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    Quote Originally Posted by <<Fathem>> View Post
    OH and gam, thx for at least being respectful....hope that youll help me out a little more in the futuer?
    Dont worry about it, just keep trying, remeber you cant get worse if you practice. Just keep posting your stuff.

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    i tried hard. i posted in intermediate but i feel like it's in between here and there.

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    Sir go way simpler. The S on the first one is hurtin. it gets way too skinny in the middle.

    Gam use bars to make your letters. They go from really skinny to really fat. and i can tell you didnt use bars for your letter structure.

    Fathem, what mostly everyone says, go simpler and start off really basic. your lines are also a bit sketchy and choppy. Someone told me to use your wrist as a hinge to draw cleaner and straighter lines.

    Snaw you're really working on it a low eh? Glad to see you keep trying over and over. But you should fatten up the S

    keep it up

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    gam- use bars, and cover up some white space, and lurk some threads to get leter structure inspiration keep it simple though

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    Quote Originally Posted by funhouseXcast View Post


    i tried hard. i posted in intermediate but i feel like it's in between here and there.
    dude that is raw seriously... don't post in this thread lmao... that is pretty tight.


    I suck with simples. >.>!

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    Ok, so I've worked on it for a while, I think this is an improvement...but ill see what you guys have to say...
    Last edited by <<Fathem>>; 09-30-2009 at 12:30 AM.
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    dude write straight letters same size write your name over and over until u get a style developing.

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    suparjafar: yeah, thats what i did for the past like hour haha....ok, so basicly your sayin that my letters should be an equal size to make this look better? And as for the style, whats making it look like, well there isnt any? (in your opinion)
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    for now, yeah and i really dont get the second part..lol but im gonna guess you mean developing a handstyle..you just gotta keep practicing and writing it over and over and it'll start to tweak over time and just keep writing it and you'll develop a style i dont know how to explain it

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    I dont know too much about handstyles, but yours is decent. The A doesnt look too much like an A rather than a N. try to point the top of it more. Also the Arrow on the left is totally unnecessary.

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    ^use bars
    trying to improve...

    sticking to basics
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    Lol, ***** said use bars.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 408Bomber View Post
    dude that is raw seriously... don't post in this thread lmao... that is pretty tight.


    I suck with simples. >.>!

    P.s. any bay writers in sj pm me.
    bump for crits.
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    Default ok...heres what i got...

    After litterly 4 double sided pages of writing my name, i think i got the tag down...correct me if im wrong
    Last edited by <<Fathem>>; 09-30-2009 at 12:30 AM.
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    test
    FUCK TITS SHIT HELL
    CUNT FAG WHORE SLUT
    FUCKER
    end test

    conclusion: i dont get BBV's post at all.

    snaw: looks good (left especially) keep those simps up. use uppercase N. dont let the curls of the S touch its middle. and the W in second is too bubbly compared to rest and use bars. actually. let them overlap instead of guessing where they should meet

    krump. your getting the idea. straighter letters

    fathem - no arrows, no unattached mid E line, no attached A to F, have Cross bar for A, have consistent height + width pls, and straighter simpler letters for now. and dont use your sketch pad for tag practice (if that is what it is) and for the love of allah dont put that in the street
    Last edited by Epoc; 09-29-2009 at 10:06 PM.
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    dawg, YOU AREN'T CHANGING ANYTHING.
    letters made of arrows = WHACK.
    letters made from parts of other letters = WHACK.
    letters that are smaller than other letters = WHACK.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Epoc View Post
    test
    FUCK TITS SHIT HELL
    CUNT FAG WHORE SLUT
    FUCKER
    end test
    wtf?
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    Quote Originally Posted by BigBlueViolence View Post
    dawg, YOU AREN'T CHANGING ANYTHING.
    letters made of arrows = WHACK.
    letters made from parts of other letters = WHACK.
    letters that are smaller than other letters = WHACK.
    well fuck, i got four different ppl sayin four differnt things...you say no arrows someone else says improve a letter and its good...i cant fucking please everyone, and besides in the end its my tag.
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    Ok... what's your tag name? I'll do a quick simple tag for you >.>!
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    Quote Originally Posted by eel2 View Post
    YA! FAG!
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    and bump this


    Last edited by BigBlueViolence; 09-29-2009 at 10:12 PM.


 

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