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    ^^^What that dude said



    Quote Originally Posted by Fetusr View Post
    Can I please get some decent crits on this?
    Your 3-d Is wrong its going to all the wrong directions keep it going to one point
    Last edited by weakfingers; 10-28-2009 at 03:26 PM.
    Quote Originally Posted by lord_plankton View Post
    even though i dont wanna admit but your shit is not as gay as it used to be but still gay.

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    Quote Originally Posted by take2 View Post
    Bafl follow your own crits. Learn letter structure, don't give the letter random bends and connect the middle bar of the b to the rest of the letter
    yeah lol, i have some that are further back in the forum that are just simps with full letter structure...but the bend in the f is because there was ALOT of dead space between it and the a....and the l is same thing, between it and f.
    Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.

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    Fetusr- your bars are pretty good

    crits?

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    Your N is way to big compared to the other letters, and it might just be me, but there is something strange about the 3d on the I in the first one.

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    hpir i saw the rest of those u was working on i think that super simp that u did was legit. the bottom one that u posted rite here is pretty good imo tho i would either follow thru with the wavy shit or drop it... half nd half seems a lil goofy.

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    grin, are you gonna color that out? you have good 3d a balanced letters (besides n a little near the bottom right). color every piece, even if it is bad, pracctice is practice.

    a piece i did yesterday
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    For shits and giggles. Messin around all done during school.



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    diggin that second one take.

    neon... i dont want to be harsh but i would suggest that you rethink everything ur doing.

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    Crits?





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    take, the last one is fresh,

    iron, copy keyboard letters and watch others so you know what bends what ways and what doesn't.

    Quote Originally Posted by Backalley Abortion Doctor View Post
    I fucking hate black people.
    disclaimer: i do not commit any illegal acts regardless to anything that i post

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    take, the last one is fresh,

    iron, copy keyboard letters and watch others so you know what bends what ways and what doesn't.

    Quote Originally Posted by Backalley Abortion Doctor View Post
    I fucking hate black people.
    disclaimer: i do not commit any illegal acts regardless to anything that i post

  12. #94472

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    try at a new style of peice i know its sloppy i had no thin black marker
    [IMG][/IMG]

  13. #94473

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    try at a new style of peice i know its sloppy i had no thin black marker
    [IMG][/IMG]

  14. #94474

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    double post my bad....

  15. #94475

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    Finished! I messed up on the yellow back graound thing. but w/e. crits???

    Sinkilla. Dont make arrows from a bar itself and touch up on letter structure.

  16. #94476

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    take what kinda marker u use for the green up top and middle

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    prismas

  18. #94478

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    im loving that top green and i made a sketch in school same style i think better im just fillin it right now

  19. #94479

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    take i actually do like that, good job except a doesnt flow imo

    ceje go simple
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    [IMG][/IMG]
    pretty simple no?


 

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