Blackbooks

[RedEyes]

bel thats decent keep working with it keep the 29.

[LeaksOne]

fix the 9 on the 29. make it as steezy as the 2 so people dont mistake it as a q

[trashpickaflash]

This is my first ever post on here.

Personal critiques:
-Should have kept the G curving at the top.
-Maybe shouldn't have included that handle on the A.

Lemme know what ya think.

[CrustOner]

Try drawing whole letters. And when you're drawing holes in your letters (R and A), follow the bars you used to make them.

and don't overlap so much. and if that's an Anarchy sign on your I, I'd recommend against doing that ever again. Welcome to Bombingscience.

[trashpickaflash]

and if that's an Anarchy sign on your I, I'd recommend against doing that ever again. Welcome to Bombingscience.

Haha. This forum isn't one to bring personal politics into?

And is that an a//political icon you got? (not trying to be sarcastic)

Thanks for the advice.

[MasterStainers]

Tried to animate it abit, let me know if its retarded.

[ChadWarden]

not retarded.

[emel3]

Peee

esss


triplee!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MasterStainers]

Peee

esss


triplee!!!!!!!!!!!!

You speaking in code?

[dayda187]

Tried to animate it abit, let me know if its retarded.

yo that shit has better structure then most. it looks good. i think u should ad some bar extensions on it and mabe an bar arrow her and there and some fillers. then bring the 3d to the center and that shit would look tight

[BlacktodaFuture]

He only used 2 colors, black and red.
I fail to see how a color wheel is necessary.
Flames are pretty ghey, though.

it was meant for Akson. when i posted can smasher's post wasnt there.

[Mr yarbles]

yo that shit has better structure then most. it looks good. i think u should ad some bar extensions on it and mabe an bar arrow her and there and some fillers. then bring the 3d to the center and that shit would look tight

That structure is terrible dude.

[trashpickaflash]

it was meant for Akson. when i posted can smasher's post wasnt there.

Which color combo are you referring to?

[BlacktodaFuture]

he tried to blend red and blue even though they are not analogous

[trashpickaflash]

he tried to blend red and blue even though they are not analogous

Looks orange to me. I think the colors just aren't coming out too well in the pic.

[jizmobeel]

crits?http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...1&d=1265597411

[615Bomber]

first colored sketch

please critique as much as you can

[trashpickaflash]

After taking some advice...

Crits please?

[sodi]

615bomber - Put the talking marks on the left, more to the right. Also Keep working on your letters and try outlining on the purple.

trashpickaflash - I love the simplicity, keep it up.

[MasterStainers]

yo that shit has better structure then most. it looks good. i think u should ad some bar extensions on it and mabe an bar arrow her and there and some fillers. then bring the 3d to the center and that shit would look tight

Thanks man, as for the extensions i see that as higher order shit and find it difficult not to fuck the thing up! I'm waiting on some prismas for the fill.

That structure is terrible dude.

In what way?