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    Okay fuck the guys in the pieces thread no help form those jerks

    maybe someone here can help me

    I am Bowles Nuevitas.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gumOnShoe View Post
    cool, raise it just a tad bit more, also, how would i make it flow? not a wise ass comment, i'm just asking.
    well im no expert but i think the s is like long and skinny and the nor in the middle of the also skinny e is kinda dumbfounding. i dont know how to explain it. i feel like theyd be from two different pieces. maybe make the nor in the same style as the s,e

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    Quote Originally Posted by BigBlueViolence View Post
    Everything but Aenok is a bad deal.
    uhh i dont know what you mean lol

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    SHEM- keep it simple and straight, make all your letters the same size and dont worry about fill or background yet. get rid of that long ass tail on the S and get rid of the tail thing on the H and just keep it simple i think it would look 100X better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BowlesNuevitas View Post
    Okay fuck the guys in the pieces thread no help form those jerks

    maybe someone here can help me

    big boy thread. too good for us to crit.
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    lol
    "Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)

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    cleaned up some of the lines..
    "Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)

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    dont mind the writing, but heres another JOINS simple i did.


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    fuck the arrows. looks solid though

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    ARMEN- you need to make your letters the same thickness, and stick to caps, you got one lowercase and it looks wack, also your shaddow is all screwy, i know nobody likes to hear this, but you gotta keep it simple. it looks the most clean and it will eventually develop into something better you like a lot more.

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    Some pen shit I did in class

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    Head-I like the ins but the J n O need to go, try n make all your letters the same size n chill out on those dots on ur highlights.

    Sketching High..
    Last edited by RedEyes; 10-01-2009 at 03:35 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by headsick123 View Post
    ARMEN- you need to make your letters the same thickness, and stick to caps, you got one lowercase and it looks wack, also your shaddow is all screwy, i know nobody likes to hear this, but you gotta keep it simple. it looks the most clean and it will eventually develop into something better you like a lot more.
    'keep it simple..' that all i hear theres no description of exactly what i need to do...keep to simple could mean anything can you be more specific plz
    "Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)

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    What ever you were high on when you did that top piece,
    stop doing it forever, that shit can't be good for your health.

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    Quote Originally Posted by suparjafar View Post
    well im no expert but i think the s is like long and skinny and the nor in the middle of the also skinny e is kinda dumbfounding. i dont know how to explain it. i feel like theyd be from two different pieces. maybe make the nor in the same style as the s,e
    oh, i tried to make the S E biggest btw, so it'd be SnorE sort of, is that what you ment?
    GET YOUR BARS UP.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BigBlueViolence View Post
    What ever you were high on when you did that top piece,
    stop doing it forever, that shit can't be good for your health.
    Lol it was just an idea i had to put down on paper nothing special.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gumOnShoe View Post
    oh, i tried to make the S E biggest btw, so it'd be SnorE sort of, is that what you ment?
    yes

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    ra your throw is fine but that simp is out of whack.
    sico the bottom piece is better but the o on it is oddly shaped
    joins dont do that heart over your I unless your a girl or its for a girl and that random arrow on the o is terrible. lose it. and make all your letters the same size

    ive been fuckin around with my new name.....








    its amazing how you never notice how bad your shit is until you post it...crits??
    and i didnt ink any of these becasue im not very satisfied with any of them
    and this is my new method of sketching. fuck clean lnes for now
    Fuck off.

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    The second last one has the most potential.

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    ^ yess i dont like the way the s is shape 0.0
    valley of golden death

    aint done yet


 

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