double post, gah.. fuck ;p
use bars and ditch the add ons. It's lookin really toy so I would say go simple like pro did. and pro i agree keep the bars consistant width
had to fix the S it was bugging me.
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i like it sico, but i think extension off the o is kinda weird lookin. making it look like a weird q, but just my opinion
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Had some free time on my hands so I did this. I have no idea what the fill will be? Suggestions/recommendations welcome.
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peg city boy- im not feeling any of the A's and M's but looks like you
got the S and P's down pretty good.
..ignore the handstyle
meanmug: that is hot. im shit wit fills so im hesitating suggesting anything for u but shit i love the black and pink duo. shit is sexy.
I redid a previous two letter piece, here's before
I was told to lower the middle bar in the W to make it more legible
Fluffy- That shit is dirty, in a good way whats it say? KILS?
EAK- I that 3D type style are you from europe? Imma half to go with 7 8 and 10
Pro- looks like your bars are all different thicknesses, maybe try and make the loop in the P and R extend to the middle of the standing bar
Peg- I like how your letters are evolving just keep working with it don't rush it, it sacrifices quality. The bottom of the S on the last picture is sick-
Red- I like how the I has a little italic type bend in it- i think it would look a little more fluid if all the letters had the little bend SICO- the S and C look weird for some reason- it may be that the bar thickness changes in each letter
Stot- Not really feeling the style be I can't really anything to critique on, I mean your bars look pretty consistent throughout, your 3D looks fine, maybe if you get each letter to take up the same amount of space it might help with the sizing of the letters think of graph paper and put each letter into each of the boxes- try spending some time thinking of some connection possibilities- cause i think its seriously hurting
Mean- Looks good, I think more of those thick black parts in the piece might help it out - and sorry , not good with fills so can't really give any suggestions- maybe different tones of a blue??
Moon- Im diggin the O but not the rest of the letters, I think if you make the other letters look more like the O it would look straight like having a particular side of the letter thicker than another side .
meanmug: thats nice man..like the tribal face to.
id say you have to watch the size of the letters n the space between em, soa is alright , except your o is too big, plus thicker bars, huge extension, and so on but the biggest problem is the k , it stands out like a stranger, you overlapped the first three, why didint you overlap the last ?? as i said watch the spacing n size,also its legs just do not flow with the rest, you know.
Empty- You have too much of nothing going on thier....Focus more on Letters than Extentions....Trust me it work in the long run
Meanmug- Check out the Intermedaite Thread for more crits....I'd say thats clean and good looking enough to go thier.But you too have to whatch out for your random extentions