i forgot this one
i forgot this one
"If you even dream of beating me you'd better wake up and apologize." -Muhammad Ali
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dr. sprai - I think the first ones a bit to busy. and the 3D is fucked up on your 3rd piece. The 3d on your last one is tight tho, thats probably my favourite one.
rin5e - drop shadow needs work, and maybe the are could use abit of tweaking.
asker - the throws good i think but the K should fit the style more maybe have a more circular part somewhere as all your other letters do.
White lighters are bad luck!
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
Simples simples simples
yeah man like i said before. go simpler. you're trying to bend bars but you dont have enough experience to know where and how to bend the bars yet. go simple, learn the structure and the rest will fall into place.
edit* pic of my exchange with virus for talking
Last edited by AteskOne; 02-14-2010 at 08:37 PM.
Originally Posted by Vagrant
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Abort. Bar letters first.
Yo guys I didn't get a lot of crits on these. Let me know what you think.
CWK
Bizer's pretty dope if you ask me.
· ABN · ADC ·
Yooo.
Been awhile since I've been here.
Random shit.
hey guys miss me much
WOW its been a while, latest works. atmos - your simples work is probs the best, but keep your bars the same width - you have done this in your inked pieces. plus dont add pointless extensions ask your self why you have done that. and if it works. charaks are kool thou. props for them.
Snap. that throw is dope. put that shit up on a wall and link me it.
Keso - simples.
dr. simples. keyboard use the other thread for help.
ateskone - wow you have improved that shit looks like its coming off the page. means that you have done the shadow well.
justretrosd.deviantart.com
WOW its been a while, latest works. atmos - your simples work is probs the best, but keep your bars the same width - you have done this in your inked pieces. plus dont add pointless extensions ask your self why you have done that. and if it works. charaks are kool thou. props for them.
Snap. that throw is dope. put that shit up on a wall and link me it.
Keso - simples.
dr. simples. keyboard use the other thread for help.
ateskone - wow you have improved that shit looks like its coming off the page. means that you have done the shadow well.
justretrosd.deviantart.com
did this kid really make ANOTHER account? you're a fool.
wow shamee's back haha. thanks man good to see an old head posting again. looks like you've improved too. lets see a full piece.
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damn this is gorgeous. solid style solid coloring and the drop shadow is amazing. this shit pops out. good shit mayneyeah man like i said before. go simpler. you're trying to bend bars but you dont have enough experience to know where and how to bend the bars yet. go simple, learn the structure and the rest will fall into place.
edit* pic of my exchange with virus for talking
Fuck off.
yo leaks howd u make that avatar?
CWK
Quick pencil sketch, yes I bit on the s and r sum, but I'm workin on changing it up
Regardless of what I post I don't condone any illegal graffiti.
lookin good. but on that B connect the middle bar.Quick pencil sketch, yes I bit on the s and r sum, but I'm workin on changing it up
CWK
you can definitely tell that S was bit. its like 10 times better than any of the other letters. idk the piece doesnt really flow either. the OMB and E are all different styles. choose a style and stick to it.
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Learn to adjust your other letters to fit that S.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
i was tryin to do that... any ideas?
Regardless of what I post I don't condone any illegal graffiti.
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