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    woner can u post some white/black outlines? just straight up no color lol i cant really crit unless i can only see the letter strutture

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    Quote Originally Posted by nmcontrol View Post
    couple pen sketches. nothing special
    [IMG][/IMG][IMG][/IMG]

    Avil that simple is working real well for you.
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    for me thats special. how did that come to you? did it just randomly come to you or does it come deeply from your imagination?

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    that second ballpoint's lookin pretty clean!






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    that second ballpoint's lookin pretty clean!






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    NM- them ball points are very clean, i wanna see more from u!

    bigel- im reallly diggin the Y at the end of joey. i dont like the hoops in the chars ears but only cuz i worked with a bitch that had thos for 2 years and she was all emo and shit, never liked them since. lol
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    crits? i need an idea for 3d too not sure how to approach this one.. new word.
    bummpp? ive alredy got a drop shadow on the left i just need some pointers so the next one turns out even better
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    I don't think you need crit's, the lettering is PERFECT. well thats just in my opinon. If you need drop shadow then it's kinda like using a vanishing point but making it a drop shadow.

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    Theres some quality material on this page- bump-

    NM- Im diggin the second one- real clean, I like the nice blend of letters with straight lines along side letters with curved lines- purple doesnt hurt either

    BIGel- I'm feeling everything, style mostly- (BIG-L RIP) I like how you used the thick lines and mixed in the really thin lines throughout all the images. Don't know why you're in the toy forum actually.

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    Theres some quality material on this page- bump-

    NM- Im diggin the second one- real clean, I like the nice blend of letters with straight lines along side letters with curved lines- purple doesnt hurt either

    BIGel- I'm feeling everything, style mostly- (BIG-L RIP) I like how you used the thick lines and mixed in the really thin lines throughout all the images. Don't know why you're in the toy forum actually.

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    Finished this for the production.

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    ^nice, only thing i dont like is the curve in the k. doesnt really fit in

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    most recent sketch. tried to make it a alts euro style.

    I think there's a lot of flaws. The letters get smaller towards the back. The second T is out of proportion and there's too much empty space between the r and t

    siko-those extensions on the S need reworking. and that leg on the K seems to get smaller toward the bottom.
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    just a simple havent been on here in a while the stot looks good but kick out the R kinda ruined i think
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    Try to keep the slants in your letters consistent.

    I'm not sure about that R yet. I need something to take the place between the T and R. Looks really open.

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    DONT MIND THE ARROWS , PLEASE CRIT THE REST


    Sin - Nice
    Empty can - maybe work on your stucture
    Redeyes - nice simple, cant go wrong with that
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    lol first off just lose arrorws
    and it looks nice for your style you guys need a better R the R is the only letter that doesnt fit
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    CRITS:

    BRAG- Get rid of the shit in the middle of it, just keep it clean and finish your letters completely i think it would look much better.

    STOT- its lookin good. clean it up a bit, make the bottom of the T the same thickness for both of them and idk if im likin that 8 ball very much, but finish it out i wanna see what you do with it.

    SICKO- It looks good, i agree with Res4 tho, work on the K a bit. the curved down extension just looks out of place..



    just some quick bombs i did in class today. i keep forgetting that its not 2009 anymore ahah.

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Empty-Can- View Post
    Try to keep the slants in your letters consistent.

    I'm not sure about that R yet. I need something to take the place between the T and R. Looks really open.
    What T are you talking about?
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    bigel - dope as always

    siko - dont like that thing sticking out the o and u should try doing a new type of k

    kew - go simple

    coca - nice as usual

    woony - the 2nd one is alright,just take away that wack fill,black n white would have looked better

    roes - fix the top part of your s

    nicole - there is some flaws but it looks good

    avil - looks solid

    nmcontrol - 2nd one i like

    stot - not fealing the t's ,especially the left one..looks much better than what u were doing before

    sin - im acctualy fealing that,just fix that a touching itself

    rosie - dont like how the e is so big and fix that s,everythign else looks tight

    reset - it would be easier to crit if you didnt do arrows and colors,just go black and white..the r and t need the most work..your sig is hilarious








    Last edited by FlippingChickens; 03-16-2010 at 05:58 PM.

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    i see some nice stuff at the top of this page =D
    havent been on long ,

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    i see some nice stuff at the top of this page =D
    havent been on long ,


 

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