Blackbooks

[PegCityBoy]

Pegcity- I like the first throwie simp. but fill the letters completly, might look that much nicer. the pencil simps are sick, although id loose the extension on the M, that makes it confusing on wether its an M or W.

yea i tried but the the empty space left between the the A and M needs to be filled somehow an that seems to do it

also loose the unnecessary curves, don't force flow. and make the bars on your B connect so it's not like a 13.

[suparjafar]

way better bafl. fix that b

[Inlyn08]

i love how neither me, nor flawless victory give a fuck about anything that happens here, and all you fucks are all worked up about it. keep going, it just gives us shit to talk about when we're out taggin' shit up.

Cool story bro.
LOL..

[zennegen]

your a winner.

[Inlyn08]

your a winner.

Glad you think so. I hope you "talk about me" next you're out taggin'..
LOL.

But seriously.. If you didn't give a fuck, you wouldn't have said shit in the first place. Follow?
Now we should probably stop wasting everyone's time with our asshole banter.

[zennegen]

i just think it's funny, personally. i really don't care about it, seeing how it is the internet after all.

[funhouseXcast]

how about you fucking cocksuckers take this shit to the battle thread so you can get off eachothers god damn dicks and let the whole purpose of this website (that would be graffiti) decide who's a faggot and who's not.

[zennegen]

hahahaha

[<<Fathem>>]

way better bafl. fix that b

yea i tried but the the empty space left between the the A and M needs to be filled somehow an that seems to do it
and make the bars on your B connect so it's not like a 13.

Ok so I fixed the B...now B not 13....also tighten the letters a bit closer. I kinda f'd the 3d, started to ouline with a "gel pen" but it didnt write over shit, then when i tried my classic silver, it just got fucked. not to mention the white out L...this ones just shit lmao. anyway, could i get some crits please?

[-Empty-Can-]

Your 3D needs alot of work. Make the top bar of your F a little shorter and bring your L closer. Keep working on your letters.

[Graffyk]

i usually can't fit my Es... Is that the right symbol above the A for a long a?

armen-you're putting some effort into your pieces, coloring them and all, keep it up. Make your Rs look more like Rs instead of A, and the 3D is a little messed up.

scameretolme-i like the fill, but im not sure what it says. it looks nice, but i can't tell if it's crappy letter structure, or if it's actually good..still working on reading graffiti. Try going to the intermediate and see what people say there.

middle of argument bump


bafl, i agree, much better. but you need to work on the 3D part. the shadow on the B isn't connected well to the letter, and overall a lot of parts are missing. the way i look at what parts need the 3d is you need to keep it consisitent. like think the shadow will be going to the bottom left, so a shadow belongs anywhere to the bottom of the letter and to the left of the figure. it really helps. keep practicing

[Flawless Victory]

i love how neither me, nor flawless victory give a fuck about anything that happens here, and all you fucks are all worked up about it. keep going, it just gives us shit to talk about when we're out taggin' shit up.

Dawg,
you just said "taggin' shit up"

[Keso]

your a winner.

Oh goddamn it! It's not that hard to put a god forsaken E at the end of you're! Which means you are. You're a winner. Ass.

[<<Fathem>>]

bafl, i agree, much better. but you need to work on the 3D part. the shadow on the B isn't connected well to the letter, and overall a lot of parts are missing. the way i look at what parts need the 3d is you need to keep it consisitent. like think the shadow will be going to the bottom left, so a shadow belongs anywhere to the bottom of the letter and to the left of the figure. it really helps. keep practicing

Your 3D needs alot of work. Make the top bar of your F a little shorter and bring your L closer. Keep working on your letters.

Ok, letters closer again, umm F bar shortened, (i like it shorter). and i shadowed this using the left side, so everything on the left side. (forgot a bar). also now my bars are getting inconsitent sizing(going too fast)..so im prob done for the night, but could i get some crits on this simp?

[suparjafar]

Dawg,
you just said "taggin' shit up"

ily.

[zennegen]

why did you post a cartoon version of empty can? come on, man.

[Keso]

why did you post a cartoon version of empty can? come on, man.

Excuse me Mr. Faggot,

We would would all greatly appreciate it if you would stop with your unintelligent comments because they are most certainly not amusing me nor anyone else. Battle or nothing. You are indeed very correct about this being the Internet. I would think that a Detroit rat didn't know what the internet was! Also you started all of this by talking shit. In conclusion I would like to kindly say shut the fuck up, so we can end this.

Thank you,

Mr. Keso2

[Flawless Victory]

BAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWW

NlGGA, YOU MAD.

[Keso]

NlGGA, YOU MAD.

pretty lulzy. I'll give you that.

[zennegen]

dear ms. keso2, i would (would) like to inform you that saying "would would" in a statement that attempts to make you look somewhat intelligent makes you sound like you have no grammatical skills and/or sentence structure. furthermore, your ignorant comments about me living in detroit are not amusing, and make you look even more ignorant than before.

thank you,
Zennegen.