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    Quote Originally Posted by zaco View Post
    yo zen which s, all of them?
    last one. sorry about that.

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    witty remark.
    Last edited by zennegen; 12-16-2009 at 08:51 PM.

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    Crits:
    Kan: I don't like any of it. I don't like your name either.
    Supa: Those handstyles are hurting. Like, terminal illness pain hurting. and that thing simpow(simp/throw) at the bottom has potential, but needs a lot of work. A lot.
    Vega: BAR. THICKNESS. watch it. Has potential. Keep practicing.
    No More Weekly Toy Battles.

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    fuck shit up.

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    Finally, some god damn crits lol. Yeah, I know, it was just a rough sketch. When I try, I can make the bars the same thickness, I'm just trying to find where I can make shit bend, add extensions, etc, to make my letters more piece-like, if you will. Also, I'm trying to get down the flow, since I suck mad hard when transferring to a wall.

    Anyway, the fills clean, 3D's a bit short in some places, but looks good overall.
    The forests of Timber have changed.
    But the owls are still around.
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    fuck crunk fuck hiphop its all about the underground hiphop mainstream can suck my dick

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    http://s563.photobucket.com/albums/s...nt=Photo31.jpg

    do you really think the hand is that bad? its pretty simple, straight forward...

    also in resist, dont hide the e so much
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    yeah, that's the thing I hated about the R.
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    super i dont like u R its the left leg and the top goes forward idk why and i dont like the scriblles in the S

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    talking about the tag. ignore that shitty throw
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    zennegen- all beef aside i'll give you some crits. I have no idea what the fuck is up with the first one. On the 2nd the zennegen at the bottom is nice. On the 3rd, your E covers up too much of your N

    super- try to make your R not stick out as much

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    its just a simple tag lol nice and clean

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    diff handie you like?

    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    Change up that R!

    EDIT: I prefer the fat little one. (TWSS..)
    Last edited by CrustOner; 12-16-2009 at 09:25 PM.
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    Lol that EXACTLY how I draw my R's.

    and toy tags thread...

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    i fucking suck at throws. that roes hand is tight in my opinion.

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    crustoner- work on your letter overlapping. make the letters more distinct. maybe a different color scheme would help.

    zen-the first few are bad. the last one has the most potential. the best thing i can tell you is to keep it simple til you get a little better letter structure.

    Slek- dont extend the bottom bars of your L and E. and i wouldnt have your L overlap your S quite so much. your e and k are solid looking letters though.. and dope fill.

    2 from tonight.. havnt been on here in a while.



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    ^ unavailafail.

    Roes - I like the E, work on the R.
    Slek - I don't like how the S overlaps.
    Zen - Last one is best, practice it.

    Just doing some tags. Tried out new stuff, I normally just do the super simple shit:


    Then I tried changing up my throw (the A specifically):
    Last edited by Fury; 12-17-2009 at 12:24 AM.
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    vega for your tag make your a lower case like in the style your throw is instead of a regularly drawn lower case a
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    It just looks way weird that way, I've tried. Thanks for the feedback though
    The forests of Timber have changed.
    But the owls are still around.
    Quote Originally Posted by GeSuS_KRiST View Post
    fuck crunk fuck hiphop its all about the underground hiphop mainstream can suck my dick


 

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