could do so much more with that letter.
otherwise, it's a solid simple. the J flows nice. maybe shorten the bottom bar of the E so it's not longer than the others. keep your bars the same width throughout the piece.