jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesus christOriginally Posted by <<Fathem>>
don't mean to be rude but i'll be blatant it's awful check out the new to graff thread
drop all arrows an go simple
jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesus christ
don't mean to be rude but i'll be blatant it's awful check out the new to graff thread
drop all arrows an go simple
fathem, lose arrows, learn about lettering/bars, go simple.
anyways
crits, should i develop a style yet or stick to writing basic letters...either way im staying simple until i get basics...when should i develop a throw?
by the way i know i fucked up on second w bad and s is a lil big and comp...
snaw stick to basics, you're improving though.
disclaimer: i do not commit any illegal acts regardless to anything that i post
If your just starting try to start out simple, i like your style so far, just work on your tag its a little sloppy.
Snaw- ill help you out and give you advice this weekend or later but so far so guud.
Last edited by Gam; 09-29-2009 at 05:22 PM. Reason: Spelling
This page makes me cry.
? are badness dont amaze u?
It amazes me as much as your grammar does.
critssss
well, i kinda thought thats the feedback id get...just figured id give it a shot. thanks for the help, ill be postin in a while for more help.
Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.
OH and gam, thx for at least being respectful....hope that youll help me out a little more in the futuer?
Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.
Dont worry about it, just keep trying, remeber you cant get worse if you practice. Just keep posting your stuff.
i tried hard. i posted in intermediate but i feel like it's in between here and there.
disclaimer: i do not commit any illegal acts regardless to anything that i post
Sir go way simpler. The S on the first one is hurtin. it gets way too skinny in the middle.
Gam use bars to make your letters. They go from really skinny to really fat. and i can tell you didnt use bars for your letter structure.
Fathem, what mostly everyone says, go simpler and start off really basic. your lines are also a bit sketchy and choppy. Someone told me to use your wrist as a hinge to draw cleaner and straighter lines.
Snaw you're really working on it a low eh? Glad to see you keep trying over and over. But you should fatten up the S
keep it up
gam- use bars, and cover up some white space, and lurk some threads to get leter structure inspiration keep it simple though
dude that is raw seriously... don't post in this thread lmao... that is pretty tight.
i tried hard. i posted in intermediate but i feel like it's in between here and there.
I suck with simples. >.>!
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Tag, feedback please!
Ok, so I've worked on it for a while, I think this is an improvement...but ill see what you guys have to say...
Last edited by <<Fathem>>; 09-30-2009 at 12:30 AM.
Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.
dude write straight letters same size write your name over and over until u get a style developing.
suparjafar: yeah, thats what i did for the past like hour haha....ok, so basicly your sayin that my letters should be an equal size to make this look better? And as for the style, whats making it look like, well there isnt any? (in your opinion)
Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.
for now, yeah and i really dont get the second part..lol but im gonna guess you mean developing a handstyle..you just gotta keep practicing and writing it over and over and it'll start to tweak over time and just keep writing it and you'll develop a style i dont know how to explain it
I dont know too much about handstyles, but yours is decent. The A doesnt look too much like an A rather than a N. try to point the top of it more. Also the Arrow on the left is totally unnecessary.
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