Blackbooks

[daoist]

double post, gah.. fuck ;p

[Graffyk]

cocacola- shits nice and clean, but you should start trying different styles. It's been the same kinda style so far, try expanding?

lime-i dunno. It's nice and clean and i like the karak on the second, but im not feeling the lines in random directions. It looks like you made it using MSpaint


Prose- that S looks a lot like a G, and that E doesnt match the rest of the letters. It needs some work, but i dont know much about throwies.

MarjLein- really liking it. keep it up

bump for crits



-Pro keep the width consistent; the bottom part of the curve of the P is way too skinny, and the O is crooked

[take2]

use bars and ditch the add ons. It's lookin really toy so I would say go simple like pro did. and pro i agree keep the bars consistant width

[BlacktodaFuture]

take2: god damn it work on your handstyles!
graffyk: go simple, very simple, like take did

[PegCityBoy]

first some crits:
ktrl - my advice is don't even colour your shit yet wait till you got structure down then start colouring.
smoothnuts - looks ill only thing i'd say is tweak the top left part of the P maybe.
cocacola - the char is sweet sick job of colouring only thing i don't like about it is it's not yours, also the piece itself is kinda weak mainly the t and the R. the red piece is good only letter i'd change up is the T.
take - it's comin along, also prob don't worry bout colouring yet
fetusr - f is good e's alright wtf happened to your t u's meh s's meh r sucks
funhousecast- im not diggin the whole splitting bar thing reminds me of a pull'n peel
b squared - i love it
soak - mehhh too much extensionage, yea thats a word look that shit up
weakfingers - not your best

now my shit

fuckin wit shit


simps



kinda simple not diggin the bottom of the s or the a


random ass S

i hate doing this but
bottom page bump

[RedEyes]

had to fix the S it was bugging me.

[suparjafar]

i like it sico, but i think extension off the o is kinda weird lookin. making it look like a weird q, but just my opinion

[BlacktodaFuture]

someone is getting better

[-Empty-Can-]

finished sketch

decided a character wont look well with this.


im not happy with the gap between the S and T. i tried to fill in the space but it didn't turn out well

bumpy for crits

weskor - shits sick. i love your 3d letters

Pro - try to keep all parts of your letter the same size

spam - your M looks alot bigger than your other letters. And if your going to slant your S and P then slant the other letters too.

[-Empty-Can-]

double post. sorry

[cocacola]

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[MeanMug]

Had some free time on my hands so I did this. I have no idea what the fill will be? Suggestions/recommendations welcome.

[moonboots]

peg city boy- im not feeling any of the A's and M's but looks like you
got the S and P's down pretty good.


..ignore the handstyle

[KRE1]

meanmug: that is hot. im shit wit fills so im hesitating suggesting anything for u but shit i love the black and pink duo. shit is sexy.

[PegCityBoy]

peg city boy- im not feeling any of the A's and M's but looks like you
got the S and P's down pretty good.

exactly how im feeling s and p both got a kind of curved feel to em where as A and M are more straight looks weird but i jus gotta work with it

[Shell703]

I redid a previous two letter piece, here's before



I was told to lower the middle bar in the W to make it more legible



Fluffy- That shit is dirty, in a good way whats it say? KILS?

EAK- I that 3D type style are you from europe? Imma half to go with 7 8 and 10

Pro- looks like your bars are all different thicknesses, maybe try and make the loop in the P and R extend to the middle of the standing bar

Peg- I like how your letters are evolving just keep working with it don't rush it, it sacrifices quality. The bottom of the S on the last picture is sick-

Red- I like how the I has a little italic type bend in it- i think it would look a little more fluid if all the letters had the little bend SICO- the S and C look weird for some reason- it may be that the bar thickness changes in each letter

Stot- Not really feeling the style be I can't really anything to critique on, I mean your bars look pretty consistent throughout, your 3D looks fine, maybe if you get each letter to take up the same amount of space it might help with the sizing of the letters think of graph paper and put each letter into each of the boxes- try spending some time thinking of some connection possibilities- cause i think its seriously hurting

Mean- Looks good, I think more of those thick black parts in the piece might help it out - and sorry , not good with fills so can't really give any suggestions- maybe different tones of a blue??

Moon- Im diggin the O but not the rest of the letters, I think if you make the other letters look more like the O it would look straight like having a particular side of the letter thicker than another side .

[soak]

meanmug: thats nice man..like the tribal face to.

[lord_plankton]

id say you have to watch the size of the letters n the space between em, soa is alright , except your o is too big, plus thicker bars, huge extension, and so on but the biggest problem is the k , it stands out like a stranger, you overlapped the first three, why didint you overlap the last ?? as i said watch the spacing n size,also its legs just do not flow with the rest, you know.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Empty- You have too much of nothing going on thier....Focus more on Letters than Extentions....Trust me it work in the long run

Meanmug- Check out the Intermedaite Thread for more crits....I'd say thats clean and good looking enough to go thier.But you too have to whatch out for your random extentions

[funhouseXcast]

soak, round out your O. And don't do big extensions on it. O is not a good extension letter.