stot stop being so boxy give it some pizas and redeyes thats all my old shit
stot stop being so boxy give it some pizas and redeyes thats all my old shit
An exchange for SNORE, ran out of room for the E.
crits?
All it is is a sheet of computer paper folded in half. It's not as big as you think.Originally Posted by RedEyes
"Misconceptions and assumptions are the breeding ground for ignorance"
Freestyle in math class.Nothin tah crit on this page
looks sooooooo much better in person
bump
take- that bar on the E looks really boxy. The E doesnt really fit with the letters because its fat while the others are skinnier and im not too fond of that face
Last edited by -Empty-Can-; 11-18-2009 at 04:20 PM.
"Misconceptions and assumptions are the breeding ground for ignorance"
stot, that is no where near the level of simple you should be at. if you were to handle simples first, maybe, just maybe, you could pull off some extensions. don't act like you can skip steps and not use crits and expect to get any better.
Are you the same Sevek from Jax who's down with those 211 fags?ve been doing graff for about a year now i was the only decent one i knew til now but i just kinda played with the way i would make the letter take the s i had so many diffrent s
such as
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and this is my newest s lol
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904.
Stot- it seems like you're incapable of listening to people, despite being told over and over and over and over and over, therefore it's not worth critting you, if it's just gonna be wasted.
skore- good that you're sticking with the simples, keep playing with 'em, forget all that crazy shit on the forcefield and stuff, keep perfecting simps and you'll progress nicely.
snore- looks halfway between a throwie and a simp and for that reason I don't like it.
The best thing anyone on here can do style-wise is leave.
If it don't look good in black and white, it don't look good.
well, i was bored so i drew some shit up, and even though i hate posting pictures on BS, i figured i would anyway. i'm pretty confident that i advanced since the last shit i've posted.
here ya go.
double post, sorry.
i'm only feelin the R on the last one, dude. i hate that computer made shit, for real. it would look much better hand drawn.
coke~ that otpk is dope
zennegen~ not bad work on ballence .. i like the colors on that tan one but the space in the end fucks up the flow imo
stot~ keep your bars consistent .. make that s a little more on top of itself (like right now the bottom is to long)
take2~ not bad for a freestyle... the "s" is a little thin compared to the rest of the letters and the bottom bar of the "e" should have a little curve imo
Anything posted on this forum is not mine all of the pictures are stolen even those i claim to be mine i am not responsible for and i do not condone illegal graffiti.
shit sorry dp
Last edited by AsherOner; 11-18-2009 at 06:29 PM. Reason: double post
Anything posted on this forum is not mine all of the pictures are stolen even those i claim to be mine i am not responsible for and i do not condone illegal graffiti.
oops no ive never gotten up with the name sevek just sessor is the only name then i got caught im just hitting the books then ima rise up
reatzy, your blue one, i dont like the r or y, but you always choose good looking colors.
i wish i had more than sharpies and colored pencils lol...not too much color selection i got now (i know thats not what i need to focus on though)
lol its on graffiti studio, so maybe thats why my letters suck haha, control is fuckin hard , gota steadily make your lines , oh and asheroner i didnt do the otpk one, 2TL crew's member made it
asher, you mean balance? and yeah, i know that one fucks it up, it's just that i write EN1 and i wanted to put a one on there somewhere, haha.
thanks for the crits either way.
neon, keep your proportions in check, don't worry about colors and fills. try using lowercase N's, maybe it'll work better for you.
nvm otpk is a crew, nvm bout the 2TL
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