Blackbooks

[thedudeman]

^^^^ New style.......Whatever bad ish

hepos much??

[(SoS)Viruz]

Hepos a lot I bit. Its what ever. I had a block the whole.....Summer so decided to try somethin new its whatever. Im toy I CAN BITE BITCHES

[lord_plankton]

Viruz - first of all u changed the style towards the end, also d a are both widely open , sik do not open up that much, also in regard to the change of style sik have flat bottom , d a are kinda sharp. i kinda like ur s n d though. id loose extension of the a , even up the bottoms and throw away i k waay to big n well u know, u say itz unfinished so i believe ur aware of stylechange ,uve to pay attention to give em all same space and the flow.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Best Crit I got. Thanks Ill work on that

[hpir]

bump

crits?

[sprout]

[IMG][/IMG]

[kringe]

bump

[b SQUARED 08]

Here's one I played around with in Photoshop for a friend of mine:

Bump from a few pages back; didn't get a single crit...

[B.S. POLICE]

^^^^^Unfinshed......Thinkin about going....back to my old dope name lol. I think I will....It was better than what I was doing now.....But Crits

bump this! deff the most solid shit ive seen from you latelly, work of this style man i see a lot of potential

[dreaken1993]

[Sesh-it-up]

[noholdups_jusswrite]

sprout- haha love it, im gettin ready to listen to that song btw
kringe- thats tight. sick colors
dreaken1993- the second is the shit yo

[klic]

just something super simple to paint maybe



dasik - that shits dope, your IK seems a little plain compared to the rest of it though

aenok - pretty cool, too many squiggly lines in your throw, and i dont like how you connected your A and E in the top one

[Eon 1]

^^ Ya Janek it would be a good one on a wall. Looks good though

[Fury]

Hella good shit on this page.

[Save and Kill]

Dont like my D's,

Janek- there's something about that K that I don't quite like, maybe angle the top bar more?

Aenok- on the top one, make the bars all the same size and keep the letters simple, and on the bottom one, the A and E are just bad, i'd say stay away from tryin that style for now

Dasik- Looks killer, the leg of the K looks a little off, but other that its sick

Lein- try to bring down your L so its on the same level as the rest of the letters

[crossfire101]

Here's a quick thing I done, really horrible

[nuce4]

some shit for a friend

crits~

[massacreman]

lol everyone is just posting but not giving crits...
GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM
But as kind as i am, ill crit most of you
@nuce4 Good work, now colour it in
@crossfire straighten up your lines, cut some curves
@Save and kill, put letters more close to eachother
@janker-dope man put it on a wall
@sesh-it-up do it in one line and not so messy
@dreaken 1993, work on your 2nd throw, less is more.
@kringe, let the colours flow more
@skizm your S needs work

[La Coka Nostra]

just something super simple to paint maybe

i don't like how the bottom bar of the K comes off of the top one. if you look at a K, both bars connect at the same spot. K's are one of the easiest letters to funk, because of the fact that they have so many bars going in all different directions. you could do so much more with that letter.

otherwise, it's a solid simple. the J flows nice. maybe shorten the bottom bar of the E so it's not longer than the others. keep your bars the same width throughout the piece.