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    Bezar- Try to keep your letters even
    Trest-that shit's tight
    Faser-Ummm Try to get a little more complex with it?
    Astro-Just keep workin at it I can see it coming along nicely
    Murphy- Bangin bunny!
    Krep-That shit is pretty straight.


    Sorry if I posted a little too much I'm just happy cuz I actually LIKe the stuff I do now.
    Crits?

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    newest thing I did

    Destroy- Keep your letters the same size, bring in the leg of your R and connect it to the top part.

    Trestoner- I like the bottom one better, maybe too many arrows on it but hell pretty good.

    Astro- the only one I like is the bottom one, but on that one keep the letters the same size and use bars

    Ding- Make the top leg of your K bigger perhaps, and personally I would extend the top of the E further or make the middle bar of the E shorter.

    Soy- the top one is good, color it man

    Stuck- I like those, some of them seem like there's a tad to much going on in them, but keep it up

    Murphy- that bunny is legit, the axe looks a tad off but no big it's still sick

    Ghoul- the top one and the bottom one are dope, the "teeth monster" is clean too, try coloring them

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    Thanks man usually the middle one is a lot more clean. That's just the only one of that style I have on hand. About to work on another one.
    Oh and Teethy monster is usually Red. XD

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    Aek - second one, you should get rid of the arrows and maybe extend the shadow more, try it in 3d
    save and kill - R looks bad, shadow is off... keyboard letters
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    I already posted this in the characs thread, but here's a sketch I did last night of Deadmau5:

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    ^^ Looks to me that you have to go simpler and keep the same bar width.



    E's....... Not my forte'
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    even though i dont wanna admit but your shit is not as gay as it used to be but still gay.

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    this is my suggestion


    The upper trow is nice but i dont like faces in throws
    OHKER 24
    DIRTIER THEN YOUR DAD'S BROWSING HISTORY

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    To every one, Thanks...

    Quote Originally Posted by Save and Kill
    Murphy- that bunny is legit, the axe looks a tad off but no big it's still sick
    Yeah it was a last second thing to hide a mistake that i made. But thanks...

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    Quote Originally Posted by eel2 View Post
    yo i was thinkin that if i broke into the major news studios in my city and did a little marker tag on all the camera lenses, that when they filmed the news my tag would just be in the middle of the screen on tv. my question is what should i use that would go on glass well? was thinking like a pencil? maybe glass etch thatd bereally cool

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    Quote Originally Posted by DestroyLA View Post
    make the Z flow


    flickr.com/gratisdbth

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    Quote Originally Posted by weakfingers View Post
    ^^ Looks to me that you have to go simpler and keep the same bar width.



    E's....... Not my forte'
    ur throws r killer man...

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    Quote Originally Posted by EST2007 View Post
    make the Z flow


    i'd say make all the other letters flow with the Z.
    they're all hurting except that one.
    got bars where they don't belong.

    don't double up bars in the middle of B's and R's. they combine in the middle to form one.
    i don't want a signature.

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    Quote Originally Posted by b SQUARED 08 View Post
    I already posted this in the characs thread, but here's a sketch I did last night of Deadmau5:
    This would make a sick ass slap.. you should try to make some slaps like that cause I definatly would wat some of those.
    I write "NEET"

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    Bokz

    TFS

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon 1 View Post
    This would make a sick ass slap.. you should try to make some slaps like that cause I definatly would wat some of those.
    me too !

    WGONE really nice, awesome coloring
    tasty i like your style

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    tasty - shit'd be crazy on a wall
    wgone - your on to something



    i know u guys r gonna hate the spade. but crits anyways?

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    I'm gonna get my buddy to add lettering.... only because i suck at it......

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastySesamcrew View Post

    Bokz

    TFS
    looks mad fresh, the letters are in check, the color scheme is on point, i like the whole ice cream/ candy vibe you got going, too.
    GET YOUR BARS UP.


 

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