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    Quote Originally Posted by SEEP View Post
    It's nice and clean, but the Es don't match the S and P. They also kinda slant down but the S and P don't.



    A character i just drew. Should i color it?

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    melo; try moving the 0 a little more to the right, it looks like the 0 is hiding behind the l.
    says snore.
    Last edited by gumOnShoe; 09-07-2009 at 04:11 PM.
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    well. where to start.

    spam that shit's clean, all your bars look good. S doesn't really fit in. I think you should try a little overlap though.

    kingdom hearts the whole thing has a nice flow, but all of the letter individually are pretty ugly. go simpler, with less attachment bars.

    knar (hgs) i like that slap, except the face is not even remotly similar to an A. and i know you write knar. not kn(vowel face)r

    Dlae work on keeping your bars the same width. and take your time on the fill or it looks like shit.

    stotwhat the fuck. simpler.

    and finally seep you are listening to the almighty forum by starting simple. *virtual high five* If you keep putting work in you'll pass everybody you see in no time. but stay simple for now, I'll do your name for you and submit it later.

    now me. destroy it. tear me apart. make me do it better.

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    now me. destroy it. tear me apart. make me do it better.
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    it's dope in my book, but try to bring the t up, rather than slanting it to the left.

    now crit mine.
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    Quote Originally Posted by funhouseXcast View Post
    well. where to start.

    spam that shit's clean, all your bars look good. S doesn't really fit in. I think you should try a little overlap though.

    kingdom hearts the whole thing has a nice flow, but all of the letter individually are pretty ugly. go simpler, with less attachment bars.

    knar (hgs) i like that slap, except the face is not even remotly similar to an A. and i know you write knar. not kn(vowel face)r

    Dlae work on keeping your bars the same width. and take your time on the fill or it looks like shit.

    stotwhat the fuck. simpler.

    and finally seep you are listening to the almighty forum by starting simple. *virtual high five* If you keep putting work in you'll pass everybody you see in no time. but stay simple for now, I'll do your name for you and submit it later.

    now me. destroy it. tear me apart. make me do it better.

    dope man, thanks a ton, looking forward to it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by LeaksOne View Post
    geski i dont like your G not one bit. your E looks more like a G to me.
    Word, thanks man. I've actualy just worked out something new and already changed it. The K and the G should be worked out, more or less, now. I'll get flicks in awhile.

    Don't be such a masochist about it, man. lol.

    Fill the S out, so it sits better next to your A.
    Shorten the extensions on your E just a touch.
    Shorten the base of your 2, round it out (Follows more of a circle), and make the weight sit right above its base.

    Nice stuff otherwise man. Tops out most of my simples, even as it stands. Haha.
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    gum on shoe sorry i missed you. you posted while i was looking at the others.uhm let's see. make your letters more proportional. the get too wide at the ends, and make the "O" hole a bit bigger. it doesn't have to be regular sized, but that's a bit too small imo.

    vvv the big thing isn't really for flow, more for just letter ideas. i don't do P's. sorry

    there ya go buddy. didn't know exactly what you wanted so i stayed pretty simple but tryed to steer you the right way. i check in quite often. especially here, so ill give you little motivational boosters whenever you progress.

    thanks for the crits ill work on it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Divine89 View Post


    "kingdom hearts"

    I was bored.

    Crits?
    Simples. blocked letter, u kno like the ones on ur keyboard. dont try no funky shit, addons or even color. Get that letter structure down until u get borrred.


    I AM FEELING THIS!!!!! simple and sweet, paint it.



    dont start fillin rock the simples they look sick when they are done right, look at drakula/raby i rember when he was like u, now he just rocks the oldskool simples with abit of an edge.

    empty can same for u.

    seep. dont get people to show u simples only way ur gonna learn is by doin it urself only way u gonna get better.

    had something to show u but i cant find it right now.
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    I messed up on the 3D with the first E on the bottom seep. (i need help with shadows and 3d in general)
    Last edited by SEEP; 09-07-2009 at 05:08 PM. Reason: adding text

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    Seep. look at this.


    understand how each letter connects
    Last edited by -ShAmEE-; 09-07-2009 at 05:17 PM.
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    Seep. look at this.



    understand how each letter connects
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    filled in the m space with blue as well

    which looks better

    satez- the only this i dislike is the top of your z
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    Quote Originally Posted by ThatguywhodrinksTea View Post

    i like the new l, keep that, try matching the bottom of the e with the l, also drop down the middle part of m, and make the the 0 circular.
    oh yeah, and make the 0 straight, don't slant it towards the l.
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    and make the the 0 circular.
    oh yeah, and make the 0 straight

    >.< make up ur mind rofl
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    Quote Originally Posted by ThatguywhodrinksTea View Post
    and make the the 0 circular.
    oh yeah, and make the 0 straight

    >.< make up ur mind rofl
    i mean stand the 0 up straight.
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    this would be a straight letter not an actual piece



    this would be a piece, different colours tho

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jokz View Post


    this would be a straight letter not an actual piece



    this would be a piece, different colours tho
    that looks really good.
    idk what to crit about it...
    ah, i got it, try connecting the bottom part of the k or the bottom leg to the first bar on the straight letter.
    Last edited by gumOnShoe; 09-07-2009 at 06:01 PM.
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    sure, anything that can help

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    here a rocky simple...
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    looks fine, only thing that cud be better is the "S"
    but those are tricky. get some 3d on those just for fun and see how it looks


 

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