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    Quote Originally Posted by <<Fathem>> View Post
    I filled my simp....crits?
    give em' to get em', man....
    GET YOUR BARS UP.

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    Weakfingers-Screw it. Keep it like that. I like it.

    Dunsy-sickness.

    B-it looks awesome. Uhhhh. Straighten up the fill on your 3d a bit?


    Its not quite finished or colored yet but should be today sometime.

    Crits?
    I write OHM and COLD.<br>


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    Quote Originally Posted by gumonshoe View Post
    give em' to get em', man....
    huh?:s
    Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.

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    Quote Originally Posted by c0ld View Post
    Weakfingers-Screw it. Keep it like that. I like it.

    Dunsy-sickness.

    B-it looks awesome. Uhhhh. Straighten up the fill on your 3d a bit?


    Its not quite finished or colored yet but should be today sometime.

    Crits?
    straighten up my fill? like just clean it up?
    Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.

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    give everyone crits, and you'll receive them in return.
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    Like make sure they are all straight. Honestly I just can't find much wrong with it lol.
    I write OHM and COLD.<br>


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    Quote Originally Posted by suparjafar View Post
    give everyone crits, and you'll receive them in return.
    supar-but as a toy, and still just learnin all techniques and shit, id be giving crits that in the end might not make sense. basicly saying how can i teach if i havent learned?

    cold-ok, ill redraw it and straigten up the 3d a bit. on the A bar extension the 3d is way off (i think). and the L's doesnt come to the edge the way it should.
    Last edited by <<Fathem>>; 10-25-2009 at 01:59 PM.
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    Oh I thought I was replying to b my bad. Ignore what I said fathem.

    No one asked if you were a toy or not. Its obvious you are or you wouldn't be in here asking for crits.

    Give em to get em. Its the way things work.

    Speaking of which.........
    I write OHM and COLD.<br>


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    Quote Originally Posted by c0ld View Post
    Oh I thought I was replying to b my bad. Ignore what I said fathem.

    No one asked if you were a toy or not. Its obvious you are or you wouldn't be in here asking for crits.

    Give em to get em. Its the way things work.

    Speaking of which.........
    oh haha. ok. well as i said, my crits arent going to be effective, know what i mean? cus like if i dont know the techniques and stuff to graff yet, i cant say something is good or not, just cus like if i say for ex that b's stuff is tight (wich it is) thats not completly right cus you guys can find stuff that needs improvement. but yeah. b's looks good, and i like the fill, and the blue 3d outlines.
    Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.

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    Just give em. It'll be up to the receiver whether or not they listen. You'll get the hang of it.
    I write OHM and COLD.<br>


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    Quote Originally Posted by gumOnShoe View Post
    Dunsy: Those characters looks really well done, that game that you posted a flick of was fun too. the N in Nova (last pic): the Right part of it is too thin. I'd also make the O a tad bigger. also, take out the thing off the V (top left), it looks it's an N with half of it tucked behind the O. try squishing you A closer to the NOV.
    you have that same problem w/ your throw up, too.

    on that Viewtiful Joe character, try making his left leg, and left arm a bit fatter, also, fix his crotch/belly, it looks like a fat person's. the Face was spot on, though. Not digging the Random extension one the O in ONE, take the thing off the N (top right), smooth out the top of the E also.

    now, crit me.
    Bump.
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    hey pear, i cant really tell if your piece says anything, but nonetheless good job with the shading!

    btw just a few scetches...trying to be simpler than before
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    i like the idea of the e stacked on the o but you still need to work on your letters. keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by c0ld View Post


    Its not quite finished or colored yet but should be today sometime.

    Crits?
    Bump
    I write OHM and COLD.<br>


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    thanks bread, i love having 2 n's too, im trying to figure out a cool way to mirror the piece, or put a syymetry line down the middle.

    btw when you say work on letters, do you mean just make them cleaner? just better looking?

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    both lol

    and try to make this look better and into a piece, mirror effect. . .

    something like that....make the e inside the o or something, i think that would look sweet if you could pull it off

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    yeah thats basically what im going for, but i might have to save that for later once im better.


    back to the drawing boards

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    once again reep, first ones lookin good.
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flawless Victory View Post
    you *****s need to stop trying to do 3D.

    Just assume that if you have to post in the toy thread, then you don't have the structure that it takes to pull off 3D.
    Contrary to this post.. 3D isn't difficult. By "Not doing something" you don't learn something. See, the statement I quoted I wanted to touch on. Practice makes perfect. And if you are going to practice you may as well go all or nothing. I'm not the type of person who believes statements like.. "If you can't read well.. you should stop reading for a bit."

    If you have to, make extremely simple letters.. and use a ruler to guide them to your vantage point. Then as your bend you letters keep the same idea, erasing the lines to the vantage point as you clean up your sketches. Or you could even practice making boxes, and other shapes and using the vantage point etc.. etc. Until you become more familiar with it. 3D essentially stays the same. However, objects.. letters and so forth are what makes it seem different. I'm sure if you searched on Google, it would give a nice descriptive set up. Or, check out art tutorials. They have break downs on 3D.


 

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