Blackbooks

[MARTYRaz]

bore start with straight letter bars til u got them down..
barks gettin better..keep at it..

no room for the R...

BUMP for critssssss....

[BlacktodaFuture]

the A needs to be fixed.

[ArtDamage]

The V also needs to be fattened up a bit in my opinion.

["art threat"]

sheeeed.. i like it.. it flows well

["art threat"]

crits yo

[shem]

quick sketch

["art threat"]

nice flow

[the strange one]

[QUOTE=funhouseXcast;1458868]same i like what i see but your S is too big and it doesn't seem to fit in with the other letters.

cheers yeah i noticed that after you said it..thought it was a little bigger when i did it lol

shem-nice that!

scooby do:

[clokkz]

Crits on this?
@ the strange one: im likin this but im not too sure about that A. right side you know like the stem is a little ehhh backwards lookin i guess? it might look chill if the S was the same size as the rest as well symetry is tha way to go! sides that its lookin fine.

[Save and Kill]

Can I get some help with the 3d on this?


Funhouse- Your S doesn't seem to fit with the other letters

Shem- the middle of the M dips down too low

The Strange one- the A is kinda odd and make the letters the same size

Clokkz- Good that your trying to use bars but ease off on the extensions (especially on the R) and the add ons, still stick to simples

[drOping]

Strange one: I just don't know how i feel...was never a fan of bubbles, but yea balance out that S a bit..would look more pleasing

Strive: Less boxy, round some shit off, the T looks too bent!



I was thinking of name change...to Slek, pronounced sleek...crits?

[HalfGangstaShit]

Little something I worked on earlier tonight

[drOping]

save and kill:try to go down and to the right at like a 45 degree

[Save and Kill]

Will do, thanks

[nickstix]

halfgangstashit-your bars are uneven in some spots, also maybe try not slanting all of the letters
save and kill-the 3d isnt terrible, to get the feel of 3d try placing a dot on the page, and connecting each edge with a ruler so you know its right
clokkz-go simple, your letters lack alot of letter structure in places
Thestrangeone-your S and A are too wide compared to your M and E
Shem-I really like those letters...simple but not boring to look at. you should fill it

I havent been sketching too much recently but figured Id post what Ive done most recently...

^An 'E'

^Trying some extensions on my 'R'

Crits please

[HalfGangstaShit]

Yeah I feel you mane, I wasn't too sure about them bars. But good looks man I'll keep it in mind.

[the strange one]

nickstix- love the E but i think your R could get mistaken for an A

clokkz,save+kill,half gang shit and dr0p thanks for the size fuck up notice haha
was just a quick one i did....so yeah i'll take more time and get my sizes nice
cheers for the crits tho!

half gang- i think i might have to say the bars on that are a little out too in places but thats just me....could be cool with big fatter bars too me thinks but thats your choice dude

[the strange one]

would have done this nicer but i had two markers and a white pencil

[barks]

[Facedorateur]

RUNCI- the first one sucks, the second one is better, trty to stick with simples

Crits