Pinkie freestyle messaround
Pinkie freestyle messaround
Take-Work on maken your letters flow n not so stiff.
i dont really like that last one take, to thin imo but the others are pretty sweet, like graffyk said "but im not really liking the middle part of the e. it's barely connected."
Fuck.
ok yeah, change the m then i read it. i just looked at it for a bit.Originally Posted by provinT13
Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.
Peace to Dawzr
maybe make those two o's a u, like snuz. lol but it looks good, z is a little fat compared to the s
i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.
Dark-thats a waist of paper and a post, try actually sketching before you even begin to flick ur shit.
take- Id say A structure, either then that, diggin the simps.
sico- ill man. just nice.
gum on shoe- lose the fancy star, shove the letters overr, so they are inbetween but underneth. SNO...kinda thing.
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Dark-try bigger?
Graffyk- just not feelin that random bottom right extension 3d type thing, either then that it looks good on my end.
Hepatitis- letter structure, and size consistency.
And could i please get some crits on this?
Last edited by <<Fathem>>; 10-28-2009 at 01:12 AM.
Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.
Bafl follow your own crits. Learn letter structure, don't give the letter random bends and connect the middle bar of the b to the rest of the letter
Graffyk I think you're getting ahead of yourself
Redeyes I like it, espically how the S and the C go together from top to bottom, and the i and o go together.
Fathem Listen to take2
Bring the middle bar of the e in farther and mess with the s cus i'm not really diggin it
Can I please get some decent crits on this?
the top left thing on the f is kinda dum. And bottom of the e is wierd. Cool 3d. Pretty nice simple
If you ask me, the 3d makes no sense. All your letters need some work. The bottom of the F needs to be longer, and yeah take that extension off. Bend the vertical bar of the T to make it flow with the rest of your letters. It looks out of place. The extension of the horizontal bar on your U is unnecessary. The S needs to be more like an S and less like a backward Z. The R is nice, but the top could be better. If you ask me, and again this is my opinion, you are cutting the end of the bars too much. The piece just doesn't flow in general.
Last edited by boodah; 10-28-2009 at 03:38 PM.
^^^What that dude said
Your 3-d Is wrong its going to all the wrong directions keep it going to one point
Last edited by weakfingers; 10-28-2009 at 03:26 PM.
yeah lol, i have some that are further back in the forum that are just simps with full letter structure...but the bend in the f is because there was ALOT of dead space between it and the a....and the l is same thing, between it and f.
Secret to gettin away everytime, Parkour.
Fetusr- your bars are pretty good
crits?
Your N is way to big compared to the other letters, and it might just be me, but there is something strange about the 3d on the I in the first one.
hpir i saw the rest of those u was working on i think that super simp that u did was legit. the bottom one that u posted rite here is pretty good imo tho i would either follow thru with the wavy shit or drop it... half nd half seems a lil goofy.
grin, are you gonna color that out? you have good 3d a balanced letters (besides n a little near the bottom right). color every piece, even if it is bad, pracctice is practice.
a piece i did yesterday
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