Blackbooks

[suparjafar]

ryser, im diggin the second one. i dont really like the third y but then again youre 10x better than me so thats just my opinion.

took your advice, this getting any better? attempt 1

[thedudeman]

Ryser im diggin it keep doin your thang and snaw make your lines clean not so choppy

[BlacktodaFuture]

safe, you need to work on your S. The second piece, the S looks like a J and in the third one you need to connect the top part. For the first one, get rid of that bar on the A


how many bars does it take to draw an R? i've been having some trouble in finding the structure. If someone could draw up a simple R with the bars showing, it'd be great and i could get some ideas from it.

it cant look like a J bc it wouldnt follow the structure

[BlacktodaFuture]

it cant look like a J bc it wouldnt follow the structure

flow*

[littlerocky]

old

got stkipped... and namer that shit rains steez. especialy that last one so heavy.so so ill.

[UpstateHate585]

wasnt there a name on here who was pretty good?

[thedudeman]

wasnt there a name on here who was pretty good?

yea, its me

[UpstateHate585]

idk man, the shit i saw was like mad good lol. no offense.

[BlacktodaFuture]

crits.

namer= dope
snaw= good work just keep practicing, clean up your lines
ryser= watch your flow in some places

[drOping]

yo Ryser your shits coming along very well...just keep pumpin em out!

[suparjafar]

i cleaned up my lines a tiny bit, and i know the s is too big. tips, crits anything? blacktodafuture, awesome

[Dek2]

is this a pretty good simple?

[suparjafar]

keep those bars the same width

[gumOnShoe]

i cleaned up my lines a tiny bit, and i know the s is too big. tips, crits anything? blacktodafuture, awesome

cleaned up the lines, you say... one part of the s is normal, while the rest is all chicken scratched like hell.

[Rank-oner!]

Whats up BS havent been on in a minute.

Namer lookin solid.

some quick paint pen sketches

[drOping]

Yo Rank im diggin that fo sho!

I don't know where to really post this but...just finished it...took me a while!

[thedudeman]

if that ^^^ was done with better supplies it would look pretty fresh.. go cop up on some prismas or sumthin

[EGO31]

eyes on character too big. Sorry, unless you're going for the cartoon steez, then they' are too small and it's too lifelike.
Other than that it's rad and you've made me jealous. I have no inspiration at the moment. And some walls just came up!

[MaNtS]

Thats one of namers from a while back,


more recent.



repping the nova bud, where bouts in syd u from?

[UpstateHate585]

im confused haha. the first one reminds me of the dude im talkin about. namer, did u used to have a sig with i think 2wood panels painted? if you're the same name, i honestly like the older stuff better.