first thing i noticed actually hahaOriginally Posted by PegCityBoy
first thing i noticed actually haha
Bumpin fo critsboom
umm practice simples 1st, get a steadier hand and the whole holloween theme is unnessary
I think youre guetting a little ahead of yourself there. the real simple Take are pretty nice tho.
take- yo i like the theme its pretty streight bro.but u need to work on ur style a little bit before u go all into it..just practice up and once u have it down bro, ull be streight..
pretty gnarley righttt.
i used it because i was lazy, i just wanted to do the 3d and the 3d filling? i guess? in that way to check out how it looks
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Lol thats a good excuse (not) if your lazy just draw block letter you little biter
and what exactly is wrong with the halloween one. Like the style could some1 tell me whats wrong with it. Most bars are pretty even except for those messed up with my unsteady hand. Maybe a too many add ons?
no flow, too many add-ons, i would mistake the pumpkin as an O
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and by flow you mean....(I'm not trying to be bitchy I am seriously just wondering)
took some advice
went simple
Not simple enough. Use bars you dont have letter structuretook some advice
went simple
I am gonna have to disagree.
Other than the weak F to L transition, the letters and everything look fine.
Don't fight against the simps!
OTFL i really like this
going simple was a great move - the fade is sweet
only thing is that O - its kind of irregular and the square additions don't really work. try keeping the ring at a generally equal width all around - maybe try a slightly warped O yet keep the width of it equal. feeling the T but its a little angular at the bottom.
TAKE - your doing ok
i think you need to sit down with 10 sheets of paper and a pencil and just practise letters. all the additions are nice but you need to concentrate on your letter structure for a while. bars, etc.
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thanks guys
eng-im not really experienced enough to find any faults in this but in my opinion the ZO and the ME dont really look like the same piece
the M needs to be a similar size to the other letters along with the E
black flag- could you give me an example of a good transition? do you mean the little inward bit in the bottom bar of the F? because i thought that looked wrong aswell
Last edited by -PeaR-; 10-10-2009 at 05:50 PM.
zome/eng: that Z looks nice man.. not bad at all.
trying different things. what ya reckon??
that fill is REALLY distracting..
GET YOUR BARS UP.
Lol zome I think you should take your on advise. I don't see too much letter structure on the e and I see random spots getting fatter. Keeps the bars consistent annd don't try to force a style that isn't there yet (yes ik that was what I was doing I realize that). Go a little simplerOTFL i really like this
going simple was a great move - the fade is sweet
only thing is that O - its kind of irregular and the square additions don't really work. try keeping the ring at a generally equal width all around - maybe try a slightly warped O yet keep the width of it equal. feeling the T but its a little angular at the bottom.
TAKE - your doing ok
i think you need to sit down with 10 sheets of paper and a pencil and just practise letters. all the additions are nice but you need to concentrate on your letter structure for a while. bars, etc.
PLEAE TAKE THE TIME TO GIVE ME SOME CRITS:
fair point but my structure is based from a core understanding of bars and the structure of letters. some others may agree with me when i say theres something that just works aesthetically about how i use the widths of my bars. it seems you are being quite defensive and thats understandable but if you're asking for crits then you're going to need to prepare for some negative criticism. going simpler for me would be a regression. i need to go from simples to something a little more jazzy
ill post up my old simples tomorrow
can you not see a bit of a difference?:
Last edited by eng; 10-10-2009 at 07:58 PM.
I don't write or condone graffiti or any other illegal activity, regardless of what i say in my posts.
everything i write and say is just my opinion. just because i think something doesnt mean its right. think about that when i give my crits. UK writers/NTB, safe
yeah i agree now i look at it again.. wont be trying that again haha.
anyway, something new. anybody have any suggestions on what i could do with the K. it just doesnt look right.
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