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  1. #92481

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    dont make it so windy like a toilet bowl or whatever haha. stick to the bars and you should be fine.
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    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
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    chocolate milk is amazing.
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    I heard fromthegrave likes it in the butt!!!

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    HIP-HOP
    its been a couple months sense i have done anything but i dont think i lost nothing but i dind't gain anything either i gotta clean it up an finish it but how it look so far??

    turkey- shit is whack do simples
    rip- you got the right idea fer sure just keep at it
    if rugby were easy it would be called soccer


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    some shit i'm workin on

    i like the S but im not so crazy about the p

    i think i'm gonna shorten the bar that comes str8 down on the s




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    are poster paints good for black books
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    is your mom good for fucking?
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    i like to spike my gelato with vicadin...their like little sprinkles that take the pain away...

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    Default Tryin to be Simple

    Let me know if it seems like too much is goin on with my letters. I dont know I just dont seem amused unless its got some like arms or arrows or somethin to it
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    can i get crits on my simple? i know its sloppy.
    Quote Originally Posted by vman View Post
    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
    Quote Originally Posted by La Coka Nostra View Post
    chocolate milk is amazing.
    Quote Originally Posted by COBALT View Post
    I heard fromthegrave likes it in the butt!!!

  6. #92486

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    blacktodafuture- make the top of the S more notice able, i could barely tell it was an S, also loose all connections you have, dont do those for awhile longer, or until you're bomb at simps. hopefully that helps

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    Fear reduces our ability to love,
    when there is no fear people are at their potential,
    and that is what most are afraid of..
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    ya man its pretty crazy people were goin nuts on the first day i saw some dude get hit by a car it was fuckin awsome

  7. #92487

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    bumpin this shiz for crits or w/e u guys call it

    !!RuTeZoNeR!!
    CWB NFK NCK THC

  8. #92488

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    peg-looks like a good start, finish it and ill have more to say
    predator- keep trying, you'll feel like its boring at first, but once you get it youll start getting more amused than you ever did.
    blacktodafuture- i can't see yours.
    sheltr- i dont like that kind of style, so i cant give any tips/crits
    trest- your piece gets smaller as you go on, try making two straight lines on the page and keeping the piece inside those lines to help you.

    been told these belong in here.


  9. #92489

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    now thats some actuall good advice . only thing on yours is the k throws me off. keep at it man
    Last edited by Trestoner707; 08-17-2009 at 12:14 AM.
    !!RuTeZoNeR!!
    CWB NFK NCK THC

  10. #92490

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    skeez just clean it up a bit and make sure all the shadows go to the same focal point
    your close, but no cigar. and the o could use some reworking and i like the background you did to it
    the second is alright, but the r dosnt quite pop as much as the t or e do

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    thoughts/crits?

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    skeez...im diggin the word write...
    kcmo/jackson county writers pm me

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    id sya calm it down a little donald. go proper. give no one nothing to bitch about. n abandon that star thing
    !!RuTeZoNeR!!
    CWB NFK NCK THC

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    HIP-HOP
    letters are finished i hate the whole HOP but oh well crits?? and any ideas for a background?

    donald- just watch your proportions and if i were you i would loose those little curly ends on all your shit
    if rugby were easy it would be called soccer


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    Quote Originally Posted by Save and Kill View Post
    Murphy- the crink in his tail is the only thing I dont like, the rest of it is legit, I'd like to see stuff you do on a canvas no joke.
    Thanks man

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    \warming up to a new name
    "Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
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    stuck is my hero.

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    stuck- on the first one im feeling the d v o and r the E just throws it off for me looks scrunched. and on the second one the V looks to plain, all your letters have small extension except for the V makes it look out of place. mayb try an extension to the left on the top left side or something, i can see youre experimenting from all the eraser marksand thats good. it means you'll progress fast. just keep at it and youll get there.

    working on an exhcange ill have up later.

  18. #92498

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    diggin those devor simples. skeetz pretty much summed up everything, and aside from that i just think your handstyles need work, but those always have room for improvement haha.

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    its all done well i might throw in some other shit i dunno crits??

    devor- lookin good you know how to use bars watch your proportions and stuff though
    if rugby were easy it would be called soccer


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    just a quick whatever pencil sketch


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    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
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    chocolate milk is amazing.
    Quote Originally Posted by COBALT View Post
    I heard fromthegrave likes it in the butt!!!


 

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