^here i go
you mean the the n and e? like dyNE?
The E looks out of place to me (DYNE), but whatever, mine isnt very good anyway. I can see a few things wrong with it but here it is
Static- The thin line in the middle of the S kinda throws off the piece. Try and keep the separation between the two fill colors on each of the letters about the same throughout. The bubbles are nice. The 3d is off- check your vantage point
DYNE- Im liking your Y and N, looks like they'
re just lounging, I'd suggest getting the D and E that same kinda feel to them to make the over all piece flow all the way though. 3D, outline and bubbles on point
Knemo- That K looks really weird to me, again get that hole in the middle of the O bigger to get that bar consistency all the way through
Shem- I'm liking the style of the S,H and M but that E is missing what the other letters got- I think that the S,H and H all got a point where some of the bars get really thin except the E- all those bars are fat all around.
Half Gangsta- That is a tight ass monkey- for a girl I'm guessing?
STFU- I wont lie, at a glance that first piece looks really fresh, but when I sit and look at it i starts to loose its appeal- those are some mean throwies
Dee- Those colors hurt my eyes- new to graffiti thread
wom- pretty clean but i can tell you used a ruler and idk im not really a big fan of it i mena its a good start but that whole super tweeked 3d jsut
tweeked tomuch stand it up more and nnot as srteched
Dont really practice anything but throws and tags, just starting to get into simples/straight an shit
Knar- Your shits lookin solid to me, nice simples
Shell man, that reminds me of the Metallica logo hehe.
Radawg, I'm not feelin' the bulges on the R and the A, maybe it's just personal prefrence, I don't know.
Been re-thinking my throw, what do you guys think of these?
fuck yesh. if i used taz as a throw I'd handstyle "dont" before it and "me bro" after.
mid one has potential ther others suk.
Don't mean to play the dumb shit but you've lost me there, haha. Any sugestions on how to fix/improve it? Or am I starting again... Again
I'm bored shitless here if you can't tell...
The first one is heading in the right direction,keep working with that. All the other ones suck except the last one but its obvious you didn't do that one
Im also reallllybored.
I did actually, I just spent more than 5 minutes on it... Thanks anyway.