Last edited by take2; 10-31-2009 at 09:38 AM.
yo rinse that shit clean i would change the n cus it looks like an H
crits on this?
i changed my name... once more. to Reatd ( ree.ated)
Rines-work on maken all ur bars straight, like with the E i suggest drawing it out with the over lap n then erase.
Coca-im digging everything but the D and if ur ganna do a spade on the T make it a whole spade.
u repin the Vandal SKuad?
just cuza the sketch on the page b4 =P
what do you mean by vandal squad?
i part of vandal skuad killers of thats what you're talking about?
minute quick shit im going simple again im tird of fuxs tellin me to slow down
Last edited by cocacola; 10-31-2009 at 12:16 PM.
Why are you guys spelling Squad with a K?
and you don't really write Pear, do you?
Thanks for the crits. RedEyes, the reason that the bottom of my doesn't match up is becasue there is supposed to be an add-on at tthe bottom but the S covers it up, like so.
Coca-looks dope, the only thing I'm not a huge fan of is the top of the E
Last edited by Rin5e; 10-31-2009 at 12:24 PM.
we speel it anyway it sounds the same , Vandul skuad killahs, vandal squad killers etc
did these on my desk mat. Got sketchy cus pencil wouldnt show up soo I had to freestyle it:P
everything but k is good
i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.
Rinse: I like everything about it other than the diagonal bar on the N- fix that up so that it doesn't look like an H in the least. Also, I wouldn't overlap your drop shadow on each letter like that. Your I looks a bit plain, but that's no biggy really.
Cocacola: Good to see you're going back to basics because I think on some of yours, you were kinking the letters a bit too much and it made the pieces as a whole look bad, but reworking your letters will correct that. Keep up those simps man.
Take: I don't really like your first one at all because the colors and designs take away from the letters that aren't that strong in the first place. Your E especially. On the second one, I like your T and E, but I could hardly read the a and the K still doesn't look like a K to me... I know they were freestyles, but you want crits, right? Lol.
Halloween bic pen freestyle out of boredom at work (sorry for the crappy pic):
halloween - shit is freshhh
Peace to Dawzr
Bsquared, diggin it except that little thing on your N. Seems outta place on that letter.
Peace to Dawzr
Dark, nice simp.
Rough sketch, need to tweak letters and work on proportions.
nice simp but i dont think that N is guna work
Agreed on the N. Just keep working your shit, its coming. maybe don't post such a huge picture?
Long day/night, stopped a person from running right into traffic, crazy. Anyways came home drew this, I usually screw things up after this so figured I'd post now