Blackbooks

[UpstateHate585]

[QUOTE=IlikePie;1453939

Your sketch is a bunch of tumors that mimic letters. You're doing it all wrong.
And for me a sketch goes anywhere from 10 minutes, to a week, depending on how much I procrastinate. I drop stuff, and come back to it way later.[/QUOTE]

how are you supposed to do "tumors" lol. i thought they had to go with the letters.

anyways, here are some thngs i did when i woke up. camera died sorry for crap cell phone pics.



start of an s. not sure if i should continue working on it. hows it looking?

[IlikePie]

Do not continue.

[UpstateHate585]

Do not continue.

can i ask whats wrong with it?

well i decided to mess with it some more anyways

[Stuck]

i like pie...i lol'd at ur sig

[BlacktodaFuture]

the A doesnt follow the flow of S. fuck.

[BlacktodaFuture]

all freestyled

[-sense-]

upstate
i like that home one..it looked like love or hove at first tho.
i dont think its that bad, you got the right idea

[TURKEYDINNER]

blacktothefuture... that s is wack as fuck sorry. the a looks alright



critz

[UpstateHate585]

upstate
i like that home one..it looked like love or hove at first tho.
i dont think its that bad, you got the right idea

thanks man, it has been a year since i have sketched anything.


BORE- i would say try to keep the bars the same size in each letter. and the weird tentacles on the k needs to go

[TURKEYDINNER]

took some time on a sketch for once...



crits pleeaaasse

[BlacktodaFuture]

clean up your lines and what your 3d.

[UpstateHate585]

Bore- better than the last one. like black said, clean the lines up. and the 3-d is off in some parts.

[drOping]

Here is some stuff
Crits?

[UpstateHate585]

go more simple. and on a side note, i have the same bed covers.

here's my first sketch for the vapor battle. crits? sorry for shit pic

[BlacktodaFuture]

also watch your bars alittle bit, some are vering off. (to droping)

[WERMS TWO]

bump for critz...
noodles: drop the extensions just keep workin on the actual structure of your letters
specter: use bars and try to use the letters on your keybord
nase: i cant relly come up with a crit on that besides drop that line going through evry thin and jus work on the stucture
trash: thats fire right there... color that it [/b]

yo there is a fire ass werms out there, google him, id change the name if i were you...shits lookin nice though

TRASH, i didnt quote your pic but it was on like pg 1838 or something, you need to move the top of the R and top of the A closer so theres no gap and itll look ill, H kills, and it doesnt flow that much becasue some letters are more edgy and some too rounded[/QUOTE]


YEAH CHECK THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[shem]

blacktodafuture- go simpler ur tryin to hard.




fucked up the m.

[BlacktodaFuture]

the S looks like a throw.

[fromthegrave]

shem fix up the s and m a little bit and that would be a legit simple

[BlacktodaFuture]

i got lazy. im starting to hate this, way too many unnecessary extensions