umm practice simples 1st, get a steadier hand and the whole holloween theme is unnessary
I think youre guetting a little ahead of yourself there. the real simple Take are pretty nice tho.
take- yo i like the theme its pretty streight bro.but u need to work on ur style a little bit before u go all into it..just practice up and once u have it down bro, ull be streight..
pretty gnarley righttt.
and what exactly is wrong with the halloween one. Like the style could some1 tell me whats wrong with it. Most bars are pretty even except for those messed up with my unsteady hand. Maybe a too many add ons?
no flow, too many add-ons, i would mistake the pumpkin as an O
and by flow you mean....(I'm not trying to be bitchy I am seriously just wondering)
took some advice
OTFL i really like this
going simple was a great move - the fade is sweet
only thing is that O - its kind of irregular and the square additions don't really work. try keeping the ring at a generally equal width all around - maybe try a slightly warped O yet keep the width of it equal. feeling the T but its a little angular at the bottom.
TAKE - your doing ok
i think you need to sit down with 10 sheets of paper and a pencil and just practise letters. all the additions are nice but you need to concentrate on your letter structure for a while. bars, etc.
PLEAE TAKE THE TIME TO GIVE ME SOME CRITS:
eng-im not really experienced enough to find any faults in this but in my opinion the ZO and the ME dont really look like the same piece
the M needs to be a similar size to the other letters along with the E
black flag- could you give me an example of a good transition? do you mean the little inward bit in the bottom bar of the F? because i thought that looked wrong aswell
Last edited by -PeaR-; 10-10-2009 at 06:50 PM.
zome/eng: that Z looks nice man.. not bad at all.
trying different things. what ya reckon??
that fill is REALLY distracting..
GET YOUR BARS UP.
ill post up my old simples tomorrow
can you not see a bit of a difference?:
Last edited by eng; 10-10-2009 at 08:58 PM.