Originally Posted by Abor Rudest
Yo me and daws are friends, i made me and him a stick
and i didnt steal that pic. its aight i see why ur mad. but meh no big deal i am over it
Yo me and daws are friends, i made me and him a stick
and i didnt steal that pic. its aight i see why ur mad. but meh no big deal i am over it
crits?
the connection on the o sould be a little more defined.
i like the s alot and the tail on the y is like a rat tail
for viruz
shitty throw, for bbv
arsen - dont do x's for holes. do it slower, i can tell you went through it too fast by the little flicks at the end of your lines. lose the faces in your letters, dont worry about 3D/shadow for now. keep your letters proportional, the right leg on your A is a lot bigger than the left. another thing your doing is covering one leg with the other. take your A for example. the right leg cuts off the left when it comes up. you should make them both come up and merge together if you know what i mean. same thing with your N. keep practicing, fill up pages full of hollow throws, and dont rush it as much
arsen slow your pace down like janek said, take your time its paper not a highway sign, the xs and face don't do much for it either, keep it proportionate also
janek I like your simps for everyone, correction just about everything you sketch I'm feelin
soy - def connect that o, I'm not to keen of the extensions on the s or the y though
trying more new shit, crit away I'm not too fond of the r though
in no way do I condone graffiti or illegal vandalization of others property, I only document it
we ride together
^thanks
your 3D doesnt make any sense, its going to the bottom right in some places (the right side of your K) and its going to the left in others (ie. your R). i like your E. one of the most helpful crits ive ever gotten is rounding out the ends of your bars, i think you should do that
Few Sketches
Just toyin with styles, depth, and shapes... startin to get into color a bit too. Theres a few I still wont even touch with color...dont wanna mess em up
Last edited by Predator15; 08-12-2009 at 08:35 PM.
just somthin id like to tryy..pls comment on this one
just somthin id like to tryy..pls comment on this one
^i like it. but your handstyle needs a lot of work
ding, the K on that piece needs some work, and that 'e' in your handy needs to be completely different, make it the same style as the rest of your handy.
im feelin the rest of that piece besides the k though.
1. dont be a biter mr.graffiticreator.COM
2. dont get your shit off the internet unless it is advice
3. key-board letters
4. you suck
5. welcome to bombing science
SLIPYx3 MEGEEE
1.Everyone starts as a biter...thats how you learn.
2.While its true I've played with graffiti creator (p.s.- apparently so have you cause you recognized something I was trying to immulate...but who cares) if i draw something I saw once maybe I can take it and make something new or just find out I dont like it. If it makes ya feel better though I didnt just strait make somethin up on creator and draw what I saw. I just tried drawin somethin new based off new styles I saw in there
3.What are keyboard letters?
4.Wasnt that part of the rules of the whole "toys" forum. I'm perfectly aware of my skill level or more so "I suck". I get that...tryin to get past that and be better. But thanks for the "constructive" criticism.
5.And thanks for the "welcome"...really I mean that
6.If I sound like a smartass...well maybe I am...but its only because I'm tryin to figure out how to get better. Thanks for the reply
Predator, draw a straight letter of your own design, post it, we'll crit. Word? Word.
SHUT THE FUCK UP
1) Biting and inspiration are two COMPLETELY different things. Start simple and be original!
2) Get off that graffiti creator shit
3) The letters you see on your keyboard... Simple letters
4) you suck. no one cares about your feelings.
7) i dont have to number this shit correctly if i don't want to
my "smart ass reply" was your welcome and thats how you will be treated untill you make progresion
SLIPYx3 MEGEEE
No feelings involved at all homey...just questions and a desire to get better. And like I said if I'm a smartass my bad. We are who we are. I jus wanna be better dude and underneath it all deres still respect. I'm off to try some shit. Thanks for the replies
Last edited by Predator15; 08-12-2009 at 09:18 PM.
Predator, you gotta put in some more work. Graffiti illustrator or wherever you're checking will only give you one stylo, and the stuff you're adding, takes away from any style it had to begin with. Try different things.
Stupid hipster styles, fun stuff. Gwaan ditch this S. I also lined the U wrong, Conan got interesting and I stopped paying attention to what I was doing.
I think your M is too busy for the other letters.
I wouldn't put the curve on the top of the Y, either
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